Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and complete the idea. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or example. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use linking words if you add a detail.

Ví dụ: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often wear jeans and a hoodie when I go out with friends because they are practical and low-maintenance.

Gợi ý: Remove hesitations and repetition, and use linking words to make the answer coherent. Start with a clear preference, give two concise reasons, then provide one short example. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., practical, low-maintenance, breathable).

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are practical and low-maintenance. For instance, I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt when I meet friends, as they allow me to move freely and don't need special care.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give a specific reason or situation without repeating phrases. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated 'for example'. One or two supporting details suffice.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I wear T-shirts a lot in hot weather because they are breathable and comfortable. I also choose T-shirts when I'm tired or stressed because they feel relaxing and easy to wear.

Gợi ý: Clarify the contradiction and remove hesitations. If you mean you take a long time because you are picky, say that clearly and give a concise reason. Keep sentences logical and avoid unclear phrases like 'That's why I have lots of time.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I'm picky and want to make sure my outfit looks right. For example, I usually try several combinations before leaving for work or an event.

× I prefer casual clothes because it is so convenient to wear, and it is.

✓ I prefer casual clothes because they are so convenient to wear.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'casual clothes' (plural). Use the plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Replace 'and it is' with nothing as it is redundant. Suggestion: match pronouns and verbs to the noun number and remove unnecessary repetition.

× I prefer to very comfortable and casual clothes because they are so because they are so convenient clothes and umm and practical for everyday activities.

✓ I prefer very comfortable, casual clothes because they are convenient and practical for everyday activities.

The original has redundant words ('to', repeated 'because they are so'), inconsistent quantifier/structure and extra filler. Remove the unnecessary 'to' before adjectives, delete repetition, and place adjectives in correct order. Suggestion: say 'prefer very comfortable, casual clothes' and avoid repeating 'because'.

× For example, I usually wear jeans and T-shirt when I go out with friends because they let me easily, move easily and don't require much care.

✓ For example, I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt when I go out with friends because they let me move easily and don't require much care.

Adverb 'easily' was split by a comma and misplaced; 'move easily' should remain together. Also article 'a' is missing before 'T-shirt'. Remove the extra comma. Suggestion: keep adverb next to verb and include necessary articles.

× Yes, definitely. I like to wear T-shirts, especially in hot days.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like to wear T-shirts, especially on hot days.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'days' when talking about weather; use 'on hot days'. Also plural 'T-shirts' is fine. Suggestion: use 'on' for specific days or occasions ('on hot days').

× Uh, for example, when, for example, when I'm tired or when I'm stressed, I always try to wear a T-shirt.

✓ For example, when I'm tired or stressed, I always try to wear a T-shirt.

The sentence contains unnecessary repetition ('for example' and repeated 'when'). Simplify by using a single 'for example' and list conditions concisely. Suggestion: avoid repeating phrases and streamline structure.

× Yes, because, umm, because I am an impatient person in my opinion.

✓ Yes, because I am an impatient person in my opinion.

The conjunction 'because' is repeated unnecessarily and filler 'umm' should be omitted in writing. Use a single 'because'. Suggestion: remove redundant conjunctions and fillers.

× So I need a lot of time to pick an outfit. That's why I have lots of time.

✓ So I need a lot of time to pick an outfit. That's why it takes me a long time.

The second sentence 'That's why I have lots of time' is awkward and likely unintended. Express the cause-result clearly: 'That's why it takes me a long time' or 'That's why choosing clothes takes me a long time.' Suggestion: state the result in natural terms rather than literal 'have lots of time'.