Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 表現を自然にし、文法と語彙の誤りを直しましょう。具体的には動詞の時制・形（例：recovering→prefer）、冠詞や複数形の使い方、語順を修正します。また、話を一つのまとまった主張（topic sentence）にしてから、理由と具体例を短く付け加える練習をしてください。リンク表現（because, for example, when）を適切に使い、冗長表現を避けて最大5文以内に収めましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer printed or graphic T‑shirts because they can change my mood. For example, when I feel down, a bright or funny print usually cheers me up. So I often choose T‑shirts with bold designs to feel more positive.

Gợi ý: 質問には肯定だけでなく明確な主張を最初に述べ、その後に理由を簡潔に述べましょう。重複や意味の取りにくい表現（I wear comfortable with wearing）を避け、自然なフレーズ（easy to wear, easy to move）を使ってください。理由を一つか二つ具体的に示し、接続詞（because, so）でつなぎます。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they are easy to wear and allow me to move freely. At home I usually choose loose trousers and soft T‑shirts so I can relax and work comfortably.

Gợi ý: 回答を整理して、職業や理由をはっきり述べましょう。誤った語彙（gravity→graphic）や文のつなぎ方を直し、職業情報は1文で明確に述べてから、インスピレーションの源や具体的な活動（making original T‑shirts）を説明してください。接続詞（because, and, so）を使い過不足なく使い、5文以内にまとめます。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love wearing graphic T‑shirts because they make me feel happy and express my personality. I'm a graphic designer, so I'm inspired by graffiti and street art and I also design my own original T‑shirts.

Gợi ý: 時間や理由を具体的に、かつ自然な英語で述べる練習をしましょう。意味が不明瞭な表現（call the table to move my life）を避け、選ぶ際の考慮点（weather, occasion, comfort）を明確に述べること。数字を使って具体性を出し、接続語（because, for example, such as）で理由を繋ぎます。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually spend about 30 minutes choosing my clothes because I consider the weather and the occasion. For example, I check the forecast first and then pick something comfortable and appropriate for work or meetings.

× I recovering print T-shirts because it can change my mood.

✓ I like wearing printed T-shirts because they can change my mood.

The student used 'recovering' incorrectly; the intended meaning is a habitual preference ('like wearing'). Use 'like wearing' + noun. 'Print T-shirts' should be 'printed T-shirts'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirts' plural so 'they can' not 'it can'. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× You know when you are feeling down.

✓ You know when you are feeling down.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses present continuous appropriately to describe a current feeling or general condition.

× You can wear graphic T-shirts which wear lift your mood up.

✓ You can wear graphic T-shirts which lift your mood.

Redundant use of 'wear' after 'which' creates an incorrect relative clause. Use 'which lift your mood' where 'which' refers to 'graphic T-shirts'. Remove 'up' as it is unnecessary; 'lift your mood' is clearer.

× Yes, I almost always wear comfortable and casual clothes because it's just easy to wear and move at home.

✓ Yes, I almost always wear comfortable, casual clothes because they are easy to wear and move in at home.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'clothes'. 'It's' (it is) is incorrect for plural. 'Move at home' should be 'move in at home' or simply 'move around at home'. Also add comma between adjectives 'comfortable, casual'.

× I wear comfortable with wearing.

✓ I like wearing comfortable clothes.

The phrase 'wear comfortable with wearing' is ungrammatical. Use 'like wearing' to express preference and specify 'comfortable clothes'. Avoid redundant verbs.

× So it's easy to do.

✓ So it's easy to do things.

The original is vague; add 'things' to clarify the object. 'Do' requires an object in this context.

× Yes, I like gravity T-shirts because it makes me happy and fun to live life.

✓ Yes, I like graphic T-shirts because they make me happy and make life more fun.

'Gravity' is incorrect word; intended 'graphic'. Use plural agreement: 'T-shirts...they make'. 'Make me happy and make life more fun' is clearer. Avoid 'fun to live life' which is awkward.

× I'm graphic designer I inspired from graffiti T-shirts and I make original T-shirts.

✓ I'm a graphic designer. I am inspired by graffiti T-shirts and I make original T-shirts.

Add the article 'a' before 'graphic designer'. Separate into two sentences or use conjunction. Use passive/participial structure 'inspired by' (not 'inspired from'). Maintain consistent tense 'I make' or 'I create'.

× Yes I do. I always spend about 30 minutes to choose courses because I want to call the table to move my life and.

✓ Yes, I do. I always spend about 30 minutes choosing clothes because I want to plan my day and...

Use 'spend ... choosing' rather than 'spend ... to choose'. 'Courses' should be 'clothes'. The phrase 'call the table to move my life' is unclear; likely 'plan my day' fits context. Use ellipsis if student trails off.

× For example, weather and.

✓ For example, the weather and the occasion.

Original fragment lacks completion and articles. Provide nouns that complete the list and add the definite article 'the' for specific factors like 'the weather' and 'the occasion'.