Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and smooth grammar (e.g., 'it gives me' → 'they give me').

Ví dụ: I prefer fitted, high‑waisted clothes because they make me feel confident and polished. For example, I often choose a red dress for events since the color boosts my mood and helps me stand out.

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning and use correct vocabulary. Start with a direct choice (comfortable or smart), then give one or two clear reasons using linking words. Correct grammar: 'allows me to be respected' and avoid unclear phrases like 'work, affordable and social quotes'.

Ví dụ: I prefer smart casual clothes because they strike a balance between comfort and elegance. For instance, wearing smart trousers and a neat blouse helps me feel confident at work and gives others a professional impression.

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct and slightly more specific. Give one clear reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts, especially at home or on relaxed days, because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I often pair a plain T‑shirt with jeans when I run errands or meet friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a specific typical routine to show control and relevance. Avoid redundant phrases and improve grammar (e.g., 'especially when I go shopping' and 'I prefer certain colors and sizes').

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually spend some time when shopping because I check the fit and color carefully. For example, I often look for items in red or neutral tones and try them on to make sure the size and style suit me.

× It gives me confidence and good presence.

✓ It gives me confidence and a good presence.

Missing article before the noun 'good presence' and 'presence' is a noun not a verb; use 'a' to make it grammatically correct. Suggestion: add the article 'a' before 'good presence' to form 'a good presence'.

× I love to wear red, it gives good vibes and I feel confident by wearing it.

✓ I love to wear red; it gives good vibes and I feel confident when I wear it.

Run-on sentence and unnatural preposition 'by' with 'feel confident'. Use a semicolon or period to separate clauses and 'when I wear it' is the correct time clause. Suggestion: separate clauses and replace 'by wearing it' with 'when I wear it'.

× I prefer the work, affordable and social quotes because it gives me elegance.

✓ I prefer workwear, affordable and social outfits because they give me elegance.

Incorrect nouns: 'work' should be 'workwear' or 'work clothes'; 'quotes' is wrong word, likely 'outfits'. Subject-verb agreement: plural 'outfits' requires 'they give'. Suggestion: use correct nouns and match verb number.

× I can walk with confidence if I am comfortable.

✓ I can walk confidently if I am comfortable.

Adverb placement: 'with confidence' is acceptable but 'walk confidently' is more natural and concise. Suggestion: use adverb form 'confidently' after the verb.

× It also allows me to being respected and view myself in a nice way.

✓ It also allows me to be respected and to view myself in a better way.

After 'allows me', use the base verb 'to be', not the -ing form 'being'. Also 'view myself in a nice way' is awkward; 'better way' or 'more positively' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'to be respected' and 'to view myself more positively'.

× Personally, I love the wear T-shirts, especially at home or on casual days.

✓ Personally, I love wearing T-shirts, especially at home or on casual days.

Incorrect verb pattern: use 'love' + gerund 'wearing' not 'love the wear'. Remove article 'the' and use gerund. Suggestion: 'love wearing T-shirts'.

× I believe that I feel comfortable and elegant on my own.

✓ I feel comfortable and elegant when I'm on my own.

Redundant 'I believe that' is unnecessary, and 'on my own' is better expressed as 'when I'm on my own'. Tense and contraction improve naturalness. Suggestion: simplify to 'I feel...' and use 'when I'm on my own'.

× It is also neutral and fun.

✓ They are also neutral and fun.

Pronoun reference: 'It' refers to T-shirts (plural); therefore use plural pronoun 'They'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun 'T-shirts'.

× Yes, especially that if I go to shops or stores, I am really fond of choosing my color and the sizes.

✓ Yes, especially when I go to shops or stores, I enjoy choosing the colors and sizes.

Awkward structure 'especially that if' is incorrect; use 'especially when'. 'Really fond of choosing my color and the sizes' is unnatural; use 'enjoy choosing the colors and sizes'. Suggestion: use 'when' for time clause and pluralize 'colors'.

× For example, I love red colors.

✓ For example, I love the color red.

'Red colors' is redundant; 'the color red' or 'red' is natural. Suggestion: use 'the color red' or simply 'red'.

× I love it and neutral styles.

✓ I love it and neutral styles.

The original sentence is unclear and seems to be missing a verb or connector. If intended meaning is 'I love it and I love neutral styles', correction should be 'I love it and I love neutral styles.' Suggestion: repeat the verb for clarity or combine: 'I love red and neutral styles.'