Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
Personally, I often wear a simple clothes like T-shirt or jeans, which is make me feel really comfortable when I wear it and I don't have to think a lot of uh, what I what I what should I wear today or.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
Umm, I prefer to compare between comfortable and smart clothes. I much prefer comfortable and casual clothes because it's make me feel, uh, more like soft and easy to mix and match. And I don't have.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I really enjoy wearing T-shirt. I think T-shirt with the wonderful invention ever because we're wearing T-shirt make me feel really comfortable and it's easy to mix with any type the police.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Honestly, yes, uh, whenever I have to hang out, I often spend hours to to choose my outfit, so and uh, because I want to perfect in.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency: use correct articles, verb forms and remove hesitations. Keep answer concise (max 5 sentences) and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific details. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.
Ví dụ: I usually wear simple clothes like T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and low-maintenance. For example, a plain T-shirt and jeans work for both errands and casual meetings, so I don't waste time deciding what to wear.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: State your preference directly and give a specific reason with correct grammar. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use a linking word like "because" or "so" and provide one concrete example of when you choose casual clothes.
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are easier to mix and match and feel relaxed. For instance, I often choose a sweater and jeans for a day at university because they keep me warm and look neat without much effort.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Be concise and accurate: give a clear opinion and one specific reason. Correct word choice and sentence structure (e.g., "one of the best inventions" not "the wonderful invention ever"). Avoid unclear phrases like "type the police."
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. T-shirts are one of the best inventions because they are comfortable and versatile; I can pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for a casual look or with a blazer for something smarter.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and finish your thought. Replace hesitations with a clear explanation and give a specific example of how you choose outfits. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so".
Ví dụ: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look good when I go out. For example, before a party I might try several outfits and check them in the mirror to make sure the colors and styles match.
× Personally, I often wear a simple clothes like T-shirt or jeans, which is make me feel really comfortable when I wear it and I don't have to think a lot of uh, what I what I what should I wear today or.
✓ Personally, I often wear simple clothes like T-shirts or jeans, which make me feel really comfortable when I wear them and I don't have to think a lot about what I should wear today.
The noun 'clothes' is plural and should not take the determiner 'a' or the adjective 'simple' with singular agreement. Use 'simple clothes' or 'a simple outfit'. Also 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally, and pronouns must agree in number: 'which make' (plural verb) and 'them' (plural pronoun). Add 'about' after 'think' for the correct preposition and remove repeated filler words. Suggestion: match plural nouns with plural verbs and pronouns and include necessary prepositions.
× Umm, I prefer to compare between comfortable and smart clothes. I much prefer comfortable and casual clothes because it's make me feel, uh, more like soft and easy to mix and match. And I don't have.
✓ Umm, I prefer comfortable clothes to smart clothes. I much prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they make me feel softer and they are easy to mix and match. And I don't have to worry about it.
'Prefer' is followed by 'to' or by comparing 'A to B' rather than 'compare between'. 'It's make' is incorrect: plural 'clothes' requires 'they make'. Use comparative adjective 'softer' (or 'more comfortable') instead of 'more like soft'. Also include a complete clause after 'I don't have' (e.g. 'to worry about it') to avoid sentence fragment. Suggestion: use correct comparative forms and ensure subject-verb agreement and complete sentences.
× Yes, of course, I really enjoy wearing T-shirt. I think T-shirt with the wonderful invention ever because we're wearing T-shirt make me feel really comfortable and it's easy to mix with any type the police.
✓ Yes, of course, I really enjoy wearing T-shirts. I think the T-shirt is one of the most wonderful inventions because wearing T-shirts makes me feel really comfortable and they are easy to mix with any type of clothing.
When speaking generally about an item, use the plural 'T-shirts' or 'the T-shirt' with a determiner and superlative structure 'one of the most wonderful inventions'. 'We're wearing T-shirt' is ungrammatical; use the gerund 'wearing T-shirts' or 'wearing a T-shirt'. Subject-verb agreement: 'wearing T-shirts makes' or 'they make'. 'Any type the police' is incorrect phrase; likely intended 'any type of clothing'. Suggestion: use plural or definite article appropriately, correct subject-verb agreement, and choose correct nouns ('clothing').
× Honestly, yes, uh, whenever I have to hang out, I often spend hours to to choose my outfit, so and uh, because I want to perfect in.
✓ Honestly, yes. Whenever I have to go out, I often spend hours choosing my outfit because I want to look perfect.
Use the gerund 'choosing' after 'spend hours' rather than the infinitive 'to choose'. 'Hang out' can mean socializing; 'go out' fits choosing an outfit. The fragment 'because I want to perfect in' is incomplete; replace with 'because I want to look perfect' or 'because I want to be perfect'. Suggestion: use 'spend time' + gerund, complete the clause, and avoid repeated fillers.