Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “I like wearing dresses”), then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Correct word choice (e.g., 'prefer' not 'pee for') and reduce fillers (umm). Keep to maximum 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I like wearing dresses because they make me feel confident and look attractive. For example, a well‑fitted dress is easy to style for work or social events, so I often choose dresses when I want to make a good impression.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain with a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., 'however', 'but'). Use correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Give a specific example of when you wear smart clothes.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely. However, because my job demands a professional image, I often wear smart outfits such as blouses and tailored trousers when I have meetings.

Gợi ý: Be precise and avoid vague or incorrect phrases. Start with a clear opinion, then give 1–2 specific supporting details and an example of how you wear T‑shirts. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'go with', 'pair with').

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often pair a plain T‑shirt with jeans for a casual day out or with a blazer for a smart‑casual look.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer with exact time, then explain briefly why. Use correct nouns and prepositions (e.g., 'choose clothes', 'buy clothes online/in-store'). Avoid unnecessary details and correct small errors (cloud→clothes).

Ví dụ: I usually spend about 20 to 30 minutes each morning choosing and ironing my clothes. Because I shop mostly in stores and know my size, deciding what to wear is fairly quick.

× As a girl, I pee for wear.

✓ As a girl, I prefer what to wear.

The original sentence uses the wrong verb 'pee' (typo) and unclear structure. This fits 'sentence structure errors' and 'word choice'. Correcting to 'prefer what to wear' makes intention clear. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for liking choices and ensure words are typed correctly.

× I prefer wearing dress as I can, as I can, as I can appear in front of other others with a, umm, attractive appearance and I can be confident with my outfit.

✓ I prefer wearing dresses because I can appear attractive in front of others and feel confident in my outfit.

Errors include missing plural for 'dress' (should be 'dresses'), repetition, and awkward phrasing. Use 'prefer wearing' plus plural noun; use 'because' to give reason; 'appearing attractive in front of others' simplified to 'appear attractive in front of others'. Suggestion: use plural for general items and keep sentences concise.

× Actually, I prefer to wear casual clothes that I can easily move.

✓ Actually, I prefer to wear casual clothes so I can move easily.

The clause 'that I can easily move' is ungrammatical because 'move' needs an adverb 'easily' placed after the verb and a subject. Rephrasing to 'so I can move easily' corrects meaning. Suggestion: use adverbs in correct position and use purpose clauses with 'so' or 'so that'.

× However, uh, my job required me to have a good appearance, so I often see where smartly choose the outfit to the outfit uh, or attract to to, uh, choose an, choose an.

✓ However, my job requires me to have a good appearance, so I often choose smart outfits.

Original has tense error ('required' should be present 'requires' for habitual job requirement), many filler words and repetition. Simplify to 'requires' and 'choose smart outfits'. Suggestion: remove fillers and use present simple for general facts.

× I think T-shirts are comfortable and convenient. You can meet, you can fit it with every clothes, at every trouser or T-shirt. So I can say that T-shirt is one of my favorite item.

✓ I think T-shirts are comfortable and convenient. They go well with every pair of trousers or skirt, so I can say that T-shirts are one of my favorite items.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun and verb agreement ('You can meet' is wrong), wrong collocations ('fit it with every clothes'), article and singular/plural errors ('T-shirt is one of my favorite item' should be plural 'T-shirts are' and 'items'). Correct collocation: 'go well with' + 'pair of trousers'. Suggestion: use correct collocations and ensure noun/pronoun and number agreement.

× It takes me about 20 or 30 minutes to choose the cloud and iron my clothes every day because I often buy clothes inside, so it's quite easy for me to choose what to wear in this day.

✓ It takes me about 20 to 30 minutes to choose and iron my clothes every day because I often buy clothes in stores, so it's quite easy for me to decide what to wear each day.

Errors: '20 or 30 minutes' better as '20 to 30 minutes'; 'choose the cloud' is a typo for 'choose' (or 'clothes'); 'buy clothes inside' unclear — 'in stores' fits; 'in this day' should be 'each day' or 'every day'. Suggestion: use idiomatic expressions and correct prepositions ('in stores') and time expressions.