Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you use headphones?
Thí sinh
No, I do not use headphone because I I saw several news about white phones blast in here. That's why I'm not using headphones.
Giám khảo
What type of headphones do you use?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer Apple Airport generation 4. It is, it is not. It offers noise cancellation also and good quality of sound data that I enjoyed watching movies, uh, to not disturb other noises to me.
Giám khảo
When would you use headphones?
Thí sinh
Last Monday I've used Headphone Watcher to watch movie Durandar.
Giám khảo
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Thí sinh
I'm not used in my studies headphone because I love to study in speaker only, not headphone.
Giám khảo
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Thí sinh
Umm yes it headphone Apple Airpod generation 4 is softer to wearing and it is very comfortable headphones also Apple were made.
Do you use headphones?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: Be concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use plural/singular forms), and give one specific reason with a short elaboration. Avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' correctly.
Ví dụ: No, I don't use headphones. I recently read news reports about some headphones catching fire, so I'm avoiding them for safety reasons.
What type of headphones do you use?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming the model, then add one or two specific benefits using linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Correct the model name and avoid hesitations. Use natural phrasing for sound quality and noise cancellation.
Ví dụ: I prefer Apple AirPods Pro (4th generation) because they have active noise cancellation and very clear sound, so I can enjoy movies without being disturbed by background noise.
When would you use headphones?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Answer directly about typical situations or habits rather than a single isolated event. Use present simple for habits and provide a brief reason. If mentioning a past instance, make it concise and correct the device/movie names.
Ví dụ: I usually use headphones when I watch movies or take public transport because they help me focus and block out noise. For example, I used them last Monday to watch a film on my commute.
In what conditions would you not use headphones?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement about when you avoid headphones, use correct grammar (I don't use headphones when...), and give a concise reason. Use linking words like 'because' to connect explanation.
Ví dụ: I don't use headphones while studying because I prefer speakers — they help me stay alert and I find them more comfortable for long study sessions.
Is wearing headphones comfortable?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: Give a direct answer followed by one or two specific reasons about comfort (fit, padding, weight). Correct grammar and model name; avoid filler words like 'umm'. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.
Ví dụ: Yes, I find the Apple AirPods Pro (4th generation) comfortable because they are lightweight and come with soft silicone tips that fit well.
× No, I do not use headphone because I I saw several news about white phones blast in here.
✓ No, I do not use headphones because I saw several news reports about white phones bursting here.
Plural and article usage: 'headphone' should be plural 'headphones' when speaking generally. 'News' is uncountable, so use 'news reports' or 'a news report' for countable reference. 'I I' is a repetition error. 'Blast in here' is unnatural; use 'bursting here' or 'exploding here'. Improve clarity by removing repetition and choosing correct noun forms.
× Well, I prefer Apple Airport generation 4.
✓ Well, I prefer the Apple AirPods (4th generation).
Article and noun form: brand and product names need correct form and article. Use 'the' before a specific product model and the correct product name 'AirPods'. Indicate '4th generation' instead of 'generation 4' for natural English.
× It is, it is not. It offers noise cancellation also and good quality of sound data that I enjoyed watching movies, uh, to not disturb other noises to me.
✓ It offers noise cancellation and good sound quality, which I enjoy when watching movies because it reduces outside noise.
Tense and structure: combine sentences into a single clear present-tense statement. 'Sound data' is incorrect — use 'sound quality'. 'I enjoyed' mismatches present preference; use 'I enjoy'. 'to not disturb other noises to me' is ungrammatical; use 'because it reduces outside noise'.
× Last Monday I've used Headphone Watcher to watch movie Durandar.
✓ Last Monday I used Headphone Watcher to watch the movie Durandar.
Tense and article: In simple past reference to a specific time (Last Monday), use the simple past 'I used' not present perfect 'I've used'. Add the definite article 'the' before a specific movie title if treating it as a movie, and ensure product name capitalization and spacing.
× I'm not used in my studies headphone because I love to study in speaker only, not headphone.
✓ I do not use headphones while studying because I like to study with the speakers only, not with headphones.
Verb and article: 'I'm not used in my studies headphone' is ungrammatical. Use 'I do not use headphones while studying'. Use plural 'headphones' and include preposition 'with' for 'with the speakers'. Maintain consistent phrasing.
× Umm yes it headphone Apple Airpod generation 4 is softer to wearing and it is very comfortable headphones also Apple were made.
✓ Yes, the Apple AirPods (4th generation) are soft to wear and very comfortable; Apple made them well.
Form and agreement: Use plural 'AirPods' and plural verb 'are'. Use 'soft to wear' rather than 'softer to wearing'. 'Headphone' should be 'headphones'. 'Apple were made' is incorrect; use 'Apple made them' or 'they are well-made by Apple'. Improve word order and use correct verb forms.