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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer sad or happy music?

Thí sinh

I prefer happy music.

Giám khảo

Does happy music make you feel more excited?

Thí sinh

Sure, it makes me feel dynamic and energetic.

Giám khảo

Have you taken any music classes?

Thí sinh

Sorry, I have no time to take any music classes.

Giám khảo

Do you listen to music while doing other things?

Thí sinh

Sure, I leave music in my spare time such as such as reading, a cleaning, backing.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer sad or happy music?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答直接且自然,但可以更丰富一些以展示词汇和表达能力。建议在主题句后补充一两条具体原因或场景,并用连接词衔接,例如说明为什么喜欢快乐音乐以及什么时候听。控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me stay positive. For example, I often play upbeat pop songs in the morning to wake up and get ready for the day.

Does happy music make you feel more excited?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答积极且使用了较好的形容词,但可以更自然地表达并补充具体感受或例子。建议先用一个完整的主题句,然后用连接词(for example/when/so)补充说明何时或怎么产生这种感觉。

Ví dụ: Yes, happy music definitely makes me feel more energetic. For instance, upbeat tracks with a fast tempo pump me up when I'm exercising or doing chores.

Have you taken any music classes?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 句子能传达意思但语气不太自然,开头不用道歉。建议直接回答并解释原因或未来计划,使用连词如 because/so/although 来丰富内容,保持简洁。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any music classes because I haven't had enough free time recently. However, I hope to join a guitar course next year if my schedule allows.

Do you listen to music while doing other things?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答存在语法和用词错误(例如 'leave music'、重复 'such as'、'a cleaning, backing'),需要纠正并给出清晰具体的活动例子。建议使用简洁的主题句并用连接词列举具体场景,注意动词和名词搭配。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other activities. For example, I play soft instrumental music when I'm reading, upbeat songs while cleaning, and podcasts when I'm cooking.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× Sure, it makes me feel dynamic and energetic.

Sure, it makes me feel excited and energetic.

学生原句语法上不算错误,但用词不太自然。用 dynamic 来描述人的感受不常见,常用 excited 来表达“兴奋、激动”的感受。为了更贴合考官问题(make you feel more excited),把 dynamic 改为 excited 更符合语境与常用表达。建议:多学习常见情感形容词的搭配(make sb feel + adjective),如 make me feel excited / relaxed / happy。

5: Past tense issue

× Sorry, I have no time to take any music classes.

Sorry, I don't have time to take any music classes.

原句使用 have 作实义动词时,应在一般现在时用 don't/doesn't + have 表示否定,而 I have no time 属于比较口语的固定表达但在正式考试场景中更自然的否定形式为 I don't have time。这里不存在过去时,但按题要求只改符合列表的类型,选择将否定形式改为更标准的一般现在时否定结构。建议:在一般现在时表达否定时使用 don't/doesn't + 动词(I don't have / He doesn't like)。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Sure, I leave music in my spare time such as such as reading, a cleaning, backing.

Sure, I listen to music in my spare time while doing other things such as reading, cleaning, or baking.

原句存在多处结构和用词错误: 1) leave music 是错误搭配,正确动词应为 listen to music(听音乐)。 2) 重复出现 such as such as。只需一次 such as。3) 列举项的冠词和拼写错误:a cleaning 不需要冠词,cleaning 本身可作动名词;backing 拼写错误,应为 baking(烘焙)。4) 使用 while doing other things 更自然地衔接主句与并列活动。建议:练习常见动词短语(listen to music),并注意列举时不使用不必要的冠词,检查单词拼写和重复用词。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
SorrySad; Full of pity; Regretful; Pitiful; Apologies
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