Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, fluency and clarity. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise wording. Add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep to fewer than five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music when I’m feeling down. For example, if I’m sad after a difficult day, I play upbeat pop songs to lift my mood because sad songs tend to make me feel worse.

Gợi ý: Focus on correcting repetition and grammar, and use linking words to connect idea and example. Keep sentences concise and avoid filler words. Provide one clear example and explain the effect briefly.

Ví dụ: Yes, happy music definitely makes me feel more excited. For example, upbeat songs with a fast tempo make me feel energetic and motivated to start activities like exercising or cleaning.

Gợi ý: Clarify time references and correct tenses. Use a clear topic sentence, then give a specific detail about what you learned and why you stopped practicing. Avoid vague phrases and keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I took guitar lessons for two years when I was in primary school, and I learned mainly classical pieces. However, I don’t have much time to practise now, so I’ve forgotten many songs.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence structure and word choice. Start with a clear sentence listing activities, then add a brief reason using a linking word. Remove incomplete fragments and correct verbs and nouns.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things, such as driving, showering, or reading. It helps me relax and concentrate, so I usually play soft or instrumental tracks during those activities.

× It depends on my mood. When I'm sad I usually listen to happy music because sad song make me feel worse, so I listen a bit music to cheer myself up.

✓ It depends on my mood. When I'm sad, I usually listen to happy music because sad songs make me feel worse, so I listen to a bit of music to cheer myself up.

Errors include plural and subject-verb agreement: 'sad song' should be 'sad songs' (plural) and 'make' should agree with plural subject and remain 'make'. Also missing article and preposition: 'a bit music' should be 'a bit of music'. Add comma after subordinate clause 'When I'm sad'. Suggestions: pluralize countable nouns when referring generally, ensure verb agrees with subject, and use 'a bit of' before uncountable noun 'music'.

× Yes, happy music make me make me feel more excited you, for example, if you listen the upbeat music or entertain music, this make me feels uh fresh and going to do anything.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited. For example, if you listen to upbeat or entertaining music, it makes me feel fresh and ready to do anything.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement: 'happy music make' should be 'happy music makes' (singular subject). Redundant phrase 'make me make me' removed. Incorrect pronoun 'you' removed as not appropriate. Use correct preposition 'listen to'. Adjective form 'entertaining' instead of noun 'entertain'. Use pronoun 'it' to refer to music and correct verb agreement 'makes'. 'Feels uh fresh and going to do anything' corrected to 'feel fresh and ready to do anything' for natural phrasing. Suggestions: ensure verbs agree with singular/plural subjects, use correct prepositions with 'listen', and choose correct adjective forms.

× Yes, I took a gather lesson for two year at primary school at a part I can play a guitar, especially classical music but I don't have time to practice so now I forgot it.

✓ Yes, I took a group lesson for two years in primary school, so now I can play the guitar, especially classical pieces, but I don't have time to practice so now I've forgotten it.

Errors: 'gather lesson' is incorrect collocation; use 'group lesson'. 'Two year' needs plural 'two years'. Preposition 'at primary school' should be 'in primary school'. Sentence lacked clarity and tense consistency: learning in past allowed present ability 'I can play the guitar'. 'Forgot it' better as present perfect 'I've forgotten it' because the forgetting has relevance now. Also 'a guitar' should be 'the guitar' or 'play guitar'—'play the guitar' chosen. Suggestions: use correct collocations, pluralize time expressions, use appropriate prepositions, and use present perfect for recent states.

× Yes, I usually listen to music when and I doing something like driving, showering or listening reading so it make me feel relaxed and make.

✓ Yes, I usually listen to music when I am doing something like driving, showering, or reading, so it makes me feel relaxed.

Problems: extra 'and' removed. Verb form 'I doing' should be 'I am doing' or 'I'm doing' for present continuous. 'Listening reading' incorrect; choose one activity 'reading'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it make' should be 'it makes'. Trailing 'and make' removed as incomplete. Suggestions: remove unnecessary conjunctions, use correct continuous tense for simultaneous actions, ensure verb agrees with subject, and avoid unfinished phrases.