Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and avoid hesitations and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting reasons with specific examples. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'if you listen to too much sad music, it can make you feel sad') and avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words.

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it gives me energy and improves my mood. For example, upbeat pop songs help me stay positive when I'm studying or doing housework, whereas sad songs tend to make me dwell on negative feelings.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid redundancy. Give a direct answer then one specific situation where it helps, using linking words like 'for example' or 'for instance'. Correct word choice: use 'music' (uncountable) and simpler adjectives like 'energetic' or 'motivated'.

Ví dụ: Yes, happy music does make me feel more excited. For instance, when I go jogging I listen to upbeat tracks because they increase my pace and motivation, helping me complete longer runs.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: state directly whether you have taken classes, then give clear supporting details. Avoid false collocations like 'guitar license'—say 'guitar lessons' or 'a guitar course'. Use one or two well-structured sentences and correct word order (e.g., 'I have an electric guitar').

Ví dụ: Yes, I have taken guitar lessons because I love playing. I own an electric guitar and I usually practice rock and some classical pieces I learned in my lessons.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give a specific example and avoid repetition. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I sometimes listen to rock music', 'it raises my tempo'). Replace vague phrases like 'the power or strength' with 'more stamina' or 'more motivation'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often listen to rock music while exercising because it raises my tempo and makes me feel more energetic. As a result I can push through tougher workouts and keep a faster pace.

× And sometimes you, you listening, you listen too much sad music, it will always make you sad.

✓ And sometimes, if you listen to too much sad music, it will make you sad.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect pronoun/forms ('you, you listening, you listen') and missing conditional structure. Use 'if you listen to' to express the condition and remove repeated words. Also use 'to' with 'listen' when an object follows ('listen to music').

× happy music or uh, other positive musics, uh, can make me feel energetic.

✓ Happy music or other positive music can make me feel energetic.

The noun 'music' is an uncountable noun, so 'musics' is incorrect. Use the uncountable form 'music' without plural 's'.

× Oh well, I you know, I love to play my guitar, so I take guitar license and I have on guitar, I have a electric guitar and sometimes I like to play some classical, classical rock, classical music or some rock songs.

✓ Oh well, I, you know, love to play my guitar, so I took a guitar course and I have an electric guitar, and sometimes I like to play classical music or rock songs.

Multiple issues: 'I you know' is disfluent—use 'I, you know,'. 'Take guitar license' is incorrect; likely intended 'took a guitar course' or 'got a guitar license'—'took a guitar course' fits better. Article errors: 'a electric guitar' should be 'an electric guitar' because 'electric' begins with a vowel sound. 'Some classical, classical rock, classical music' is redundant; simplify to 'classical music or rock songs'. Also 'I have on guitar' is incorrect structure.

× Uh, yes, I sometimes listening to rock music while I'm running or doing exercises because it can raise my tempo and it can makes me feel energetic and makes me feel excited.

✓ Uh, yes, I sometimes listen to rock music while I'm running or exercising because it can raise my tempo and make me feel energetic and excited.

Use base verb 'listen' after adverb 'sometimes' rather than 'listening'. 'Doing exercises' can be simplified to 'exercising'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it can makes' is incorrect—use 'it can make' (modal 'can' plus base verb). Also avoid repeating 'makes me feel' twice; combine adjectives 'energetic and excited'.

× So I have the power or strength to do the, uh, some tough tasks.

✓ So I have the power or strength to do some tough tasks.

Remove the extraneous article 'the' before 'some tough tasks'; using both 'the' and 'some' together is incorrect. The phrase is clearer as 'do some tough tasks'.

× listening to happy music can make me feel special at some special occasions, such as, uh, when I'm running or doing exercise, happy music or uh, other positive musics, uh, can make me feel energetic.

✓ Listening to happy music can make me feel special on certain occasions, such as when I'm running or exercising; happy music or other positive music can make me feel energetic.

Use 'on certain occasions' rather than 'at some special occasions' for natural collocation. Maintain gerund form 'Listening' at sentence start. Use 'exercising' instead of 'doing exercise'. Correct 'musics' to 'music' (uncountable). Ensure consistent tense (present simple) which is appropriate here.