Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and give a specific reason. Avoid vague phrases like "feel stories". Use one or two supporting details with linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music. For example, upbeat songs boost my mood after a long day, and their lively rhythms make it easier for me to stay positive when I'm stressed.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement and pronouns), be concise, and give a clear cause-effect explanation. Use linking words like "because" and provide one specific example of when you listen.

Ví dụ: Yes, happy music does make me feel more excited because its fast tempo and cheerful lyrics lift my mood. For instance, when I feel stressed after exams, I put on energetic pop songs loudly to cheer myself up.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with correct grammar and relevant vocabulary. Correct the mistakes (take → taken; medicine → music). Briefly explain why you haven't and mention future plans with a reason.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any music classes, but I would like to in the future because I want to learn basic guitar skills to accompany songs I enjoy.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer with a topic sentence, use commas to list activities, remove fillers like 'uh', and add a linking phrase to give a reason or preference. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other tasks. For example, I play podcasts or upbeat playlists when cooking, washing dishes and doing laundry, and sometimes I listen to instrumental tracks while studying to help me concentrate.

× Me personally, I prefer happy music because people listen to music whenever they feel stories and sad, so happy music is best.

✓ Personally, I prefer happy music because people listen to music when they feel sad, so happy music is the best.

Using 'Me personally' is informal and incorrect; use 'Personally' or 'I personally'. 'Whenever they feel stories and sad' is unclear and wrong—likely meant 'when they feel sad'. Add 'the' before 'best' to make it a superlative with a specific reference. Suggestion: say 'Personally, I prefer happy music because people listen to music when they feel sad, so happy music is the best.'

× Yes, happy music make me feel more excited.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited.

Subject 'happy music' is singular, so the verb requires third person singular 'makes' not 'make'. Suggestion: match subject-verb agreement: 'happy music makes'.

× When you are feeling stressed and feel low and no one have to talk about my feelings, I listen happy music and loudspeaker.

✓ When I am feeling stressed or low and there is no one to talk to about my feelings, I listen to happy music on loudspeakers.

Pronoun and perspective mixed: use 'I' not 'you'. 'No one have' should be 'no one to' or 'there is no one to'—subject-verb agreement and missing infinitive. 'Listen happy music' needs 'listen to'. 'loudspeaker' should be plural or 'on loudspeakers'/'on the loudspeaker'. Rephrase for clarity and correct grammar. Suggestion: 'When I am feeling stressed or low and there is no one to talk to about my feelings, I listen to happy music on loudspeakers.'

× No I haven't take any medicine classes but in the future if I get a chance I will definitely take.

✓ No, I haven't taken any music classes, but in the future if I get a chance I will definitely take some.

Present perfect requires past participle 'taken' not base form 'take'. 'medicine classes' seems wrong in context—likely 'music classes'. Also add comma after 'No' and finish with an object 'take some' or 'take them'. Suggestion: 'No, I haven't taken any music classes, but in the future if I get a chance I will definitely take some.'

× Yes, I usually listen to music while doing other things such as uh, cooking a washing dishes and washing clothing and when it so sometimes during studying also I listen.

✓ Yes, I usually listen to music while doing other things such as cooking, washing dishes, and doing laundry; sometimes I also listen while studying.

Prepositions and parallel structure are incorrect: 'washing dishes' is correct, not 'a washing dishes'. 'Washing clothing' is better as 'doing laundry'. Remove filler 'uh' and fix word order: 'sometimes I also listen while studying' or 'I also sometimes listen while studying'. Use commas to separate items and a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. Suggestion: 'Yes, I usually listen to music while doing other things such as cooking, washing dishes, and doing laundry; sometimes I also listen while studying.'