Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法と自然な表現に注意してください。まず「to be get energy」は不自然なので「to get energy」や「to feel energetic」と言い換えましょう。また、トピック文（I prefer happy music）は明確ですが、支持理由を一文で簡潔にまとめ、追加の詳しい説明を加えるとより効果的です。具体的には、なぜ元気が出るのか（リズム、歌詞、テンポ）やどんな場面で聴くかを短く付け加えてください。

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it helps me get energy. For example, upbeat songs with a fast tempo and positive lyrics lift my mood, so I often listen to them when I need motivation before exercising or working.

Gợi ý: 回答は分かりやすいですが、文法と語順の改善が必要です。「It makes me to be more positive」は誤りで、正しくは「It makes me feel more positive」です。加えて、接続語を使って文をつなげ、具体例や結果を一つ入れるとより説得力が増します。例えば、どんな曲が効くか、どのように気分が変わるかを短く説明してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, it does. For example, when I'm feeling sad I play upbeat songs with cheerful melodies, and they help me feel more positive and energized within a few minutes.

× I prefer happy music because I listen to music when I want to be get energy.

✓ I prefer happy music because I listen to music when I want to get energy.

The infinitive verb phrase 'want to get' is correct; 'be get' is ungrammatical. Remove the unnecessary 'be' so the structure is 'want to' + base verb. Suggestion: use 'want to get energy' or more natural 'want to feel energized.'

× Yes it does. For example, when I feel sad or bad, I listen to happy music. It makes me to be more positive.

✓ Yes, it does. For example, when I feel sad or bad, I listen to happy music. It makes me more positive.

After verbs like 'make' (causative), the object is followed by the bare infinitive (no 'to') or an adjective. 'Makes me to be' is incorrect. Use 'makes me more positive' or 'makes me feel more positive.' Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural punctuation.