Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like state music.
Giám khảo
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Thí sinh
The happy music is make me feel excited.
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不自然且有語言錯誤。首先問題是二選一(悲傷或快樂),你應直接表明偏好,其次“state music”是不正確的表達。建議:1) 直接回答問題並給出理由(主題句)。2) 使用一到兩句具體支持細節,如舉例或描述感受。3) 注意語法,避免把“Yes”用作回答此類選擇題。具體練習:練習用簡短句子表達偏好和原因,並使用正確形容詞(sad/happy)。
Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me concentrate. For example, upbeat pop songs make me feel more energetic when I study.
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子有語法錯誤且表達不夠簡潔。回答應直接肯定或否定,然後用一到兩個支持句說明為什麼或舉例。注意動詞形式和冠詞使用,避免多餘的詞語。建議:1) 用簡短的主題句(Yes/No + 簡短原因)。2) 用連接詞(because/so/for example)使語意連貫。3) 修改語法錯誤(主語+動詞)。
Ví dụ: Yes, happy music makes me feel excited because the fast rhythm and cheerful melody boost my energy. For example, when I listen to lively songs, I often start tapping my feet or smiling.
× Yes, I like state music.
✓ Yes, I like sad music.
原句用詞不當(state)導致句意不明,應選用與考官問題對應的形容詞 sad(悲傷的)。這不是語法變形問題,而是詞彙選擇造成的句子結構/語意錯誤。建議:注意聽清題目中的關鍵詞並選用正確對應的詞彙,例如 sad 而非 state。
× The happy music is make me feel excited.
✓ Happy music makes me feel excited.
原句出現主謂不一致和冗餘的 be 動詞:“The happy music is make” 中 make 應與主語一致使用第三人稱單數形式 makes,且不需要輔助動詞 is。建議:對於一般現在時表示習慣或普遍事實時,使用動詞第三人稱單數形式(主語為單數名詞或不可數名詞)。另外可省略定冠詞 the,直接說 Happy music makes me feel excited。