Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Thí sinh
I like to listen happy music. I sing it make me have more energy.
Giám khảo
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Thí sinh
Uh, absolutely yes I sing. The happy music will make me have more energy and to face my work and to study in my daily life. For example, I would like to listen to happy music in the morning.
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 用更自然、完整的句子回答,注意主谓一致和时态;在开头直接表明立场,然后用一两个具体原因支撑,使用连接词让句子更连贯。可以把“I sing it make me have more energy”改为“I sing along because it gives me more energy”或类似表达。同时把表达扩展到不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and motivates me. For example, I often sing along to upbeat songs in the morning, which gives me energy for the day. It also helps me concentrate when I study, as the rhythm keeps me focused.
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答时避免重复和口头语(如“Uh”),用更连贯的结构说明原因和具体情境,使用连接词(for example, because, so)使逻辑清晰。注意语法(e.g., remove extra “to” before verbs: “to face my work and study”),并保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Absolutely — happy music definitely energizes me. Because of its upbeat tempo, it helps me face my work and stay focused while studying. For example, I usually play cheerful songs in the morning to boost my motivation for the day.
× I like to listen happy music.
✓ I like to listen to happy music.
句子中动词 listen 后需接介词 to 构成固定搭配 listen to sb./sth.。正确用法是 “listen to happy music”。建议记住常见动词与介词的搭配(如 listen to, look at, depend on)。
× I sing it make me have more energy.
✓ Singing it makes me have more energy.
原句结构混乱。想表达的是“听/唱(音乐)让我更有能量”,应将动作变为动名词短语作主语(Singing it),并注意主谓一致(singing → makes)。另外可以更自然地说 “It makes me feel more energetic.” 建议使用动名词作主语或用 it 作形式主语并保证动词单复数一致。
× Uh, absolutely yes I sing.
✓ Uh, absolutely — yes, I do sing.
原句在回答中省略助动词导致不自然。若用一般现在时强调,可用 do-support: “I do sing” 或更自然地简化为 “Yes, I do.” 建议在肯定强调时使用助动词 do 来加强语气并保持语法完整。
× The happy music will make me have more energy and to face my work and to study in my daily life.
✓ Happy music makes me feel more energetic and helps me face my work and study in daily life.
原句中混合使用 will、不定式 to 及动词短语导致时态和语法不一致。这里描述习惯性影响应使用一般现在时(makes),并用并列结构保持一致(makes ... and helps ...)。此外英文中常用 feel more energetic 而非 make me have more energy。建议根据语境选用正确时态(习惯用一般现在时)并保持并列成分的一致形式。
× For example, I would like to listen to happy music in the morning.
✓ For example, I like to listen to happy music in the morning.
句中原为 “I would like to...” 表示愿望或礼貌请求,与前文谈常态习惯不符。根据语境应使用一般现在时表示习惯(I like to listen...)。同时已修正 listen to 的用法。建议区分 would like(想要/礼貌)与一般现在时(习惯)。