Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically correct, concise and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two brief specific reasons with linking phrases. Avoid redundancies and incorrect plural/verb forms (e.g., 'depends', 'music' not 'musics').

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. For example, when I’m with friends I prefer upbeat music because it cheers me up and helps me relax; however, when I feel overwhelmed I choose sad songs to help me reflect and calm down.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and then give one or two clear, specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases ('make me make more intense') and incorrect verb forms. Use varied vocabulary relevant to emotion and music.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Energetic music makes me feel excited because of its fast tempo and strong rhythms, which boost my energy. For instance, upbeat pop or electronic songs motivate me to move and improve my mood.

× Well it's depend on my mood or references.

✓ Well, it depends on my mood or preferences.

Subject-verb agreement and correct vocabulary: 'it' with 'depend' requires third person singular verb form 'depends' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6 and 2 overlap; use ID 6 per list). Also 'references' is incorrect word choice; 'preferences' fits context. Suggestion: use 'it depends' and replace 'references' with 'preferences'.

× If I am with my friends or my peers I would prefer happy music as it's cheer me up and it will make me stress free.

✓ If I am with my friends or my peers, I would prefer happy music because it cheers me up and makes me stress-free.

Third person singular verb forms required: 'it' takes 'cheers' not 'cheer'; general present tense requires 'makes' not 'make'. Use 'because' for reason. Also 'stress-free' needs hyphen as adjective. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with subject and use correct connectors.

× But sometimes when I feel overwhelmed and I don't know what to do then I will try to listen some sad musics.

✓ But sometimes when I feel overwhelmed and don't know what to do, I try to listen to some sad music.

'Listen' requires the preposition 'to' (related to preposition, ID 11) and after 'try' with habitual present use simple present 'try', not 'will try'. 'Musics' is uncountable--use 'music' (singular/uncountable, ID 1/22). Also 'to listen to' is the correct verb + preposition pattern. Suggestion: use 'listen to some sad music' and keep tense consistent.

× Yes, absolutely. Energetic music always make me feel more amazed and it was a great source of amusement and it always make me make more intense because it's includes all kinds of genre.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Energetic music always makes me feel more excited; it is a great source of amusement and often makes me feel more intense because it includes all kinds of genres.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement: 'music' requires 'makes' not 'make' (third person singular, ID 2/6). 'Amazed' is not the best collocation here; 'excited' fits better. Tense consistency: use present 'is' instead of 'was'. Word order and verb usage: 'make me make more intense' is ungrammatical—use 'makes me feel more intense'. 'Includes' needs to agree with 'it' (correct) and 'genre' should be plural 'genres' or 'genres' as countable (ID 1). Also remove repetitive 'always' placement and use connectors ';' or 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, choose correct collocations like 'feel excited' and keep consistent present tense.