Music— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific reason with concise supporting detail. Avoid tense and article errors, and keep to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Ví dụ: I prefer happy music. I usually listen to upbeat songs because they help me relax and lift my mood after a long day at school.

Gợi ý: Give a direct yes/no answer and follow with a clear reason and a specific example. Remove filler words and correct grammar (verb forms, articles). Use a linking phrase such as "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, happy music does make me feel more excited because its fast tempo and upbeat lyrics energize me. For example, I often play lively pop songs after work to feel more alert and positive.

× I am really into happy music because it helped me feel more comfortable and funny after a long day school.

✓ I am really into happy music because it helps me feel more comfortable and happier after a long school day.

The sentence mixes tenses: 'I am really into' is present while 'helped' is past. Use present simple 'helps' to match ongoing preference. 'funny' is wrong adjective for a feeling; use 'happier'. Also add article 'a' before 'long school day' and reorder to 'long school day' for natural word order.

× Yes, I sure uh where I want to umm to realize I often uh, listening to music because it help me choose and more comfortable after a long day work.

✓ Yes, I do. I often listen to music because it helps me relax and feel more comfortable after a long day at work.

The original contains fillers and disfluent fragments. 'I often listening' is incorrect structure; use present simple 'I often listen'. 'it help' should be 'it helps' to agree with third-person singular (music helps). 'choose' is likely wrong word; replaced with 'relax'. Add preposition 'at' in 'at work' and reorder phrase to 'long day at work' for natural English.