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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you have a favorite teacher?

Thí sinh

No, when I was at school, I don't have every teacher.

Giám khảo

Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

Thí sinh

Maybe, but no, I don't really want it.

Giám khảo

Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?

Thí sinh

Yes, I remember every teacher. Umm, who was in my school, for example, teacher math, uh, Russian language, teacher geography, biology.

Giám khảo

Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?

Thí sinh

No, I don't see. They.

Giám khảo

In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?

Thí sinh

My favorite teacher helping me for pass exam in 9 and 11 classes.

Giám khảo

Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?

Thí sinh

Teacher in my primary school was kind and helpful, and teacher in my high school was. Uh, fun and. It's not.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you have a favorite teacher?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Ответ неестественен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Нужно прямо ответить на вопрос, затем кратко пояснить причину. Используйте прошедшее время и избегайте лишних слов. Например: "No, I didn’t have a single favourite teacher at school because I liked different teachers for different subjects." Также следите за согласованием времен и формой отрицания (didn't have).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a single favourite teacher at school because I liked different teachers for different subjects.

Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Ответ противоречив и неясен. Нужно выбрать чёткую позицию и пояснить причину с одной-двумя поддерживающими фразами. Используйте связки (however, because) для логики. Например: «No, I don’t want to be a teacher because I prefer working with technology rather than teaching.»

Ví dụ: No, I don’t want to be a teacher because I prefer working with technology and find other careers more interesting.

Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Ответ расплывчат и излишне перечисляющий. Лучше назвать конкретного учителя и объяснить, почему вы его запомнили, используя связки (for example, because). Избегайте неуверённых междометий (umm, uh).

Ví dụ: Yes, I especially remember my math teacher because she always explained difficult topics clearly and encouraged us to solve extra problems.

Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: Ответ фрагментарен и грамматически неверен. Дайте полное предложение и объясните причину кратко. Используйте связки (because, since) и корректную форму глагола (see/contact).

Ví dụ: No, I’m not in contact with them anymore because we moved to different cities after school.

In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Грамматическая ошибка (времена и форма). Нужно сформулировать предложение в прошедшем времени и конкретизировать вклад учителя, с использованием союзов (by, so that).

Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helped me by giving extra lessons and practice tests so that I could pass the exams in ninth and eleventh grades.

Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Ответ неполный и неструктурирован. Дайте чёткое сравнение, используя сравнительные конструкции and linking words (while, whereas, although). Будьте конкретны в описаниях и избегайте пауз и незавершённых фраз.

Ví dụ: I liked my primary school teachers for their kindness and support, whereas my high school teachers were more relaxed and made lessons fun.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× No, when I was at school, I don't have every teacher.

No, when I was at school, I didn't have a favorite teacher.

The student mixes past context 'when I was at school' with present tense 'don't have'. Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the time frame and use 'a favorite teacher' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past situations and include an article before 'favorite teacher'.

Modal verb usage

× Maybe, but no, I don't really want it.

Maybe, but no, I don't really want to be a teacher.

The original sentence uses 'want it' which is unnatural because the verb 'want' should be followed by an infinitive when referring to an action. Use 'want to be a teacher' to specify the desire. Also keep tense present to answer a future career question. Suggestion: Use 'want to' + base verb to express desire about actions.

Present tense issue

× Yes, I remember every teacher. Umm, who was in my school, for example, teacher math, uh, Russian language, teacher geography, biology.

Yes, I remember many teachers who were at my school, for example my math teacher, my Russian teacher, my geography teacher, and my biology teacher.

The sentence has awkward structure and missing articles and possessive adjectives. 'Who was in my school' is incorrect for referring to multiple people — use 'who were at my school' or restructure. Add 'my' before each teacher and use plural verbs 'were'. Suggestion: Use 'my + subject + teacher' and match verb number ('were') for plural subjects.

Sentence structure errors

× No, I don't see. They.

No, I don't keep in touch with them.

Original fragment is incomplete and lacks a clear verb and object. 'I don't see. They.' is ungrammatical. Use a complete clause such as 'I don't keep in touch with them' to answer a question about contact. Suggestion: Provide a full clause with verb 'keep in touch' or 'see' plus object 'them'.

Incorrect use of the present participle

× My favorite teacher helping me for pass exam in 9 and 11 classes.

My favorite teacher helped me pass the exams in 9th and 11th grade.

The student used present participle 'helping' and incorrect preposition 'for pass'. The action refers to past events, so use past tense 'helped'. Use 'helped me pass' and correct noun forms 'exams' and ordinal grade forms '9th and 11th grade'. Suggestion: Use past tense for past events and the structure 'helped me pass the exam(s)'.

Comparative and superlative errors

× Teacher in my primary school was kind and helpful, and teacher in my high school was. Uh, fun and. It's not.

My primary school teacher was kind and helpful, and my high school teacher was more fun, but not as kind.

The original has sentence fragments and unclear comparison. Use complete clauses and clarify comparison with 'more' and 'not as'. Include possessive 'my' and maintain past tense 'was'. Suggestion: Use full comparative structures like 'more ... than' or 'not as ... as' and avoid fragments.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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