Teachers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (e.g., "she had she have").

Ví dụ: Yes. My favorite teacher is my A-level biology teacher. She was extremely patient and always stayed after class to answer our questions, which helped me understand difficult topics much better.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, then provide a clear reason with correct vocabulary. Remove redundancy ("patient patience") and use linking words like "because" or "however" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I don't plan to become a teacher, because I prefer working behind the scenes and I don't think I have enough patience for classroom teaching. However, I might consider trying it briefly in the future to gain experience.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then give one or two specific examples of what made him memorable. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and correct small grammar issues (e.g., "Not only did he teach well").

Ví dụ: Yes. I still remember my accounting teacher, Mr. Kelvin, because he was both cheerful and professional. For example, he used real-life examples and clear explanations that made difficult concepts easy to understand.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give one clear reason using correct tense and word choice. Avoid vague phrasing like "advanced gadgets" — be specific (e.g., "contact information"), and use linking words such as "because" and "so".

Ví dụ: Not really. I don't keep in touch with them because we didn't save their contact information when I was in primary school, so I no longer have a way to contact them.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence describing how the teacher helped, then give a specific example and use correct verb forms. Avoid fragmented sentences and repetition; use linking words like "for example" or "so".

Ví dụ: She helped me by answering my many questions outside class, which allowed me to fully understand difficult topics. For example, she spent extra time after lessons explaining concepts and giving additional practice problems.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer and then a brief reason using linking words. Be specific about what qualities are similar or different to make the comparison more informative.

Ví dụ: I don't prefer one over the other; I appreciate both. Both primary and high school teachers were caring and supportive, although primary teachers focused more on basic skills while high school teachers prepared us for exams.

× Not only she is kind to us, but she had she have the patience of the whole world to answer our questions, although it was relentless.

✓ Not only is she kind to us, but she has the patience of the whole world to answer our questions, even when they were relentless.

The sentence has incorrect word order for 'not only... but' and incorrect pronoun/auxiliary use 'had she have'. Also 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject (third person). 'Although it was relentless' is awkward; 'even when they were relentless' clarifies that questions were relentless. Improve by using correct inversion after 'not only' and matching subject-verb agreement.

× I absolutely do not see myself pursuing that career, but maybe one day I might try it out.

✓ I absolutely do not see myself pursuing that career, but maybe one day I might try it.

Redundant phrasal verb 'try it out' is acceptable but 'try it' is more natural. No major grammar error; kept tense and pronouns. This suggestion refines word choice rather than correcting a strict grammatical rule.

× And one main contributing factor is that I don't think I have a huge amount of patient patience and I love to work behind the scenes more.

✓ One main contributing factor is that I don't think I have a great deal of patience, and I prefer to work behind the scenes.

'Patient patience' is redundant and 'huge amount of' pairs awkwardly with 'patience'; use 'a great deal of patience'. 'Love to work behind the scenes more' is informal; 'prefer to work behind the scenes' is clearer. Adjusted adjective/adverb usage and word choice for naturalness.

× Not only he teaches well, but the information and knowledge he gave us was easy to absorb and understand.

✓ Not only does he teach well, but the information and knowledge he gave us were easy to absorb and understand.

Use inversion after 'not only' ('Not only does he teach well'). Also verb agreement: 'information and knowledge' is a compound subject requiring plural verb 'were'. Maintain past tense 'gave' for the teacher's past actions.

× Not really because back in primary school we don't have advanced gadgets to save our teachers number, hence I'm not in contact with any of them.

✓ Not really, because back in primary school we didn't have advanced gadgets to save our teachers' numbers, so I'm not in contact with any of them.

Tense should be past ('didn't have') to match 'back in primary school'. Use possessive 'teachers' numbers' and plural 'numbers'. 'Hence' is formal and the sentence flows better with 'so'. Also add a comma for clarity.

× As a student who really loved asking question to the teacher so that I could finally fully understand the whole course and topic.

✓ I was a student who really loved asking questions to the teacher so that I could fully understand the whole course and topic.

Original is a sentence fragment without a main verb for the clause; making it 'I was a student...' completes the sentence. Also 'asking question' should be plural 'asking questions' and 'finally fully' is redundant so 'fully' suffices.

× My favorite teacher had been with me through the whole journey and answer every single question during her extra time.

✓ My favorite teacher was with me through the whole journey and answered every single question during her extra time.

Tense consistency: 'had been' is unnecessary unless contrasting with another past event; simple past 'was' fits. 'Answer' should be past 'answered' to match. Ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent past tense.

× She educates me extra knowledge.

✓ She taught me additional knowledge.

'Educates me extra knowledge' is unidiomatic. Use past tense 'taught' to match previous past-tense statements and 'additional knowledge' or 'extra knowledge' with correct adjective placement. This corrects adjective/adverb and verb tense usage.

× Frankly speaking, I love all of them and I don't see a significant difference between my primary school teacher and my high school teacher.

✓ Frankly speaking, I love all of them and I don't see a significant difference between my primary school teachers and my high school teachers.

The comparison is between groups, so plural 'teachers' should be used for both 'primary school teachers' and 'high school teachers'. This fixes subject-number agreement and makes the sentence logical.

× They are both just as helpful and kind to all of us, but just at different ages.

✓ They are both just as helpful and kind to all of us, but at different stages of our lives.

'Different ages' is awkward when referring to teachers; 'different stages of our lives' is more natural. This revises pronoun reference and phrasing for clarity while keeping meaning.