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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you have a favorite teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, my favorite teacher is my physique teacher. His class is very interesting. He always teach us the knowledge with several simple example.

Giám khảo

Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

Thí sinh

Actually, I will not. Teaching people requires a lot of patience. I want to be an engineer instead because I'm good at math.

Giám khảo

Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?

Thí sinh

Yes, I still remember my favorite teacher, my physics teacher. He always teaching us the knowledge in a simple way with many easy examples.

Giám khảo

Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. My math teacher in the primary school really helps me a lot. He not only taught me the lesson of math but also gave me the lesson in life.

Giám khảo

In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?

Thí sinh

My favorite teacher helped me in 2 important ways. First, he showed me effective study techniques such as summarizing notes and using spaced reputation, which helped me learn more quickly. Second, he taught me time management skills and encouraged me to get realistic goals which improve my confidence and results.

Giám khảo

Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like my primary school math teacher more than my high school teachers because he not only taught me how to learn the knowledge, but also taught me how to be a better person.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you have a favorite teacher?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体明确,但存在语法和用词错误,影响自然度。建议:1) 修正词汇和拼写(physique → physics 或 PE,根据语境;teach → teaches;example → examples)。2) 精简并用一到两句表达主体,再补充一两个具体细节(例如他如何上课、举了什么例子)。3) 使用连接词提高连贯性,例如 'because' 或 'for example'。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher is my physics teacher because his lessons are always very engaging. He explains difficult concepts with simple experiments and real‑life examples, which makes the topics easy to understand.

Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答较清晰且有理由支持,但可更自然和礼貌。建议:1) 用更自然的表达代替 'I will not'(例如 'No, I don't' 或 'I don't plan to')。2) 用连接词顺滑衔接原因(e.g. 'because' 或 'so')。3) 可补充简短细节说明为何适合工程师(例如喜欢解决问题)。

Ví dụ: No, I don't plan to become a teacher. Teaching requires a great deal of patience, and I prefer engineering because I'm good at math and enjoy solving practical problems.

Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 答案有重复且有语法问题('teaching' → 'taught' 或 'teaches' 取决时态);可避免与第一题内容重复。建议:1) 用过去时或现在时一致表达(例如 'He used to teach')。2) 提供具体记忆细节,如一次特别的课堂或示范。3) 使用连接词如 'for instance' 增强例证性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still remember my physics teacher. He used to explain difficult ideas in very simple ways; for instance, he demonstrated gravity using a ball and a ramp, which made the concept clear to everyone.

Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答简明且有内容,但语言稍显笨拙和不太自然。建议:1) 改进措辞('primary school' 前可去掉 'the','helps' → 'helped' 根据时态)。2) 具体说明如何保持联系(例如通过社ial media 或回访)或举例说明老师教的生活道理。3) 使用连接词如 'not only... but also...' 正确搭配时态。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am. My primary school math teacher helped me a lot; he not only taught me mathematics but also taught me important life lessons, such as persistence and responsibility. We still keep in touch by messaging occasionally.

In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,有两点支撑,但存在词汇错误和语法问题('spaced reputation' → 'spaced repetition';时态与搭配需调整)。建议:1) 使用准确术语并纠正拼写。2) 每一点用一两句具体说明效果或举例(例如如何用间隔重复记单词)。3) 注意动词时态一致并用连接词如 'first'、'second'、'as a result'。

Ví dụ: He helped me in two main ways. First, he taught me study techniques like summarizing notes and using spaced repetition — for example, reviewing vocabulary at increasing intervals — which made my learning more efficient. Second, he taught me time management and encouraged me to set realistic goals, which improved my confidence and exam results.

Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答明确且有原因,但措辞可更自然流畅。建议:1) 将 'learn the knowledge' 改为更自然的表达 like 'how to learn' 或 'how to study effectively'。2) 可补充具体事例说明老师如何影响品格(例如鼓励、榜样行为)。3) 使用连接词如 'because' 引出原因并保证句子简洁。

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer my primary school math teacher because he showed me how to learn effectively and also taught me important values like honesty and perseverance by setting a good example.

Ngữ pháp

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× His class is very interesting. He always teach us the knowledge with several simple example.

His class is very interesting. He always teaches us the knowledge with several simple examples.

这是主谓一致和单复数的问题(Subject-verb agreement & Singular and plural)。动词 teach 在第三人称单数主语 He 后要加 -s,应该用 teaches;example 在此处为可数名词且前有 several,必须用复数 examples。建议:遇到第三人称单数主语时动词加 -s;与 several、many 等连用时名词用复数。

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× Actually, I will not. Teaching people requires a lot of patience. I want to be an engineer instead because I'm good at math.

Actually, I will not. Teaching people requires a lot of patience. I want to be an engineer instead because I'm good at math.

该句整体时态正确,无需修改。'will not' 用于将来时表示拒绝,'requires' 用于一般现在时描述普遍事实,匹配语境。

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× He always teaching us the knowledge in a simple way with many easy examples.

He always teaches us the knowledge in a simple way with many easy examples.

这是动词 -ing 形式误用的问题。句子中主语 He 与频率副词 always 搭配时应使用一般现在时 teaches,而不是进行时 teaching。建议:描述经常性动作用一般现在时(He always does ...)。

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× He not only taught me the lesson of math but also gave me the lesson in life.

He not only taught me math lessons but also gave me lessons about life.

主要问题是介词和短语搭配不当。英语中更常用 math lessons 或 taught me math(不加 of),关于生活的表达用 lessons about life 更自然。建议:使用固定搭配 'teach someone math' 或 'teach math lessons',以及 'lessons about life'。

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× My favorite teacher helped me in 2 important ways. First, he showed me effective study techniques such as summarizing notes and using spaced reputation, which helped me learn more quickly. Second, he taught me time management skills and encouraged me to get realistic goals which improve my confidence and results.

My favorite teacher helped me in two important ways. First, he showed me effective study techniques such as summarizing notes and using spaced repetition, which helped me learn more quickly. Second, he taught me time management skills and encouraged me to set realistic goals which improved my confidence and results.

这里有多处问题:'2' 用词风格应写成 two(非必需但更正式);'spaced reputation' 是拼写/用词错误,应为 'spaced repetition'(名词);'encouraged me to get realistic goals' 用法不当,应该用 'set realistic goals';最后时态不一致,前半句使用过去时 helped,后半句应将 improve 改为过去式 improved 以保持时态一致。建议:注意拼写常见短语(spaced repetition),使用正确动词搭配(set goals),并保持句子时态一致。

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× My favorite teacher is my physique teacher.

My favorite teacher is my physical education teacher.

这是单词选择及单复数/词形问题。原句用 physique(身体的轮廓)错误地代替表达体育教师的 'physical education' 或 'PE'。建议使用 'physical education teacher' 或 'PE teacher'。

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× My math teacher in the primary school really helps me a lot.

My math teacher in primary school really helped me a lot.

这里主要是时态和冠词使用。提到过去与小学老师的关系,应该用过去时 helped;'in the primary school' 中不需要定冠词,常用 'in primary school'。建议:描述过去经历用过去时,固定短语用法留意冠词。

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× Yes, I like my primary school math teacher more than my high school teachers because he not only taught me how to learn the knowledge, but also taught me how to be a better person.

Yes, I like my primary school math teacher more than my high school teachers because he not only taught me how to learn but also taught me how to be a better person.

主要是语法冗余和习惯表达问题。'learn the knowledge' 不够自然,英语中通常说 'learn' 或 'learn how to learn'。时态过去式 taught 使用正确。建议使用更地道表达 'learn' 或 'learn how to learn'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestingAbsorbing
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
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