Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, in my school I have a favorite teacher. I like her a lot because of the teaching.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
The answer is no and yes because it depends on my career whether I pursue this this profession or not. But doing teaching is not a bad option actually.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do have a T-shirt that I like the most in my school. I still like her because of their behaviour, their teaching style and much more.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Thí sinh
Yes, I still in touch with my primary school teachers. I am because I believe. Given a long term relationship with my favorite ones because of their positive attitude and.
Giám khảo
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Thí sinh
In my 9th class my favorite teacher helped me scoring a good marks because in my previous previous class I don't deem a good Max so for the next class she teach me a very good so can so I can.
Giám khảo
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because of the dear attitude, the behavior they encourage us primary school teachers give. Give importance to us. Deal. How to deal?
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Make the answer more specific and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons and a short example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid repeating words.
Ví dụ: Yes. My favorite teacher at school is Ms. Khan because she explains difficult topics clearly and is very patient with students. For example, she used real-life examples in math class which helped me understand formulas much better.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Give a direct, single position first (yes or no), then briefly explain why using linking words. Avoid repeating words and keep sentences concise (max 4–5).
Ví dụ: I’m not sure, but probably not. It depends on my future career plans; however, I think teaching is a good option because it allows you to help others and develop communication skills.
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and coherently. Correct irrelevant or confusing phrases (e.g. 'T-shirt' seems wrong). Give specific characteristics of the teacher and a short example to support your point.
Ví dụ: Yes, I still remember my history teacher, Mr. Ahmed. I liked him because he had a friendly attitude and used stories to make lessons interesting, for example he often related events to everyday life which made history memorable.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct and coherent. Start with a clear statement, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid unfinished phrases.
Ví dụ: Yes, I am still in touch with some of my primary school teachers because they supported me a lot when I was young. For example, my first grade teacher still messages me to ask about my studies and give advice, which I appreciate.
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Organize the answer: state the effect first, then explain how the teacher helped using clear sentences and linking words. Correct grammar and give a concise example of actions the teacher took.
Ví dụ: My favorite teacher helped me improve my grades in 9th grade. She gave extra tutoring after class and provided clear practice problems, so I understood the topics better and my marks increased significantly.
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Express a clear comparison with one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'whereas' and give an example of how primary teachers were different.
Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers because they were more caring and encouraged us to try new things. For example, my primary teachers always praised my efforts and gave constructive feedback, while high school teachers focused more on exam results.
× Yes, in my school I have a favorite teacher. I like her a lot because of the teaching.
✓ Yes, at my school I have a favorite teacher. I like her a lot because of her teaching.
Problems: incorrect preposition 'in' for 'school', missing possessive pronoun 'her' before 'teaching', and article/word choice. Use 'at my school' for being enrolled/attending, and 'her teaching' to show the teacher's teaching is the reason. This corrects subject-verb agreement and clarity. (Grammar problem type IDs: 11,12,22,27).
× The answer is no and yes because it depends on my career whether I pursue this this profession or not. But doing teaching is not a bad option actually.
✓ My answer is both no and yes because it depends on my career and whether I pursue this profession or not. But becoming a teacher is not a bad option.
Problems: awkward phrase 'The answer is no and yes' and repetition 'this this'; incorrect gerund 'doing teaching'. Use 'My answer is both no and yes' for clarity, remove duplicate word, and use 'becoming a teacher' or 'becoming a teacher' instead of 'doing teaching'. (Grammar problem type IDs: 6,26).
× Yes, I do have a T-shirt that I like the most in my school. I still like her because of their behaviour, their teaching style and much more.
✓ Yes, I do have a teacher that I liked most in my school. I still like her because of her behaviour, her teaching style, and many other things.
Problems: 'T-shirt' is wrong word for 'teacher'; number/possessive disagreement using 'their' for singular 'her'. Use 'teacher' and consistent singular pronouns 'her' and 'her teaching style', and 'many other things' for idiomatic English. (Grammar problem type IDs: 1,12).
× Yes, I still in touch with my primary school teachers. I am because I believe. Given a long term relationship with my favorite ones because of their positive attitude and.
✓ Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teachers. I am because I believe we have a long-term relationship with my favourite teachers due to their positive attitudes.
Problems: missing auxiliary verb 'am' in 'still in touch', sentence fragments 'I am because I believe' and incomplete final clause. Combine into coherent sentences: 'I am still in touch...' and explain reason: 'because we have a long-term relationship... due to their positive attitudes.' This fixes subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. (Grammar problem type IDs: 27,6,26).
× In my 9th class my favorite teacher helped me scoring a good marks because in my previous previous class I don't deem a good Max so for the next class she teach me a very good so can so I can.
✓ In ninth grade my favorite teacher helped me score good marks because in my previous class I did not perform well, so for the next class she taught me very well and I improved.
Problems: wrong tense and verb forms 'helped me scoring' should be 'helped me score'; 'don't deem a good Max' is unclear and incorrect; repetition 'previous previous'; 'she teach me' should be past 'taught me'. Also use 'ninth grade' and 'did not perform well' and 'I improved' for clarity. This corrects past tense usage and verb forms. (Grammar problem type IDs: 5,22).
× Yes, I do like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because of the dear attitude, the behavior they encourage us primary school teachers give. Give importance to us. Deal. How to deal?
✓ Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers to my high school teachers because of their caring attitude and the way they encouraged and supported us. They gave us importance and taught us how to behave.
Problems: awkward comparative phrasing 'do like...more than' should be 'prefer X to Y'; problematic nouns 'dear attitude' should be 'caring attitude'; fractured sentences and unclear clauses 'they encourage us primary school teachers give'. Recast into clear sentences: 'because of their caring attitude and the way they encouraged and supported us. They gave us importance and taught us how to behave.' This fixes comparison, article and word-choice errors. (Grammar problem type IDs: 25,22,13).