Teachers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Говорите полными, грамматически корректными предложениями. Уберите междометия и посторонние слова (uh, umm). Уточните имя аккуратно и исправьте конструкцию времени (e.g., "I've been learning English since third grade"). Старайтесь не использовать словосочетания вроде "extremely Sevna" — это неверно по смыслу.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. My favourite teacher is my English teacher, Sevna. I've been learning English since third grade, and she has helped me a lot.

Gợi ý: Используйте правильные структуры для выражения желаний и причин. Избегайте грамматических ошибок: «similar like» неверно — используйте «similar to» или «be like». Фразу «I very love her» следует заменить на «I love her very much». Сделайте период логичным и меньше ошибок в будущем времени.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I want to be like my English teacher. I love her very much and I hope my students will respect and enjoy learning with me.

Gợi ý: Делайте предложения грамматически правильными и точными. «There» не нужен; используйте «from my past» или «from school». Слово «attractive» обычно про внешность — лучше «inspiring» или «kind». Исправьте порядок слов: «their teaching was very good and they were understanding.»

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember two teachers from my past. They were very inspiring and their teaching was clear and easy for me to understand.

Gợi ý: Выражайте свои мысли дипломатично и корректно. Фраза «I don't still in touch» неправильна — используйте «I'm not still in touch with» или лучше «I'm not in touch with». Избегайте эмоциональных обвинений без примеров; если нужно, приведите краткое объяснение и переход к тому, что вы делали.

Ví dụ: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers. I felt that some of them were not supportive at the time, so I moved on and focused on learning from other teachers.

Gợi ý: Давайте более связное и конкретное объяснение с объединением идей. Уберите лишние предлоги («gave for us») и используйте более точные глаголы: «taught us vocabulary, had us memorise poems, explained grammar rules, and gave dictation exercises.» Добавьте одно-два примера результата.

Ví dụ: She taught us a lot of vocabulary, made us memorise poems, and explained grammar rules clearly. For example, after her lessons my writing and listening improved a lot because we practised dictations regularly.

Gợi ý: Исправьте грамматику и уберите лишние слова: «they were was some» бессмысленно. Используйте сравнение правильно: «I prefer my primary school teachers because they were more understanding and explained things more clearly.» Вместо общих фраз добавьте одно конкретное различие.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers. They were more patient and explained topics more clearly, which made it easier for me to learn.

× Her name is extremely Sevna.

✓ Her name is Sevna.

'Extremely' is an adverb used to modify adjectives or other adverbs, not a proper noun. It is incorrect to place 'extremely' before a name. Remove the adverb to state the name correctly. Suggestion: say 'Her name is Sevna.' or if you mean to emphasize, use 'Her name is Sevna, and she is an excellent teacher.'

× I have learned English, uh, since my third class.

✓ I have been learning English since third grade.

The phrase 'since my third class' is unnatural. With 'since' and a starting point, present perfect continuous ('have been learning') is preferred for an ongoing action. Use 'third grade' (or 'grade three') to indicate the school year. Suggestion: 'I have been learning English since third grade.'

× I really want to be a teacher in the future because I want to be similar like my teacher.

✓ I really want to be a teacher in the future because I want to be like my teacher.

The phrase 'similar like' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'like' alone to indicate similarity. Also 'be similar to' would be correct but here 'be like' is more natural. Suggestion: 'I want to be like my teacher.'

× I very love her and I want the child will love me too.

✓ I love her very much and I want the children to love me too.

'Very love' is incorrect; use 'love very much' or 'really love'. 'The child will love me too' mixes structures: after 'want' use a to-infinitive ('want the children to...'). Also plural 'children' fits general meaning. Suggestion: 'I love her very much, and I want the children to love me too.'

× Yeah, I have two teachers there.

✓ Yes, I had two teachers there.

Context asks about a teacher from your past; use past tense ('had') rather than present. Also 'there' is vague but acceptable if referring to that school. Suggestion: 'Yes, I had two teachers there.'

× I still remember because they were very wonderful and attractive.

✓ I still remember them because they were very kind and inspiring.

'Attractive' usually refers to physical appearance and is odd for teachers; 'wonderful' is acceptable but 'kind' or 'inspiring' is more natural. Also add 'them' after 'remember'. Suggestion: 'I still remember them because they were very kind and inspiring.'

× I think they teaching are very cool and understanding for me.

✓ I think their teaching was very good and helpful to me.

The original has incorrect word order and forms: 'they teaching' is ungrammatical. Use the noun 'teaching' with a possessive ('their teaching') or a gerund phrase. 'Cool and understanding for me' is awkward; use 'good and helpful to me.' Suggestion: 'I think their teaching was very good and helpful to me.'

× Unfortunately, I don't still in touch with my primary school teachers because I think they're rude and they don't help me and my classmates.

✓ Unfortunately, I'm not still in touch with my primary school teachers because I think they're rude and they didn't help me and my classmates.

'Don't still in touch' is ungrammatical. Use 'I'm not still in touch' or preferably 'I'm no longer in touch.' Also if referring to past behaviour use past tense 'didn't help' for actions in the past. Suggestion: 'Unfortunately, I'm no longer in touch with my primary school teachers because I thought they were rude and didn't help me and my classmates.'

× I think it's really bad but I know how to deal with it.

✓ I think it's really bad, but I know how to deal with it.

This sentence only needed a comma for clarity; pronoun use 'it' is acceptable. Keep the structure and tense. Suggestion: add a comma: 'I think it's really bad, but I know how to deal with it.'

× She gave for us a lot of words and we learned poems by heart and we learned different rules.

✓ She gave us a lot of words; we learned poems by heart and we learned different rules.

'Gave for us' is incorrect: the verb 'give' takes an indirect object without 'for' -> 'gave us'. Also sentence flow benefits from punctuation. Suggestion: 'She gave us a lot of words. We learned poems by heart and different rules.'

× And we wrote a dictation.

✓ And we wrote dictations.

'A dictation' could be correct singularly, but typically students write multiple dictations; adjust to plural if intended. If only one, keep singular but context suggests practice. No grammatical error beyond potential number. Suggestion: choose 'We also wrote dictations.'

× Absolutely. I like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because they were was some.

✓ Absolutely. I like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because they were more understanding.

The fragment 'they were was some' is ungrammatical and unclear. Remove it and use a clear comparative statement. Suggestion: 'I like my primary school teachers more because they were more understanding.'

× They were more understanding and helpful for us.

✓ They were more understanding and helpful to us.

'Helpful for us' is less natural than 'helpful to us.' Use 'to' with 'helpful.' Suggestion: 'They were more understanding and helpful to us.'

× They explained something where more clearly.

✓ They explained things more clearly.

'Explained something where more clearly' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'things' or 'something' without 'where' and place 'more clearly' after the verb. Suggestion: 'They explained things more clearly.'