Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do have a favorite teacher. My high school is English teacher because she kind and she kind of always happy.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
No I don't because I want communicate with many new teacher and speak with they.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Thí sinh
Yes, I still vividly remember a math teacher because he is kind and he helped for many people, many students.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Thí sinh
No, I don't see you in talk with my primary school teacher. We got it and for three years and I don't can I can't still interrupt with my primary school teacher.
Giám khảo
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Thí sinh
My favorite teacher helped me improve my studies.
Giám khảo
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Thí sinh
I like my primary school teacher more than my high school because they have they take care of their soon.
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Ngắn gọn: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi mở rộng với chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tên môn, tính cách, hành động cụ thể cô làm). Ngữ pháp: Sửa cấu trúc câu (My high school English teacher... she is kind and is always happy). Lựa chọn từ: tránh lặp từ ('kind' lặp nhiều), dùng từ thay thế (friendly, cheerful). Liên kết: thêm một cụm kết nối để giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thích cô ấy (for example, because...). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. My favorite teacher is my high school English teacher because she was friendly and always cheerful. For example, she spent extra time after class to help students with pronunciation and gave useful feedback on our essays.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 36.0Gợi ý: Trả lời trực tiếp trước rồi giải thích rõ ràng. Ngữ pháp: sửa cấu trúc (I don't, because I want to communicate with many new people / work in a different field). Thay từ không chính xác ('teacher' -> 'people' hoặc 'colleagues'), sửa đại từ ('they' -> 'them'). Thêm liên kết lý do (because / so). Giữ câu ngắn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi cơ bản.
Ví dụ: No, I don't. I prefer a job where I can meet and communicate with many different people, rather than working as a teacher, because I enjoy networking and variety in my daily tasks.
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu chi tiết cụ thể: tên môn, tính cách, ví dụ hành động giúp đỡ cụ thể. Ngữ pháp: thì phù hợp (I still vividly remember my math teacher because he was kind and helped many students). Tránh lặp từ, dùng từ phong phú hơn (supportive, patient). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (for example, he...). Giữ 2–3 câu.
Ví dụ: Yes, I still vividly remember my math teacher because he was very supportive and patient. For example, he stayed after class to explain difficult problems and often gave us extra practice to help us understand.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: Rất cần rõ ràng và ngắn gọn. Trả lời trực tiếp (No, I'm not). Giải thích lý do bằng câu đơn giản và đúng ngữ pháp (We lost touch after three years / I moved and lost contact). Tránh dùng từ không đúng ('interrupt') và lỗi đại từ. Dùng liên từ nếu cần (because / so). Giữ 1–2 câu.
Ví dụ: No, I'm not. We lost touch after I moved to another city, so I haven't been in contact with my primary school teachers for several years.
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu chi tiết cụ thể cách cô ấy giúp (ví dụ: cải thiện kỹ năng, phương pháp học, cung cấp phản hồi). Dùng kết cấu rõ ràng: topic sentence + 1 supporting example using linking words (for example, by...). Tránh chung chung, cung cấp kết quả cụ thể nếu có (my grades improved, I became more confident).
Ví dụ: My favorite teacher helped me improve my studies by giving clear explanations and useful feedback. For example, after her guidance I understood grammar better and my exam scores improved.
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng: nêu thích hơn ai và vì sao. Ngữ pháp: sửa cấu trúc (I like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because they took care of us). Sử dụng động từ đúng thì (took care) và đại từ phù hợp (us/the students). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể (they were more caring and attentive). Giữ 2 câu tối đa.
Ví dụ: I preferred my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because they were more caring and attentive. For example, they often checked on our well-being and helped us with personal problems as well as schoolwork.
× My high school is English teacher because she kind and she kind of always happy.
✓ My high school English teacher is kind and is kind of always happy.
The student misordered noun phrases and omitted the verb 'is' before 'kind'. Place the noun phrase 'high school English teacher' together; use 'is' to link subject and adjective. 'Kind of' is informal; consider 'quite' for clarity.
× No I don't because I want communicate with many new teacher and speak with they.
✓ No, I don't because I want to communicate with many new teachers and speak with them.
After 'want' use the infinitive 'to communicate'. 'Teacher' must be plural to match 'many', and pronoun 'they' should be 'them' as the object of the verb.
× Yes, I still vividly remember a math teacher because he is kind and he helped for many people, many students.
✓ Yes, I still vividly remember a math teacher because he was kind and he helped many people, many students.
Tense should be past 'was' to match 'remember' of past relationship. 'Helped' does not take 'for' in this context; remove 'for' and keep the object 'many people'.
× No, I don't see you in talk with my primary school teacher. We got it and for three years and I don't can I can't still interrupt with my primary school teacher.
✓ No, I don't keep in touch with my primary school teachers. We lost contact three years ago and I still can't contact them.
Original has multiple structural problems and incorrect verbs. Use 'keep in touch with' or 'be in touch with' for relationships, 'lost contact three years ago' for past time, and 'contact them' for attempting communication. Avoid mixing pronouns and unnecessary words.
× My favorite teacher helped me improve my studies.
✓ My favorite teacher helped me improve my studies.
Sentence is grammatically correct: past tense 'helped' appropriately describes a past action. No change needed.
× I like my primary school teacher more than my high school because they have they take care of their soon.
✓ I like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because they took care of us.
Use plural 'teachers' to compare groups. 'They have they take care of their soon' is ungrammatical; use past tense 'took care of' and correct pronoun object 'us'. 'Soon' is incorrect spelling of 'son' but meaning here is 'students' or 'us'.