Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Thí sinh
Definitely yes. I have a teacher who are my math teacher because she's very into intelligence and very noble people for me when he uh, when she teach me, I can learn many things from him and in my opinion she is very good teacher.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
As those years when I was young, I prefer I would love will be teacher in the future because I very interested in the maze and in my opinion, maze is very inter entertainment for me. Uh, when I was young, I really love to solve the maze problem and I spend a little time for this.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Thí sinh
Definitely, yes, I have any kind of teachers in the past, but uh, the most time I remember about my maids teacher because she's very entertained and it's very interesting people for me. I can really, I really can learn many kind of things from him.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Thí sinh
Unfortunately, no, I didn't remember about my primary teacher and. I didn't, I didn't meet him with him. In my opinion, she's very well teacher for me.
Giám khảo
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Thí sinh
If I remembered about it, I have one exam that is a maze exam and this time my maths teacher who are my favorite teacher helps me to solve the math problem and this time I really love him and this time I know about his notch.
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Javobni aniqroq va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri ifodalash uchun qisqartiring va to‘g‘ri zamon, kelishik va jins mosligini ishlating. Mavzuni aniqlovchi boshlang‘ich gap (topic sentence) ayting, keyin 1–2 qo‘shimcha aniq tafsilot bering. Masalan, o‘qituvchingiz nima yoqimli xususiyatlariga ega ekanini va qanday dars uslubi sizga foyda berganini ayting. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (for example, because, so, when) foydalaning.
Ví dụ: Yes. My favourite teacher is my high school maths teacher because she explained difficult concepts clearly and was very patient. For example, she used simple problems and diagrams to help me understand algebra, and she always gave helpful feedback after tests.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Javobni sodda va to‘g‘ri tuzilgan gap bilan boshlang: ha yoki yo‘q va qisqacha sababni ayting. Grammatik xatolarni tuzating (masalan, "math" not "maze"; to‘g‘ri fe’l shakllari). Qo‘shimcha tafsilotni bitta yoki ikkita aniq misol bilan cheklang. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (because, when, for example) foydalaning.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to be a teacher because I enjoy helping others understand maths. When I was young I spent a lot of time solving math problems, and I liked explaining solutions to my friends.
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: Javobni aniqroq qilib, bir o‘qituvchini aniq ko‘rsating va nega uni eslab qolganingizni sabab bilan tushuntiring. Keraksiz takrorlardan qoching va jins hamda ko‘plikni to‘g‘ri ishlating. Qo‘shimcha tafsilotni bitta misol bilan qo‘llab-quvvatlang.
Ví dụ: Yes, I still remember my primary school teacher, Mrs. Ali, because she made lessons fun and encouraged me to read more. For instance, she organized storytelling sessions that increased my confidence in speaking.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Javobni to‘g‘ri va qisqa shaklda bering (Yes/No + sabab). Noaniq takrorlardan va aralash jins ishlatishdan saqlaning. Agar aloqada bo‘lmasangiz, nima sababdan aloqani yo‘qotganingizni yoki hozir qanday his qilayotganingizni qisqacha tushuntiring.
Ví dụ: No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teachers because I moved to another city. I appreciate my first teacher though, because she laid a strong foundation for my learning.
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Điểm: 33.0Gợi ý: Javobni aniq kontekst bilan boshlang va qanday yordam berganini ikki yoki uchta aniq misol bilan tushuntiring. Grammatikalarni tuzating (for example, "math exam", pronouns, verb forms). Bog‘lovchilar (for example, during, therefore, because) bilan fikrlarni bog‘lang va 3–4 jumladan oshirmang.
Ví dụ: She helped me prepare for an important math exam by explaining difficult topics step by step and giving extra practice problems. As a result, I felt more confident and improved my score.
× I have a teacher who are my math teacher because she's very into intelligence and very noble people for me when he uh, when she teach me, I can learn many things from him and in my opinion she is very good teacher.
✓ I have a teacher who is my math teacher because she's very intelligent and a very noble person to me. When she teaches me, I learn many things from her, and in my opinion she is a very good teacher.
Many subject-verb agreement and pronoun errors: 'who are' should be 'who is' because 'who' refers to singular 'teacher' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'She's very into intelligence' is incorrect phrasing; use 'very intelligent' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). 'Very noble people for me' should be 'a very noble person to me' (singular/plural and pronoun use, IDs 1 and 12). Mixed pronouns 'he'/'she'/'him' should consistently be 'she' and object pronoun 'her' (incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). 'When she teach me' requires third person singular verb 'teaches' (third person singular issue, ID 2). Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree in number; keep pronouns consistent and match subject gender; use correct adjective forms (intelligent) and singular/plural nouns (person).
× As those years when I was young, I prefer I would love will be teacher in the future because I very interested in the maze and in my opinion, maze is very inter entertainment for me.
✓ When I was young, I wanted to be a teacher in the future because I was very interested in maths, and in my opinion, maths is very entertaining for me.
Multiple modal and tense errors: 'I prefer I would love will be teacher' mixes modal forms and is ungrammatical (modal verb usage, ID 4). Use a simple past desire 'I wanted' to match 'when I was young' (past tense issue, ID 5). 'I very interested' needs 'was very interested' (past tense/copula, ID 6 and 5). 'Maze' seems intended as 'maths' or 'math'; use correct noun and adjective 'entertaining' instead of 'inter entertainment' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). Suggestions: choose one tense/modal at a time; for past wishes use 'wanted' or 'used to want'; use correct noun and adjective forms ('maths', 'entertaining').
× As those years when I was young, I prefer I would love will be teacher in the future because I very interested in the maze and in my opinion, maze is very inter entertainment for me. Uh, when I was young, I really love to solve the maze problem and I spend a little time for this.
✓ When I was young, I really loved solving math problems and I spent a little time on them.
Problems include tense and verb form issues: 'I really love to solve' should be past 'I really loved solving' to match timeframe (present/past tense issue, IDs 6 and 5). 'I spend a little time for this' should be 'I spent a little time on them' (preposition and past tense errors, IDs 11 and 5). Also use plural 'problems' to match meaning (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Suggestions: match verb tense to context, use gerund for activities enjoyed in past ('loved solving'), and use correct prepositions ('spend time on something').
× Definitely, yes, I have any kind of teachers in the past, but uh, the most time I remember about my maids teacher because she's very entertained and it's very interesting people for me.
✓ Definitely, yes, I had many teachers in the past, but the one I remember most is my maths teacher because she was very entertaining and very interesting to me.
Errors: 'I have any kind of teachers in the past' should be past tense and plural/quantifier corrected to 'I had many teachers' (tense and quantifier/plural issue, IDs 5 and 14 and 1). 'The most time I remember about' should be 'the one I remember most' (sentence structure and pronoun/reference, ID 26 and 12). 'Maids teacher' likely 'maths teacher' (word choice). 'She's very entertained' is wrong; use 'she was very entertaining' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and tense, IDs 13 and 5). 'It's very interesting people for me' must be singular and 'interesting to me' (singular/plural and preposition/pronoun errors, IDs 1, 11, 12). Suggestions: ensure correct tense (past for past experiences), use appropriate quantifiers ('many'), and correct adjective forms ('entertaining', 'interesting to me').
× I can really, I really can learn many kind of things from him.
✓ I can really learn many kinds of things from her.
Pronoun and number errors: 'from him' should be 'from her' to match earlier reference to 'she' (incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). 'Many kind of things' should be 'many kinds of things' or 'many kinds of things'/'many kinds of things' (singular/plural and quantifier issue, IDs 1 and 14). Also word order 'I can really learn' is fine—keep consistent. Suggestions: keep pronouns consistent with antecedents and use correct plural forms for 'kinds of'.
× Unfortunately, no, I didn't remember about my primary teacher and. I didn't, I didn't meet him with him. In my opinion, she's very well teacher for me.
✓ Unfortunately no, I don't remember my primary teacher. I haven't met with him. In my opinion, she was a very good teacher for me.
Mixed tense and pronoun errors: 'I didn't remember about' should be present 'I don't remember' if referring now, or past 'I didn't remember'—choose present: 'I don't remember' (present tense issue, ID 6). 'I didn't, I didn't meet him with him' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I haven't met with him' or 'I didn't meet him' (tense and pronoun duplication, IDs 5 and 12). Pronoun inconsistency 'him' vs 'she'—use consistent gender 'she' if teacher female (pronoun error, ID 12). 'Very well teacher' should be 'a very good teacher' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs/article, IDs 13 and 17/22). Suggestions: decide correct tense, remove duplicated pronouns, and use 'a very good teacher'.
× If I remembered about it, I have one exam that is a maze exam and this time my maths teacher who are my favorite teacher helps me to solve the math problem and this time I really love him and this time I know about his notch.
✓ If I remember correctly, I had one exam that was a math exam, and my maths teacher, who was my favorite teacher, helped me to solve the math problems. At that time I really liked her and I learned about her strengths.
Multiple issues: Conditional/time reference needs correct tense: 'If I remembered about it' should be 'If I remember correctly' or 'If I remembered' with matching past (conditional/past tense issue, IDs 5 and 6). 'I have one exam that is a maze exam' should be past 'I had one exam that was a math exam' (there be and tense issues, IDs 3 and 5). 'Who are my favorite teacher' should be 'who was my favorite teacher' (subject-verb agreement and tense, IDs 27 and 5). 'Helps me' should be past 'helped me' (past tense, ID 5). Pronoun 'him' should be 'her' (pronoun error, ID 12). 'I know about his notch' is unclear; replaced with 'I learned about her strengths' to convey intended meaning (word choice and pronoun issues). Suggestions: keep tense consistent for past events, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct pronouns; rephrase unclear expressions with clearer vocabulary ('strengths').