Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要直接并连贯表达理由，避免重复和语法错误。注意：1) 开头用一句主题句直接回答问题；2) 用一到两句具体支持细节并使用连接词（such as, because, for example）；3) 每句保持语法完整，避免无意义词或重复；4) 将句子控制在不超过5句内并使用更准确的词汇（organized, relaxed, improve my mood）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I prefer to keep my belongings organized because a tidy space helps me feel relaxed and focused. For example, when I'm on holiday I pack and arrange my things neatly so I can find everything quickly and enjoy my time without stress.

Gợi ý: 注意时态和词汇搭配的准确性并避免重复。建议：1) 用过去时清晰回答并给出原因；2) 用恰当词汇替换不合适或拼写错误的词（boosted而非 boasted）；3) 用连接词（because, so, for example）串联句子；4) 保持句子完整，避免末尾不完整的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I usually kept my room tidy because an organized space helped me feel calm and boosted my mood. For example, I always put my toys away before going out, which made it easy to find things later.

Gợi ý: 回答要具体说明方法并使用正确的语法。建议：1) 用现在时描述常规行为并用动词不定式或现在分词保持语法一致（before going out）；2) 提供具体步骤或工具（e.g. folders, cable ties）；3) 使用连接词（so, therefore）使逻辑清楚；4) 避免句子不完整。

Ví dụ: I usually keep my desk tidy by clearing papers every evening and storing stationery in boxes, so I can focus better. For example, I use folders for documents and a small drawer for cables to avoid clutter.

Gợi ý: 在阐述观点时要用清晰准确的词汇并提供具体例子。建议：1) 用natural collocations（e.g. being tidy, improve our mood/productivity）；2) 避免语法错误（cannot only... but also...结构）并保持句子完整；3) 提供可操作的例子或结果；4) 控制长度并保持连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Being tidy is important because it improves our mood and makes us more productive. For example, my family spends a few minutes each evening decluttering the workspace and using boxes and folders to organize documents, which saves time during work.

× Yes, absolutely, because I think that keeps things.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because I think that being tidy keeps things in order.

原句缺少明确的主语和完整结构，语义不完整。应使用“being tidy”或“keeping things tidy”作主语补语，表示“整洁”这个行为或状态能使“things”有序。建议把句子补充完整，明确主语和谓语。

× Teddy can make my life regularly and I think it's very clear I will feel relaxed and lift my mood.

✓ Tidiness can make my life more regular, and I think it clearly helps me feel relaxed and lift my mood.

原句中“regularly”是副词，但需修饰名词“life”，应使用形容词“regular”或短语“more regular”。此外“it's very clear I will feel relaxed”表达不自然，改为“it clearly helps me feel relaxed”更符合语法。

× For example, when I'm on holiday, I usually like make my.

✓ For example, when I'm on holiday, I usually like to keep my things tidy.

原句不完整，缺少宾语和动词形式错误。应使用不定式“like to keep”或动名词“like keeping”，并补上宾语如“my things tidy/ my room tidy”。

× Yes, absolutely. I usually kept my room tidy when I was a little girl because a clear and organized space helps me feel relaxed and boasted my mood.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I usually kept my room tidy when I was a little girl because a clear and organized space helped me feel relaxed and boosted my mood.

句子中时态不一致。主句用过去时“kept”，所以后文也应使用过去时“helped”和“boosted”。另外“boasted”拼写错误，应为“boosted”。把动词改为过去时以保持时态一致。

× For example, I usually tidy my room before going out which which makes it easier to find things and the atmosphere is quiet and pleasant which really are.

✓ For example, I usually tidy my room before going out, which makes it easier to find things and creates a quiet and pleasant atmosphere.

原句重复“which which”，并且使用关系代词的位置和句子连接错乱。应用非限制性定语从句“which makes...”来说明结果，同时把“the atmosphere is quiet and pleasant which really are”改为动词结构“creates a quiet and pleasant atmosphere”。避免多余的“which”。

× To be honest, I usually tidy my desk and put my clothes away before I going out, which make it easier to find things and create a peaceful atmosphere for me.

✓ To be honest, I usually tidy my desk and put my clothes away before I go out, which makes it easier to find things and creates a peaceful atmosphere for me.

在时间状语从句中应使用一般现在时“go”而不是“going”。此外主句“which”引导的从句中谓语应与主语（doing these things）一致，使用单数形式“makes”和“creates”。

× For example, I usually make my things organized and make my.

✓ For example, I usually organize my things and keep my desk tidy.

原句不完整，“make my.”缺少宾语和补语。更自然的表达是使用动词“organize”并补上宾语，或用“keep ... tidy”结构。

× Yes, absolutely. The tidy really plays a crucial role in our life because it cannot only lift our most but also can create a more peaceful, productive atmosphere for us.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Tidiness really plays a crucial role in our lives because it can not only lift our mood but also create a more peaceful, productive atmosphere for us.

“The tidy”用法错误，应使用名词“tidiness”。“cannot only... but also”语序错误，正确为“can not only... but also...”。“most”拼写和词义错误，应为“mood”。此外“our life”改为复数“our lives”更自然。

× For example, when we spend families every evening to declutter our workspace and use boxes and folders to keep documents.

✓ For example, when we spend time together every evening decluttering our workspace and using boxes and folders to keep documents, ...

原句结构混乱：“spend families”错误，应为“spend time together”或“spend time as a family”。动名词短语并列时要保持形式一致“decluttering... and using...”。句子结尾省略了主句，应补充完整以表达完整意思。