Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct collocations (tidy, not steady), and simplify ideas. Use one or two supporting reasons with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I like to keep my space tidy because a neat environment helps me relax and focus. For example, when my desk is organised I can find things quickly and feel less stressed.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, reduce hesitations and repeat words. Use past tense correctly and add a brief reason with a linking word like 'because' or 'so'. One or two concise sentences are enough.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. My mother often asked me to tidy my room, but I preferred playing instead, so I rarely cleaned up when I was young.

Gợi ý: Be specific about methods and use present simple. Avoid vague phrases and filler words. Start with a clear statement, then give 1–2 concrete actions using linking words such as 'for example' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: I keep my study space tidy by putting items back in their place after use. For example, I return books to the shelf and put stationery in a drawer so the desk stays clear.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first and support it with a logical reason. Use correct sentence structure and linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because a tidy space reduces stress and helps you relax. For instance, when my room is organised I sleep better and can concentrate more easily.

× I think I think it's important for everyone, not just me to keep things steady.

✓ I think it's important for everyone, not just me, to keep things tidy.

The student used 'steady' (an adjective meaning stable) instead of 'tidy' (the appropriate adjective for cleanliness/organization). Also missing comma after the phrase 'not just me'. Suggestion: use 'tidy' for cleanliness and add commas to separate clauses.

× It can makes our feel relaxed when we want a space to recharge my battery.

✓ It can make us feel relaxed when we want a space to recharge our batteries.

After modal 'can' the base form 'make' should be used, not 'makes' (subject-verb mismatch). 'Our' was incorrectly used before 'feel'; correct pronoun is 'us'. 'My battery' conflicts with 'our/us'—use consistent plural 'our batteries' or singular 'my battery'. Suggestion: use 'can make us feel relaxed' and keep pronouns consistent.

× So I will say yes, I like to keep things steady.

✓ So I would say yes, I like to keep things tidy.

Using 'will say' is awkward in this context; 'would say' is more natural for giving an opinion. Also 'steady' is incorrect as noted before; 'tidy' fits the topic. Suggestion: use 'would say' for opinions and 'tidy' for cleanliness.

× Well I would say no. When I was a child my mom always asked me for umm, keep my room tidy.

✓ Well, I would say no. When I was a child, my mom always asked me to keep my room tidy.

After 'asked' the correct structure is 'asked me to do something' (infinitive), not 'asked me keep'. Also commas needed after introductory phrases. Suggestion: use 'asked me to keep' and add commas after introductory elements.

× But actually I never do that because umm, I am just a child and I just want to umm, play and don't, don't want to uh, clean up everything.

✓ But actually I never did that because I was just a child and I just wanted to play and didn't want to clean up everything.

Describing past habit requires past tense: 'never did', 'was', 'wanted', 'didn't want'. Mixing present tense with past time frame is incorrect. Suggestion: use past tense consistently when talking about childhood.

× I think the method to keep my studies base study is just, MMM, keep it in their place.

✓ I think the method to keep my study area organized is simply to keep everything in its place.

The original sentence has unclear noun phrases and incorrect possessive/pronoun forms: 'studies base study' is ungrammatical, and 'their place' doesn't agree with singular 'study area'. Use 'study area' and 'its place' or 'everything in its place'. Suggestion: simplify phrase to 'study area' and use 'its' for singular or 'their' only for plural.

× To be honest, I just, uh, done everything and just keep it in their place when I'm, uh, do it, done it.

✓ To be honest, I just do everything and then keep it in its place when I finish.

'Done' is the past participle and cannot serve as a main verb without auxiliary; use 'do' for habitual action. 'Keep it in their place' has wrong pronoun; use 'its place' for a singular area or 'their place' only for plural items. 'When I'm do it, done it' is ungrammatical; use 'when I finish'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and 'finish' to indicate completion.

× Do you think that it is necessary to be tidy?

✓ Do you think it is necessary to be tidy?

Removal of the extra 'that' makes the question more natural. This is not strictly an article problem but sentence flow; simplifying to 'Do you think it is necessary to be tidy?' is clearer. Suggestion: omit unnecessary words for natural questions.

× When you know that everything is should be tidy, should be keep in their place, because when you want to relax, you will never you could you will exhaust it because the mess that we we made it.

✓ When you know that everything should be tidy and kept in its place, then when you want to relax you won't feel exhausted because of the mess we made.

Multiple issues: 'is should be' is incorrect—use 'should be'. 'Should be keep' should be 'kept' (past participle) in passive-like structure or 'kept in its place'. 'Their' conflicts with singular 'everything'—use 'its'. Awkward modal sequence 'you will never you could you will exhaust it' unclear; intended meaning is 'you won't feel exhausted'. Use 'because of the mess' not 'because the mess ... made it'. Suggestion: simplify clauses, use 'should be kept', 'its place', and 'you won't feel exhausted because of the mess'.

× So I think that is actually necessary to be tidy.

✓ So I think that it is actually necessary to be tidy.

Missing pronoun 'it' after 'think that' makes sentence sound clipped. Use 'that it is' for grammatical completeness. Suggestion: include 'it' or rephrase 'I think being tidy is actually necessary.'