Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but a bit repetitive. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one specific reason and an example. Use a linking phrase to connect your points and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Keeping things tidy calms me and helps me focus, for example when my desk is organized I can find documents quickly and work more efficiently.

Gợi ý: Good content but some grammatical tense issues and unclear phrasing. Use past tense consistently for past habits, replace vague words with specific actions, and use a linking adverb to show frequency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to. As a child I was quite tidy: every other day I would spend 15–20 minutes putting toys and books away instead of playing on my phone.

Gợi ý: Answer is understandable but contains unclear vocabulary and awkward phrasing. Replace unclear terms (e.g. “organizer rock”) with correct words (e.g. “desk organizer”), use clear sequence words, and give one concrete example of how you organize items.

Ví dụ: I use a desk organizer and labelled folders to separate pens, papers and chargers. For example, I keep pens in one compartment and important documents in a labelled folder, and I always clear my desk at the end of the day.

Gợi ý: Strong content and reasons, but slightly wordy and some awkward phrasing. Start with a direct opinion, use a linking word for the reasons, and give one concise specific benefit or example to support your view.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Being tidy reduces distractions and improves concentration; for instance, when my study area is clutter-free I can concentrate for longer and complete tasks faster.

× Yes, even when I was a child, I am very organized with my things in my room.

✓ Yes, even when I was a child, I was very organized with my things in my room.

The sentence mixes past context ('when I was a child') with a present-tense verb 'am'. Use past tense 'was' to maintain consistent time reference. Suggestion: Keep verb tense consistent with the time frame; use 'was' for past descriptions.

× Every other day or during my free time, instead of playing with my phone, I would hope to tidy up my place or organ.

✓ Every other day or during my free time, instead of playing with my phone, I would tidy up my place or organize.

'Would hope to tidy' is awkward here; 'would tidy' correctly expresses habitual past action. Also 'organ' is incomplete; the correct verb is 'organize'. Suggestion: Use 'would' plus base verb for habitual past actions and use complete verbs (organize).

× At my work or study space, I put an organizer rock and I would organize myself there according to their classification.

✓ At my work or study space, I put an organizer rack and I organize my things there according to their categories.

'Organizer rock' is incorrect — likely 'organizer rack'. 'Would organize myself' is awkward and uses reflexive incorrectly; 'organize my things' is clearer. 'Their classification' is vague; 'their categories' fits better. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'rack', avoid unnecessary reflexive pronouns, and choose clear nouns like 'things' and 'categories'.

× After that, after I use my area, I would clean it.

✓ After I use my area, I clean it.

Mixes present habitual 'clean' with conditional 'would'. For habitual present actions, use simple present 'clean'. Suggestion: Use simple present to describe regular habits: 'I clean it.'

× It's not only about being clean and away from the germs, but it also makes your mind at ease.

✓ It's not only about being clean and keeping germs away, but it also puts your mind at ease.

'Away from the germs' is awkward; 'keeping germs away' is idiomatic. 'Makes your mind at ease' is non-idiomatic; 'puts your mind at ease' is standard. Suggestion: Use idiomatic expressions: 'keep germs away' and 'puts your mind at ease'.

× It gives you the clarity to think outside of the box and to really focus or concentrate into what you're doing.

✓ It gives you the clarity to think outside the box and to really focus or concentrate on what you're doing.

Use 'think outside the box' (no 'of') and 'focus/concentrate on' not 'into'. 'Focus or concentrate' is repetitive; choose one. Suggestion: Use fixed prepositional phrases: 'think outside the box' and 'concentrate on'.