Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like to keep things tidy?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I get really irritated when things are messy, so I always try to keep my belongings neat and organized. For example, I tidy my desk every evening and put things back in their places.
Giám khảo
Did you use to keep your room tidy as a child?
Thí sinh
I don't really remember clearly, but I probably wasn't very tidy when I was a child. Most children don't understand what tidying means, so they leave their things everywhere and sometimes even draw on the walls. Now I'm much neater because I've learned to organize my own things.
Giám khảo
How do you keep your work or study space tidy?
Thí sinh
I feel like the most important thing is keep your things organized and make sure after using you will put them back in their places. That's a really useful and effective way to keep my study space tidy.
Giám khảo
Do you think that it is necessary to be tidy?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. Being tidy is important because it helps maintain personal hygiene and reduces the risk of illness. A clean environment also lowers stress and helps me concentrate better.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Do you like to keep things tidy?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 总体很好，回答自然且直接，但可稍微精简并使用连接词使句子更流畅；增加一两处具体细节（例如具体物品或整理步骤）可以更具说服力。注意不要重复“neat and organized”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I hate clutter, so I tidy my desk every evening and put stationery, books and papers back into labelled drawers. Because I do this consistently, I can always find what I need quickly and it helps me study more efficiently.
Did you use to keep your room tidy as a child?
Điểm: 76.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但有些含糊且冗长。应尽量避免模糊短语（如“probably”过多）並在叙述中加入具体对比细节（例如童年具体习惯 vs 现在的改变）并用连接词增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: Not really. As a child I often left toys and clothes on the floor and rarely put things away. However, now I make a conscious effort to sort items into boxes and hang up clothes, so my room is much tidier than it used to be.
How do you keep your work or study space tidy?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答说明了方法但语法和人称不一致（混用you和my），应改为第一人称并给出具体步骤或工具（例如收纳盒、清洁日程）并使用连接词使陈述更连贯。
Ví dụ: I keep my study space tidy by using labelled storage boxes for stationery and setting a five-minute tidy-up routine after studying. In addition, I clean my desk every Sunday so everything stays organized and dust-free.
Do you think that it is necessary to be tidy?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁有力且内容具体。可以再加入一个短的个人例子或结果来加强说服力，例如某次保持整洁后效率提高的具体表现。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Keeping things tidy reduces dust and bacteria, which helps maintain hygiene, and a clear desk lowers my stress so I can focus. For example, when my desk is tidy I can finish my assignments much faster because I waste less time looking for materials.
Ngữ pháp
× I feel like the most important thing is keep your things organized and make sure after using you will put them back in their places.
✓ I feel like the most important thing is to keep your things organized and to make sure that after using them you put them back in their places.
句子中缺少不定式 to 作表语补足语，因此应为 "is to keep"。此外，"after using you will put" 结构不自然，应在 after 后接宾语（them），并用并列不定式或从句连贯表达："to make sure that after using them you put them back"。总体建议：在系动词后使用不定式作补语；在使用代词时确保有明确宾语；调整词序使句子更自然。
× I don't really remember clearly, but I probably wasn't very tidy when I was a child.
✓ I don't really remember clearly, but I probably wasn't very tidy when I was a child.
原句语法正确，无需修改。该句使用的代词与时态一致，表达清晰。此处仍列出以遵循仅修改列举语法问题的规则。
× For example, I tidy my desk every evening and put things back in their places.
✓ For example, I tidy my desk every evening and put things back in their places.
原句语法正确，动词时态一致，习惯性动作用一般现在时表达得当，因此无需修改。仅列出为符合仅列出符合清单内错误的要求。
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