Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a brief example. Avoid redundant adjectives and word repetition (e.g., 'coordinated organized' and 'easier and simpler').

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Keeping things tidy helps me work more efficiently; for example, when my desk is organized I can find documents quickly and finish tasks faster.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and repetition. Use one clear past-habit statement and a concise reason or brief example. Correct word choice (use 'untidy' instead of 'disorient') and avoid over-explaining.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I always made my bed in the morning and put toys away because a tidy room helped me concentrate on homework.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear sequence using linking words. Reduce fillers ('uh') and tighten phrasing. Mention one or two concrete routines and their benefits.

Ví dụ: I keep my study area tidy by clearing unrelated books first, then placing only the books I need on the desk. This way I stay focused, and I also keep just one glass of water to avoid clutter.

Gợi ý: Finish your sentence and avoid hesitations. Give one clear reason and a short example or consequence. Replace vague phrases like 'reflects our personality' with a specific effect on daily life.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Being tidy is essential because it helps you find things quickly and reduces stress; for instance, I save time each morning when my clothes and documents are neatly arranged.

× Yes, I like keeping things tidy as it helps make coordinated organized tasks easier and simpler and also it reflects our personality.

✓ Yes, I like keeping things tidy, as it helps make coordinated, organized tasks easier and simpler and also reflects our personality.

Multiple issues: missing comma after introductory clause improves readability; 'coordinated organized' needs a comma between coordinate adjectives; 'also it reflects' has redundant subject 'it' after 'also' so remove 'it'. The main grammar type addressed is correct use of -ing form 'keeping' which is fine; corrections focus on punctuation and redundancy to make the sentence grammatically clear. Suggestion: add commas for readability and avoid repeating subjects after conjunctions.

× I used to, uh, make my bed sheet whenever I woke up in the morning.

✓ I used to, uh, make my bed whenever I woke up in the morning.

'Bed sheet' is unnatural here; the correct collocation is 'make my bed'. The tense 'used to' is correct to describe a past habitual action. Addressed as past tense issue to ensure correct past habitual expression and noun usage. Suggestion: use 'make my bed' for natural phrasing.

× Also, I felt disorganized and disoriented when my room was, uh, disorient.

✓ Also, I felt disorganized and disoriented when my room was, uh, untidy.

The speaker attempted to use 'disorient' as an adjective, but 'disorient' is a verb. The correct adjective is 'disorienting' or better here 'untidy'. The original sentence already uses 'disoriented' to describe the speaker, so the room should be described as 'untidy' or 'disordered'. This fixes the adjective usage. Suggestion: choose the correct adjective form or a more appropriate noun/adjective for the room.

× I am currently studying so my table has a lot of books.

✓ I am currently studying, so my table has a lot of books.

Grammar is generally correct but requires a comma before 'so' when linking clauses to improve clarity. Classified as present tense issue because the progressive 'am studying' is correctly used; the correction focuses on punctuation to match tense structure. Suggestion: include comma before coordinating conjunction joining independent clauses.

× I first of all remove all the books and keep it aside and then only take out the books which I uh, need at the moment for studying.

✓ First of all, I remove all the books and put them aside, and then I only take out the books that I need at the moment for studying.

Problems: 'keep it aside' is incorrect pronoun and verb choice; use 'put them aside' to match plural 'books'. Missing comma after introductory phrase; repetition and word order are awkward. This is a sentence structure error. Suggestion: place introductory phrase at start with comma, match pronouns to nouns, and include the subject 'I' in the second clause for clarity.

× I also keep only one glass of water.

✓ I also keep only one glass of water on my table.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but context needs clarity about location; adding 'on my table' completes the idea. Classified under quantifier use because 'only one' is correct but could be placed for emphasis. Suggestion: add context to clarify what 'one glass of water' refers to.

× Yes, I really think it is essential to be tidy as it reflects our personality.

✓ Yes, I really think it is essential to be tidy, as it reflects our personality.

Add comma before 'as' when the clause explains reason to improve flow; otherwise sentence is correct. Marked as sentence structure error because punctuation affects clarity. Suggestion: use comma before explanatory 'as' clause.

× Also it uh, helps us be more organized and.

✓ Also, it helps us be more organized.

The original ends with an incomplete clause 'and.' Remove the trailing conjunction to complete the sentence and add a comma after 'Also' for clarity. This is a sentence structure error due to sentence fragment/incomplete thought. Suggestion: avoid trailing conjunctions and finish the idea or expand it.