Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and filler words, make a clear topic sentence, and add one concise supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Pronunciation and fluency need smoothing to sound more natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to keep things tidy. I try to keep my room organized because when it is messy I feel stressed and uncomfortable. For example, I make my bed and put clothes away every evening so I can relax when I get home.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence (Yes or No), then explain briefly with a clear reason and a specific example. Fix grammar (past tense) and remove fragmented phrases. Keep to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't keep my room tidy as a child. My mother usually tidied it for me after I scattered my toys, and I didn't worry about what others thought back then.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence describing your method, then list two specific actions using linking words (First/Second). Correct word choice and grammar: use present simple and clear phrases like "put items back in their place." Avoid fillers.

Ví dụ: I keep my study space tidy by following two simple rules. First, I avoid buying things I don't need; second, I always put items back in their proper place after using them.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons and a concrete routine example. Use correct grammar (singular/plural agreement) and natural expressions (e.g., "cheer me up"). Remove repetitions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because it makes me feel calm and more productive. For instance, I vacuum and put things away every day as part of my routine, which helps me focus on work.

× Yes, I think so. I tried to keep my room tidy, uh, because when I come back, uh, home, if the room was messy, I feel really depressed and irritated.

✓ Yes, I think so. I try to keep my room tidy because when I come back home, if the room is messy, I feel really depressed and irritated.

The student used 'tried' (past) and mixed past and present tenses incorrectly. The question asks about a habitual preference, so present simple 'I try' and 'the room is messy' are correct. Also 'come back home' should be present simple 'come back home.' Use consistent present tense for habits and repeated actions.

× So kids, uh, always, uh, make a mess, but I try to keep it clean.

✓ So kids always make a mess, but I try to keep it clean.

Minor disfluency with filler words 'uh' removed. The original structure is fine; ensure present simple for habitual actions. No tense change needed.

× How my answer is no I always make a mess because my mom always and tidy my room up after I scattered so and I didn't care and what people think of my.

✓ My answer is no. I always made a mess as a child because my mom always tidied my room after I scattered things, so I didn't care what people thought of my room.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confused. Corrections: use 'made' (past) to describe childhood habit, 'tidied' (past) for the mother's action, 'scattered things' as a clear phrase, and 'didn't care what people thought of my room' to complete the idea. Broken into two sentences improves clarity and grammar.

× I tried to uh, two things to keep my space tidy up and one is uh, do not try to buy uh, things that I really don't need.

✓ I try two things to keep my space tidy. One is not to buy things that I really don't need.

The original mixes past 'tried' with present intention and an ungrammatical infinitive. Use present simple 'I try' for current habits. Use the correct infinitive structure 'not to buy' rather than 'do not try to buy.' Also remove filler words and split into clearer sentences.

× And 2nd is uh, and keep the position where things should be back.

✓ The second is to keep things in their designated places.

Original phrasing is awkward and ungrammatical ('keep the position where things should be back'). Use infinitive 'to keep' + noun phrase 'things in their designated places' for clarity and correctness.

× I clearly think so. The tidy rooms makes me chummy upper and feel comfortable so I try to clean the use the vacuum every day and and that's a kind of my routine.

✓ I definitely think so. Tidy rooms make me cheer up and feel comfortable, so I try to vacuum every day, and that's part of my routine.

Errors: 'The tidy rooms makes' has subject-verb agreement problem; use 'rooms make' (plural subject 'rooms' with plural verb 'make') or change to 'a tidy room makes' for singular. 'Chummy upper' is incorrect vocabulary; replace with 'cheer up.' 'Clean the use the vacuum' is ungrammatical; use 'vacuum' as a verb or 'use the vacuum.' Remove duplicated 'and.' Use 'part of my routine' for natural phrasing.