Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần nói rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và dùng cấu trúc đúng. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'people' -> 'person'), dùng linking words để mạch lạc và giới hạn câu dưới 5 câu. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó đưa lí do/ngữ cảnh cụ thể.

Ví dụ: I am not very tidy most of the time, but I clean my room when it gets too messy. For example, if I notice rubbish on the floor or clutter on my desk, I spend an hour tidying and throwing things away. This helps me feel more relaxed and focused.

Gợi ý: Cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán khi nói về thời thơ ấu và tránh phát âm ừm/à. Trình bày câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về việc bạn đã làm. Sử dụng linking words như 'usually', 'for example' để mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to keep my room tidy as a child. I usually helped my parents by sweeping the floor and putting my toys away. For example, every weekend I would clean my desk and organize my books before going out to play.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'doesn't' -> 'don't', 'documentary' không đúng chỗ) và dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu phương pháp, giải thích ngắn, cho ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và filler như 'uh'.

Ví dụ: I keep my study area tidy by only keeping essential items on my desk and avoiding eating there. I also limit the number of books I have out and store others on a shelf. Additionally, I clean my study space once a week to maintain order.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp trước rồi giải thích lí do một cách lịch sự và chính xác. Tránh từ ngữ lủng củng và sửa lỗi phát âm/ngữ pháp ('rats ex exit' unclear). Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như 'pests', 'insects', 'uncomfortable'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because it helps prevent pests and insects. For instance, a messy room can attract rats or spiders, which makes the environment unhygienic and uncomfortable. Keeping things clean therefore protects health and improves comfort.

× I would like to say I am not a tidy people but when I feel like my room is like uh full of rubbish I will wash my house and I keep it tiny if it too.

✓ I would like to say I am not a tidy person, but when I feel like my room is full of rubbish I will clean my room and keep it tidy.

'People' is plural while the speaker refers to themselves singular, so use 'person'. 'Wash my house' is unnatural for tidying a room; use 'clean my room'. 'Keep it tiny' is incorrect word choice and meaning; 'keep it tidy' is appropriate. Also remove filler words and redundant 'like'. Suggestions: use singular pronouns for one person, choose appropriate verbs (clean), and use 'tidy' to describe neatness.

× As a child, I am a hard working person who usually clean the house and uh, swept the room.

✓ As a child, I was a hardworking person who usually cleaned the house and swept the room.

The sentence refers to past time 'As a child', so verbs should be in past tense: 'am' -> 'was'; 'clean' -> 'cleaned'. 'Hard working' is normally written as 'hardworking'. Suggestions: match tense to time expressions and use past forms for repeated past actions.

× I think in my childhood I don't usually have much work to do, so I often do the housework and help parents with household chores.

✓ I think in my childhood I didn't usually have much work to do, so I often did the housework and helped my parents with household chores.

Childhood is past, so 'don't usually have' should be past 'didn't usually have'; 'do' -> 'did'; 'help parents' -> 'helped my parents' requires past tense and a possessive. Suggestions: ensure past tense consistency and include possessive pronouns when referring to 'parents'.

× I just doesn't eat while I study.

✓ I just don't eat while I study.

Subject 'I' pairs with auxiliary 'do' not 'does'; 'doesn't' is for third person singular. Use 'don't' with I. Suggestion: remember 'doesn't' for he/she/it and 'don't' for I/you/we/they.

× I don't bring so many books or many uh, documentary on my table and just do little.

✓ I don't bring many books or many documentaries to my table and I only do a little at a time.

'So many' is colloquial and redundant with 'many'; 'documentary' should be plural 'documentaries' when countable. Preposition 'on' with 'table' is acceptable but 'to my table' is more natural for bringing items. 'Do little' is vague; 'do a little' or 'do a small amount at a time' is clearer. Suggestions: use correct plural forms and clearer quantifiers and prepositions.

× Also, uh, clean my house usually weekly.

✓ Also, I clean my house usually every week.

Missing subject 'I' and adverb placement: 'usually weekly' is awkward; use 'usually every week' or 'usually weekly' after the verb. Suggestions: include subject and use natural adverb phrases: 'usually every week'.

× That would be because when I live untidy there are rats ex exit in my room and there are so many spider or some insect like that that will make me feel uncomfortable and a little bit disgusting.

✓ That is because when I live untidily there are rats and mice in my room, and there are many spiders and other insects that make me feel uncomfortable and a little disgusted.

Adverb needed: 'live untidy' -> 'live untidily' or 'live in an untidy way'. 'Rats ex exit' is unclear; likely intended 'rats and mice' or 'rats exist'. Use 'spiders' plural. 'That will make me feel' should be present simple for general truth: 'make me feel'. 'Disgusting' describes insects; to describe the speaker's feeling use 'disgusted'. Suggestions: use adverbs for manner, correct plural nouns, choose verbs that match meaning ('exist' not 'exit'), and match adjective/participant to the subject ('disgusted' for person).