Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and accurate: use correct word choice and grammar, give a clear topic sentence then one or two supporting details, and avoid redundancy. For example, replace 'steward' with 'tidy' or 'organized', correct verb forms, and clarify what 'always clean in 24 hours' means. Keep it to maximum 3–4 short sentences and use a linking word if adding detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy keeping things tidy. I'm a very organized person, so I clean my room regularly; in particular, I make my bed every morning. This helps me feel calm and focused throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence variety: use past tense correctly and give a brief contrast between past and present with a linking word (e.g., 'but' or 'however'). Avoid repeating phrases. Be specific about when or why your habits changed.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't keep my room tidy when I was a child. I rarely made my bed because I preferred playing, but now I clean my bedroom regularly because I value order and comfort.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence describing your general approach, then give specific examples using linking words (for example, 'for instance' or 'also'). Correct prepositions and articles, and avoid fragmented sentences. Describe routine actions (e.g., labeling, storage, daily cleaning).

Ví dụ: I keep my study space tidy by having a fixed place for everything. For example, I keep textbooks on a shelf to the right, pens in a holder on the left, and I clear the desk every evening so it's ready for the next day.

Gợi ý: Make a clear, concise opinion statement and support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so'). Correct word choice (e.g., 'necessary', 'depends on', 'neat' or 'organized') and avoid repetition. Give a brief consequence or example to strengthen your point.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being tidy is important because it reduces stress and helps you find things quickly. For instance, when my desk is neat I can study more efficiently and waste less time looking for materials.

× Yes, I like things tidy.

✓ Yes, I like things tidy.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is acceptable though more natural phrasing could be 'Yes, I like to keep things tidy.' This uses the infinitive 'to keep' to show preference for an action.

× I'm a very steward person.

✓ I'm a very tidy/organized person.

The word 'steward' is a noun and not appropriate here. Use the adjective 'tidy' or 'organized' to describe a person. Suggestion: learn common adjective forms to describe people.

× I like to clean my room, especially my bed which is always clean in 24 hours.

✓ I like to clean my room, especially my bed, which I keep clean all the time.

Phrase 'always clean in 24 hours' is unidiomatic. Use 'keep clean all the time' to express continuous state. Also add commas and change structure for clarity.

× No, not at all.

✓ No, not at all.

This response is fine and requires no change.

× When I was child I never keep my bed clean.

✓ When I was a child I never kept my bed clean.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and verb tense error: 'was' places the action in the past so use past tense 'kept' not 'keep.' Also include 'a' before 'child.'

× I don't like when I was child to clean my room or my bed.

✓ I didn't like cleaning my room or my bed when I was a child.

Mixed tenses and word order error. Use past negative 'didn't like' and gerund 'cleaning' to express dislike of the activity in the past. Add article 'a' before 'child.'

× Nowadays I am cleaning my bedroom, my bed.

✓ Nowadays I clean my bedroom and my bed.

Present continuous 'am cleaning' suggests an action happening right now; use simple present 'clean' to express habitual action. Remove redundant comma and simplify.

× I'm a very organized person, so I keep things.

✓ I'm a very organized person, so I keep things tidy.

Sentence is incomplete: 'keep things' needs an object or complement. Add 'tidy' to show how you keep things.

× Into his place like my table is on the left side, there is a books on the right side and there will be a notebook and and there's.

✓ I put things in their places: my table is on the left, books are on the right, and there is usually a notebook too.

Multiple errors: 'Into his place' incorrect preposition and pronoun; use 'in their places' or 'put things in their places.' Article error 'a books' should be 'books' or 'some books.' Unnecessary 'there will be' and repeated 'and.' Use simple present to describe arrangement and correct plural agreement.

× Yes, tidiness is very necessary for all the person but it's depend on you.

✓ Yes, tidiness is very important for everyone, but it depends on you.

Use 'everyone' instead of 'all the person.' 'Necessary' can be replaced with 'important' for naturalness. Subject-verb agreement: 'it depends' not 'it's depend.'

× I am very organized and a needy person so I think it is very necessary to be tidiness and I am also very organized person so I keep things.

✓ I am very organized and somewhat particular, so I think being tidy is important, and I always keep my things in order.

Errors: 'needy person' is not the intended meaning; use 'particular' or 'meticulous.' 'To be tidiness' is wrong form; use gerund 'being tidy.' Also repeat of 'very organized person' is redundant; rephrase for clarity and correct noun/verb forms.