Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在多处语法错误、用词不当和冗余。建议： 1) 开头直接回应问题并给出观点（主题句）。 2) 使用正确的时态和句型，注意主谓一致与名词形式（如 keep/keeping, tidy/tidiness）。 3) 用1–2个具体理由支持观点，使用连接词（because, so, therefore）。 4) 控制长度在3–4句内，避免重复词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because a clean environment helps me feel relaxed and focused. For example, I always make my bed and clear my desk every morning, which makes it easier to start work or study. Therefore, tidiness improves my productivity and mood.

Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且语法错误严重，时态和表达混乱。建议： 1) 明确使用过去时描述童年习惯（I didn’t use to / I used to）。 2) 给出具体原因或变化（why, when/how you changed）。 3) 使用连词（but, however, so）连接对比句。 4) 避免不必要的词汇，保持句子简洁。

Ví dụ: I didn’t use to keep my room tidy when I was a child because I was a bit lazy and preferred playing. However, as I grew older I learned to organise my things, especially when I started studying seriously, so now I keep my room much tidier.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有很多犹豫词，表达不准确。建议： 1) 直接列举具体做法（e.g. organise, file papers, clean desk every day）。 2) 用明确的动词描述动作（put away, sort, wipe）。 3) 使用连接词说明目的或结果（so, therefore）。 4) 避免填充词（uh, umm），保持句子简短有力。

Ví dụ: I keep my study space tidy by putting away books and papers after each session and using trays for stationery. I also clear my desk every evening so it’s ready for the next day, which helps me concentrate better.

Gợi ý: 回答表达含混不清，词汇和句子结构需改进。建议： 1) 直接给出立场并用具体理由支持（e.g. productivity, mental health, responsibility）。 2) 使用恰当词汇替换错误表达（e.g. reflect responsibility, help people feel relaxed）。 3) 给出简短例子或结果来加强论证。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because it reflects responsibility and reduces stress. For instance, when my desk is organised, I can find documents quickly and feel less anxious, so I work more efficiently.

× Yes, I think keeps tidying is very important.

✓ Yes, I think keeping things tidy is very important.

错误类型：动词+ -ing 形式用法（第8类）。原句中使用了 keeps tidying，不符合英语动名词结构。应使用动名词 keeping 表示“保持整洁”这一动作的概念，并且与 things 搭配更自然。建议：动词 think + that 省略后接动名词或不定式时，描述一般事实用动名词 keeping things tidy。

× It can make our relaxed and comfortable.

✓ It can make us relaxed and comfortable.

错误类型：形容词或副词使用不当（第13类）及代词使用错误。原句用 our relaxed 意图表达“让我们感到轻松舒适”，正确应使用宾格代词 us。建议：主语 + make + 宾语 + 形容词结构，宾语用 us。

× I think it is really uncomfortable to make the room very very blessed and doesn't clear.

✓ I think it is really uncomfortable to have a room that is messy and not clean.

错误类型：句子结构错误（第26类）与搭配错误。原句中 blessed 用法不当，doesn't clear 语序和语法错误。应改为 a room that is messy and not clean 或 a very messy and unclean room，以表达“房间很乱且不干净”。建议：用形容词 messy, unclean 或 short relative clause that is ...来修饰 room。

× When I was a child, I don't why I don't like to put things very clear because I'm a little lazy.

✓ When I was a child, I don't know why I didn't like to put things away because I was a little lazy.

错误类型：时态错误（第5类）和动词/代词使用。原句混用现在时和过去时，应保持过去时（when I was a child）。此外 put things very clear 用法不当，常用 put things away 表示“收好”。建议：在叙述过去经历时全部使用过去时态：didn't know, didn't like, was。

× However, when I was a big girl, I also make my sense useful and protect their more convent.

✓ However, when I was older, I also learned to be more responsible and keep my things more organized.

错误类型：句子结构错误（第26类）与词汇搭配错误。原句 big girl 不自然，make my sense useful 和 protect their more convent 无意义或搭配错误。建议：用 older 或 grew up, learned to be more responsible 表示“变得更有责任感”，keep my things organized 表达“整理好我的物品”。

× Uh, when I was fooled the work of study, I also make them together and put the, uh, top on clear.

✓ When I was doing my schoolwork, I would put everything together and keep the top of my desk clear.

错误类型：句子结构错误（第26类）及动词形式错误。原句 fooled the work of study 无意义，应为 doing my schoolwork 或 doing my work. make them together 不自然，意为把东西放在一起可用 put everything together；put the top on clear 也不正确，应为 keep the top of my desk clear。建议：使用进行时或过去习惯用 would + 动词表示过去的习惯。

× This can make my umm, space tally and clear.

✓ This can make my space tidy and clear.

错误类型：量词或词形使用错误（第14类）与拼写错误。原句 space tally 拼写或词形错误，正确形容词为 tidy。建议：使用 tidy 表示整洁，注意拼写。

× I think it is very important to make uh the work or study to be tidy because it can umm in re react the people's uh, responsibility and uh is also make people clear and relax.

✓ I think it is very important to keep work or study areas tidy because it can reflect people's responsibility and also make people feel calm and relaxed.

错误类型：动词+ -ing 形式及词序和词汇搭配错误（第8类/第26类）。原句 make ... to be tidy 用法不自然，应使用 keep ... tidy。in re react 拼写错误，应为 reflect。is also make people clear and relax 语法错误，应为 also make people feel calm and relaxed。建议：使用 keep + noun + tidy，reflect 表示“反映”，make people feel calm and relaxed 更自然。