Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use appropriate pronouns and articles. Add one specific brief example and a linking phrase. Keep to within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I'm an organized person, so I always keep my belongings tidy; for example, I label my folders and put tools back after use. This way I can quickly find anything when I need it.

Gợi ý: Correct tense and pronoun errors and organize ideas with linking words. Use simple, clear sentences and specific examples. Avoid repeating filler words like "for example" multiple times.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother used to ask me to make my bed and put toys away every morning, so I developed the habit of tidying up right after I finished playing. As a result, I still keep my room neat today.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (tenses, articles, plurals) and clarity. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and give a clear sequence of actions in 2–4 sentences. Avoid unrelated or unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I usually tidy my study area at the end of the day because my books tend to get scattered while I work. Therefore, I put all the books back on the shelf and leave only my laptop and tablet on the desk so it's ready for the next day.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words (first, secondly, for example). Fix grammar and complete your final thought. Provide specific, concise reasons (mood, time-saving in emergencies). Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being tidy is important. First, a clean room improves our mood and helps us feel calm. Second, it saves time in emergencies because you can find important items quickly.

× I like to keep my thing tidy so that whenever I need something I can find it on time and I know exactly where the place is.

✓ I like to keep my things tidy so that whenever I need something I can find it on time and I know exactly where it is.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' because the speaker refers to multiple personal items. 'Where the place is' is redundant and awkward; use 'where it is' to refer back to 'something'. Use consistent singular/plural references. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Yes, when I was a child my mom will always ask me to keep my room as tidy as possible.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my mom would always ask me to keep my room as tidy as possible.

The time frame is past ('when I was a child'), so use a past-tense modal 'would' instead of present 'will' to show habitual past actions. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× For example he will she will ask me to do a little chore for example like the folder blanket right after I wake up and also tidy up my toy right after I playing them and also put the boat into where it's belong after I study them.

✓ For example, she would ask me to do small chores, like folding the blanket right after I woke up, tidying up my toys after I played with them, and putting my books back where they belong after I used them.

Pronoun confusion: 'he will she will' should be one pronoun 'she' (mother). Tense consistency: use past 'would' and 'woke up/played' for past habits. 'Folder blanket' incorrect word order and word choice: use 'folding the blanket'. 'Toy' should be plural 'toys'. 'I playing them' should be 'I played with them'. 'Boat' is wrong word; context suggests 'books' or 'boxes'—I used 'books'. 'Where it's belong' should be 'where they belong' matching plural. This fixes pronoun, number, verb form, and word choice errors. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× So it was a very good habit that I have since.

✓ So it was a very good habit that I have had since then.

Tense and aspect: 'have' should be present perfect 'have had' to show a habit started in the past and continuing to the present. Add 'then' for clarity. Also 'since' typically pairs with a point in time; 'since then' is appropriate. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× I will often keep it tidy at the end of the day because when I studying, the books will scattered around and it will become very messy as I like to book a different restaurant book just right beside me so that I can easily wish them to study.

✓ I often tidy it at the end of the day because when I'm studying, the books get scattered around and it becomes very messy since I like to keep different books right beside me so I can easily reach them to study.

Avoid incorrect future 'will' for habitual present; use 'often' and present forms. 'When I studying' needs auxiliary: 'when I'm studying'. 'Will scattered around' should be 'get scattered around' or 'become scattered'. 'Book a different restaurant book' is garbled; corrected to 'keep different books'. 'Wish them to study' is incorrect; intended 'reach them to study'. This fixes tense, verb forms, and word choice. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× So right after my study, I will put all the back all the books back to my bookshelf and only the laptop and the iPad, uh is left in my table.

✓ So right after I finish studying, I put all the books back on my bookshelf, and only my laptop and iPad are left on my table.

Tense consistency: use simple present or habitual past depending on context; 'right after my study' --> 'right after I finish studying' or 'after studying'. Removed duplicate 'all the back all'. Prepositions: use 'on my bookshelf' and 'on my table'. Subject-verb agreement: 'laptop and iPad ... are left' (plural) not 'is left'. Possessive 'my laptop and iPad'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× In my opinion is very necessary to be tidy because for this is actually makes us feel better.

✓ In my opinion, it is very necessary to be tidy because it actually makes us feel better.

Missing subject 'it' after 'In my opinion'. Remove redundant 'for this'. Use 'it' as subject before 'actually makes'. Fixes sentence structure and pronoun reference. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× So for example, when we come back to our room that is tidy, it will automatically make us to have a positive vibe and mood for the rest of the day.

✓ For example, when we come back to a tidy room, it automatically gives us a positive vibe and mood for the rest of the day.

Remove redundant 'so'. Use 'a tidy room' instead of 'our room that is tidy' for natural phrasing. 'Make us to have' is incorrect; use 'gives us' or 'makes us have' but 'gives us' is more natural. Present simple 'automatically gives' fits general truth. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× And secondly is that we can less we can be less panic whenever we need something emergency.

✓ Secondly, we can be less panicked when we need something in an emergency.

'We can less we can be less panic' is ungrammatical; use 'we can be less panicked' or 'we can panic less'. 'Something emergency' needs 'in an emergency' or 'in an urgent situation'. This corrects quantifier/degree expression and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× So for example, if our room is so unclean and untidy, we cannot easily.

✓ For example, if our room is very unclean and untidy, we cannot find things easily.

Sentence was incomplete ('we cannot easily'). Complete the idea with 'find things easily'. Use 'very' instead of 'so' for a formal answer and correct word order. Grammar problem type ID: 26