Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear, relevant and mostly natural. To improve, make the language more concise, correct minor grammar (use 'a perfectionist'), and add one specific example to support your statement. Use a linking phrase to connect reason and result.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am a perfectionist and I like to keep my belongings neat. For example, I clean my desk and put books in order every morning, which helps me concentrate better during studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives specific details, which is good, but grammar and coherence need work. Avoid filler sounds (uh), correct tense and word choice ("I remember" not "I remembered", "almirah" is fine but say 'wardrobe', 'covered' unclear), and combine ideas with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember keeping my room very organized as a child. For instance, I arranged my books according to my class timetable and sorted clothes in my wardrobe from light to dark. I even kept my shoes covered, so my mother was always pleased with my tidiness.

× I am a bit of perfectionist and I like to keep my things neat and well cared for.

✓ I am a bit of a perfectionist and I like to keep my things neat and well cared for.

The noun 'perfectionist' requires an article in this context. English uses 'a' before a singular countable noun when referring to one person with that trait. Add 'a' before 'perfectionist' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct.

× Yes, as a child I remembered I set my books according to my timetable in class, and I set my almirah according to days and colors from light to dark.

✓ Yes, as a child I remember setting my books according to my timetable in class, and I arranged my almirah by day and by color from light to dark.

The original mixes past simple and the verb 'remember' incorrectly. After 'as a child I remember' use the gerund ('remember setting') to describe a past habitual action recalled in the present. Also 'set' is awkward for arranging items; use 'arranged' or 'arrange' and 'almirah' (a cupboard) is better described as 'arranged my almirah by day and by color'. This keeps tense consistent and uses correct verb forms.

× And I set my, uh, shoes, uh, covered as well.

✓ And I kept my shoes covered as well.

The phrase 'set my shoes covered' is ungrammatical. Use 'kept' plus adjective ('covered') to indicate the state of the shoes. 'Kept my shoes covered' correctly conveys that the shoes were kept in a covered state.

× My mother's feels very happy from me for this habit.

✓ My mother feels very happy with me because of this habit.

'Mother's' with apostrophe makes it possessive; here the subject should be 'my mother'. 'Feels very happy from me' is incorrect — English uses 'happy with someone' or 'happy about something', and cause is expressed with 'because of' or 'about'. So use 'my mother feels very happy with me because of this habit' for correct prepositions and structure.