Tidiness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Good direct answer and relevant example. To improve, make the response slightly more concise, correct minor grammar (organised vs organized depending on variety, but 'had teached' later indicates grammar issues), and avoid tense inconsistency—use present simple for habitual actions (e.g., “I usually put them back” instead of “I used to pick them up” if it still happens). Add a linking phrase to connect reason and example (e.g., “because… For instance…”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I am a very tidy person because I feel more comfortable and confident in an organised space. For instance, I share a room with my brother, and when he leaves things scattered, I usually put them back in their places so the room stays neat.

Gợi ý: The answer is relevant and offers reasons, but it has grammar and fluency issues (incorrect tense: 'had teached' → 'taught'; filler words 'uh' reduce fluency). It is slightly repetitive—saying both 'I have a habit' and 'I always kept' is redundant. To improve: correct verb forms, remove fillers, use one clear past statement plus a brief reason, and include a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so') to make the structure logical. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. My parents taught me to be organised from a very young age, so I always kept my room tidy as a child. Because I felt uncomfortable and less productive in a messy space, I developed the habit of cleaning my things regularly.

× Yes, I am a very tidy person because I feel more comfortable and confident in organised space.

✓ Yes, I am a very tidy person because I feel more comfortable and confident in an organised space.

Missing definite/indefinite article before a singular countable noun 'organised space'. Use 'an' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct and natural. Suggestion: include 'an' before 'organised space' when referring to a general single space.

× For example, I share a room with my brother and whenever he scattered things around, I used to pick them up and organize them to their original place.

✓ For example, I share a room with my brother and whenever he scatters things around, I pick them up and organize them to their original places.

Mixed tenses and subject-verb agreement error: 'he scattered' is past while main clause is present 'I share'. Use present simple 'he scatters' to match habitual action. Also 'I used to pick' implies past habit; replace with present simple 'I pick' for current habit. 'Their original place' should be plural 'places' to agree with plural 'things.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent for habitual actions and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, in my childhood, my parents had teached me how to be organized from a very young age, so I have a habit of keeping my surroundings clean because if my surroundings are not clean, I feel very, uh, uncomfortable and uh, less productive.

✓ Yes, in my childhood, my parents taught me how to be organized from a very young age, so I developed a habit of keeping my surroundings clean because if my surroundings are not clean, I feel uncomfortable and less productive.

Incorrect past perfect and wrong past participle: 'had teached' is ungrammatical. The correct past tense of 'teach' is 'taught'. Past simple 'taught' is appropriate here. Also 'have a habit' with past upbringing sounds better as 'developed a habit' to show it began in the past. Remove filler 'uh' and duplicate 'very' before 'uncomfortable' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct past tense 'taught' and adjust verb choice to reflect when the habit started.

× So I always kept my room tidy as a child.

✓ So I always kept my room tidy as a child.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense to describe a childhood habit. No correction necessary. Explanation: 'always kept' correctly expresses a habitual action in the past, matching the context.