Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Well I still go into packs. I go there sometimes because they are peaceful and I can get some fish fish off and I usually work or read a book on weekends.

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Yes, I would like to say more packs in my city because they are draw it attractive and they help people. For example, I could see fixed activity in a new place.

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Well, I would like to visit a nation national park in the future. It's It's supposed to be very beautiful and I can go hiking and take poor for

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且语法正确,但内容较简单,基本是在重复题目。可以补充一个具体活动或感受,让回答更生动;例如说明你小时候常和谁去公园、在那里做什么。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often went to the park with my parents, and we would feed the ducks or play on the swings. I especially enjoyed being outdoors.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否喜欢去公园,并注意 parks 的发音和表达。可以用“get some fresh air”表达去呼吸新鲜空气;“fish fish off”含义不清,建议替换为准确、自然的短语。最后用具体活动补充理由,避免句子之间衔接不清。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I sometimes go to a nearby park because it’s peaceful and I can get some fresh air there. At weekends, I like reading a book or doing a little work outdoors.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 需要清楚表达“希望城市里有更多公园”,可使用“have more parks”或“see more parks”。目前理由和例子中的表达不够清晰;建议具体说明公园能提供什么,例如休闲空间、运动设施或亲近自然的机会,并使用 because、for example 等连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I’d like my city to have more parks. They would give residents more places to relax and exercise, especially in busy neighbourhoods. For example, families could enjoy a picnic or go for a walk close to home.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答的方向合适,但“nation national park”重复,后半句也没有说完整。可以说“a national park”,并补充一项清楚的活动,例如徒步或拍照。注意控制重复,让回答成为完整、自然的句子。

Ví dụ: I’d like to visit a national park in the future. I’ve heard that the scenery is beautiful, and I’d love to go hiking there and take some photos. It would be a nice chance to enjoy nature.

Ngữ pháp

ID 11 — Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Well I still go into packs.

✓ Well, I still go to parks.

表示“去公园”通常用 go to,而不是 go into。go into 表示“进入某个空间内部”,此处不符合表达习惯。

ID 26 — Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes, I would like to say more packs in my city because they are draw it attractive and they help people.

✓ Yes, I would like to say more packs in my city because they are attractive and they help people.

“they are draw it attractive”包含多余且结构不完整的成分,无法构成正确的谓语。删除 draw it 后,they are attractive(它们很有吸引力)结构完整。

ID 22 — Article errors(冠词错误)

× For example, I could see fixed activity in a new place.

✓ For example, I could see a fixed activity in a new place.

activity 是可数名词单数,前面需要限定词。此处补上不定冠词 a。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Attractive— Appealing; Good-looking
Beautiful— Attractive
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
Poor— Poverty-stricken; Substandard; Meager; Unproductive; Deficient in
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