Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add specific supporting details. Correct the grammar in “When I was as a child” to “When I was a child,” use plural nouns such as “parks” and “activities,” and avoid repetition such as “because because.” Also, “breakouts” is not the correct word here; you may mean “outdoor activities” or “playing outdoors.” Use the past tense consistently because you are talking about childhood.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often went to a park with my parents every Sunday. I especially enjoyed playing football and taking part in other outdoor activities because they helped me relax.

Gợi ý: Use the natural expression “go to parks,” not “go into parks,” and say “when I have free time” rather than “leisure time” in this context. The phrase “it still be my refreshing mental health” is unclear; explain that parks help you improve your mental health or refresh your mind. Avoid fillers such as “you know,” and reduce repetition in “every time when I go there.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I still go to parks when I have free time because they help me clear my mind and improve my mental health. I usually feel refreshed after spending some time there.

Gợi ý: Make the main idea grammatically complete: “Parks are very important areas.” The phrase “allow people to see is arter” is unclear, so replace it with a precise idea such as “give people a place to exercise and relax.” Use plural forms and natural collocations, including “spend time there” and “take part in activities.” Avoid the filler “you know.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I’d like to see more parks in my city. They are important because they give residents a place to exercise, relax, and spend time outdoors. More parks would also make the city healthier and more pleasant to live in.

Gợi ý: Give the answer in a more natural form by saying “I’d like to visit Yellowstone National Park.” Avoid repeating “that,” and correct “it seems very peaceful place” to “it seems like a very peaceful place.” Instead of the vague phrase “stories and histories,” mention specific features, such as its wildlife, geysers, and natural scenery. Use “visit” rather than “enter” for a national park.

Ví dụ: Yes, I’d love to visit Yellowstone National Park in the future. It is famous for its geysers, wildlife, and beautiful scenery. I’ve heard that it is a peaceful place, so I’d like to explore it at least once.

× When I was as a child, I always went to park with my parents every Sunday.

✓ When I was a child, I always went to the park with my parents every Sunday.

The phrase 'when I was as a child' is incorrect because 'when I was a child' is the natural expression. The singular countable noun 'park' needs a determiner; 'the park' is appropriate when referring to a familiar or regularly visited place.

× I loved going to park because because I have many activities as football and breakouts that make me feel relaxed.

✓ I loved going to the park because I had many activities, such as playing football, that made me feel relaxed.

The conjunction 'because' is repeated, so one instance should be removed. 'Such as' is used to introduce examples, and the past-tense context requires 'had' and 'made'.

× I loved going to park because because I have many activities as football and breakouts that make me feel relaxed.

✓ I loved going to the park because I had many activities, such as playing football, that made me feel relaxed.

The answer describes childhood experiences, so the past-tense forms 'had' and 'made' are needed instead of the present-tense forms 'have' and 'make'.

× I still go into parks when I have leisure time because I think it still be my refreshing mental health, you know, I always feel refreshed every time when I go there.

✓ I still go to parks when I have free time because I think they are refreshing for my mental health. I always feel refreshed when I go there.

The usual preposition for visiting a park is 'go to', not 'go into'. Also, 'refreshing for my mental health' is the correct prepositional phrase. The original sentence contains two independent clauses joined only by a comma, so separating them improves the sentence structure.

× I still go into parks when I have leisure time because I think it still be my refreshing mental health, you know, I always feel refreshed every time when I go there.

✓ I still go to parks when I have free time because I think they are refreshing for my mental health. I always feel refreshed when I go there.

The present-tense verb 'are' is required after the subject 'they'. The phrase 'it still be' is not a grammatical present-tense structure. Since 'parks' is plural, use 'they are'.

× I still go into parks when I have leisure time because I think it still be my refreshing mental health, you know, I always feel refreshed every time when I go there.

✓ I still go to parks when I have free time because I think they are refreshing for my mental health. I always feel refreshed when I go there.

The expression 'every time when' is redundant. Use either 'every time I go there' or 'when I go there'. The corrected version uses the simpler conjunction 'when'.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because it's very important areas, you know, that allow people to see is arter and relaxed with more activities when they go to that place.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they are very important areas that allow people to see art and relax through various activities.

The subject refers to 'more parks', which is plural, so use 'they are' instead of 'it's'. The plural subject also requires the plural pronoun 'they'. In addition, 'relax' should be parallel with 'see' after 'allow people to'.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because it's very important areas, you know, that allow people to see is arter and relaxed with more activities when they go to that place.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they are very important areas that allow people to see art and relax through various activities.

The plural subject 'parks' must agree with the plural verb 'are'. The structure 'allow people to see ... and relax' also uses two coordinated base-form verbs after 'to'.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because it's very important areas, you know, that allow people to see is arter and relaxed with more activities when they go to that place.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they are very important areas that allow people to see art and relax through various activities.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but it refers to the plural noun 'parks'. Replace it with 'they'. Also, 'that place' is inconsistent with the plural noun 'parks'; the revised sentence avoids this mismatch.

× In the future I want to go to Yellowstone because it has many stories and histories that that very important for our world and it seems very peaceful place that I want to enter there once.

✓ In the future, I want to go to Yellowstone because it has many stories and historical features that are very important to our world. It seems like a very peaceful place that I want to visit someday.

The relative-clause subject 'stories and historical features' is plural, so it requires 'are', not the missing or singular verb in the original sentence. The repeated 'that' should be reduced to one relative marker.

× In the future I want to go to Yellowstone because it has many stories and histories that that very important for our world and it seems very peaceful place that I want to enter there once.

✓ In the future, I want to go to Yellowstone because it has many stories and historical features that are very important to our world. It seems like a very peaceful place that I want to visit someday.

The singular countable noun 'place' needs an article. Use 'a very peaceful place'. The phrase 'seems like a place' is also a natural grammatical structure.

× In the future I want to go to Yellowstone because it has many stories and histories that that very important for our world and it seems very peaceful place that I want to enter there once.

✓ In the future, I want to go to Yellowstone because it has many stories and historical features that are very important to our world. It seems like a very peaceful place that I want to visit someday.

'Enter there' is not natural in this context because 'enter' already means 'go into a place' and is not normally followed by 'there'. Use 'visit Yellowstone' or 'go there' instead.