Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は短く直接的で自然ですが、詳細や具体例が不足しています。より豊かな内容にするために、いつ・どのように行ったか、どんな活動をしたか、なぜ楽しかったかといった具体的な情報を1〜2文で付け加えてください。また文法的に『to the parks』は自然ですが単数形や習慣を表す表現（e.g. “the park”／“parks”）の使い分けに注意しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often went to the park with my parents on weekends, where we would have picnics and feed the ducks. Those visits were fun because I could run around freely and play on the swings.

Gợi ý: 答えは意図が伝わりにくく、語彙や文法の間違い（“pray football”や“pray hootable”など）が多く含まれています。まず正しい単語を使い（play, exerciseなど）、理由を一つに絞ってリンク表現（because, so, and）でつなぎ、具体的な活動（e.g. playing football, jogging）を述べてください。文は3文以内にまとめると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I play football in the park almost every day because it helps me keep fit. I also enjoy watching other people exercise and meeting friends there.

Gợi ý: 主旨は理解できますが、文法と語彙の誤りがあり（“more parks need”→“we need more parks”、“prey”→“play”、文の締めが不完全）、具体的な理由や例が不足しています。明確な理由を1〜2点挙げ（子どもの運動や地域の憩いの場など）、接続詞（because, so, therefore）で構造を整理してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think we need more parks in the city because there are few green spaces now. More parks would give children safe places to play and provide residents with areas to relax and exercise.

Gợi ý: 回答は混乱しており意味が伝わりにくいです（“sub parks”, “foodboard”, “pray this gorge”など）。まず質問は個別の公園名やタイプ（large park, seaside parkなど）で答えるのが良いです。行きたい理由ややりたい活動を具体的に1文で述べ、不要な語を避けて明確に表現してください。

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific park in mind, but I would like to visit a large seaside park in the future so I can try paddleboarding and play football on the grass.

× I often went to the parks with my parents.

✓ I often went to the park with my parents.

The noun 'parks' is plural but context implies the general activity of going to park(s) as a child; English commonly uses 'the park' to refer to the local park or parks as a concept. Use singular 'park' when referring to the idea of going to a park in general. Improve by using 'the park' or 'parks' consistently with context: 'the park' for a general habit, 'parks' if you visited different parks frequently.

× I pray football every day and I like staying there to see other people and I like exercise to pray hootable.

✓ I play football every day, I like staying there to see other people, and I like exercising to practice footwork.

Multiple errors: 'pray' is the wrong verb; 'play' is correct for sports (Grammar problem type 4 modal/verb usage and 8 verb + -ing form for 'exercising'). 'Exercise' as a noun should be the verb 'exercising'. 'Pray hootable' is unintelligible; likely intended 'practice dribbling/footwork' or 'practice football skills'. Use 'play' for sports, use gerund '-ing' after 'like' when used as a verb (like exercising), and choose correct collocations such as 'practice footwork'.

× Yes, I do. I pray football every day and I like staying there to see other people and I like exercise to pray hootable.

✓ Yes, I do. I play football every day, I like staying there to see other people, and I like exercising to practice football skills.

Same as previous but ensuring consistency: 'football' activity uses 'play', and 'exercise' should be 'exercising' to match 'like'. Use correct verb for practicing skills. This fixes singular/plural and verb form issues.

× Yes, I think more parks need in the cities because nowadays there are few parks in the cities so many children can't prey easily and access

✓ Yes, I think cities need more parks because nowadays there are few parks, so many children can't play or access them easily.

Word order and missing verbs: 'more parks need in the cities' is incorrect; correct structure is 'cities need more parks'. 'Prey' is incorrect word choice; intended 'play'. 'Access' requires an object or adverb: 'access them easily'. Fix sentence by ordering subject-verb-object properly and using correct verbs and objects.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future? No, but I can imagine sub parks because I want to play foodboard anywhere. So I need to play pray this gorge and balls

✓ No, but I can imagine small parks because I want to play skateboard anywhere. So I would like to play, practice shooting, and play ball games.

Multiple mistakes: 'sub parks' should be 'small parks' or 'suburban parks'. 'Foodboard' seems to be 'skateboard'. 'Play pray this gorge and balls' is unintelligible; likely 'practice shooting' or 'practice throwing and playing ball games'. Use correct nouns and verbs, and use modal or conditional 'would like to' for future preference. Ensure each activity is expressed with proper verbs: 'play skateboard' is usually 'skateboard' or 'ride a skateboard', and 'play ball games' for balls.