Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and polite, give a clear topic sentence then specific supporting details. Avoid rhetorical questions and grammar errors. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'because' and 'so'). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really. I grew up in a small village where there weren’t any parks nearby, so I didn’t have the chance to visit them. As a result, I spent my childhood playing outdoors in fields rather than in formal parks.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and then add a specific reason using linking words like 'but' or 'however'. Correct verb forms and time expressions (e.g., 'sometimes', 'weekends', 'workdays'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually visit them on weekends because I’m too busy to go during workdays.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and a clear reason. Avoid repetition and fix sentence structure. Use one linking phrase (for example, 'because' or 'so') and be specific about benefits of more parks (e.g., recreation, environment). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation. If there were more parks and I had free time, I would visit them regularly.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and describe a specific park or features you like using correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words such as 'because' and give concrete details (e.g., walking paths, lawns, playgrounds). Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to visit a large urban park near my city that has wide walking paths, grassy lawns and a playground. I want to go there because I can walk around to relax and enjoy the green space.

× No, why would a child? I was born in a village that was no parks nearby so I have no time to go to the park when I was a child.

✓ No, why would I? I was born in a village that had no parks nearby, so I had no time to go to the park when I was a child.

Pronoun error and tense/structure issues: 'why would a child?' should refer to the speaker, so 'why would I?' is correct. 'was no parks nearby' mixes singular/plural and incorrect verb; use 'had no parks nearby'. The time clause 'when I was a child' refers to the past, so 'have no time' should be past 'had no time'. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent with speaker and match verbs to past time frame.

× Yes, sometime I will go to the park at the weekend, but at the work day I have no time to go to the park.

✓ Yes, sometimes I go to the park at the weekend, but on workdays I have no time to go to the park.

Adverb and tense issues: use 'sometimes' (adverb) not 'sometime'. If speaking about habitual actions, use present simple 'I go' not 'I will go'. 'at the work day' is incorrect preposition and form; use 'on workdays'. Keep present simple for routines.

× Yes, I want to you will have a if I if I have the free time, I will I will go to the I will see more park in my city.

✓ Yes, I want there to be more parks. If I have free time, I will visit them and see more parks in my city.

This sentence has multiple structural and conjunction errors: 'I want to you will have a' is meaningless; use 'I want there to be more parks' to express desire for more parks. Use a proper conditional 'If I have free time, I will...'. Remove repeated 'I will'. Use plural 'parks' and appropriate verbs 'visit' or 'see'.

× Yes, I want you. Yes, I will. I will go to the more parks at the future in the future, because I their park has many floors and ground grass and the pip and the and the road. We can we can walking around to to issue to relax my my relax my body.

✓ Yes, I will. In the future, I will go to more parks because those parks have many lawns, paths, and roads. We can walk around to relax our bodies.

Multiple sentence-structure and word-choice errors: 'I want you' is unclear and likely unnecessary. Use 'In the future' for time phrase placement. 'the more parks at the future in the future' is redundant; simplify to 'go to more parks' and 'in the future'. 'their park has many floors and ground grass and the pip and the and the road' contains incorrect words: use 'those parks have many lawns, paths, and roads'. For the activity, use base verb 'walk' after modal 'can' -> 'We can walk around'. Replace 'to issue to relax my my relax my body' with 'to relax our bodies'. Also correct pronoun agreement and remove repetition.