Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like how are you?

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was five years old. I like to go into parks now and like to go in many places.

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Yes, I'd like.

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

No.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Your reply does not directly answer the question clearly and contains an unrelated phrase (“how are you?”). Give a simple, relevant topic sentence about your childhood feelings, then add one specific supporting detail (a memory, activity, or reason). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and climbed trees with my friends, which made weekends really fun.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing because it mixes past and present and lacks clear structure and specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you still like parks, then briefly explain why and give one specific example or frequency. Use a linking phrase if adding a reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks nowadays because they help me relax. For example, I usually walk in the park near my home twice a week to get fresh air and exercise.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: This reply is too short and provides no reason. Expand by stating why you would like more parks and give one specific benefit or suggestion. Use a linking word like 'because' to connect your reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for families and improve air quality. For instance, more small neighbourhood parks would give children safe places to play.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: A single-word answer is insufficient. Even if you have no specific park in mind, explain briefly why and perhaps mention a type of park you might like to visit in the future. Add one supporting detail to make your response natural and informative.

Ví dụ: Not at the moment, but I might visit a botanical garden or a national park in the future to see different plants and wildlife.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect question form / Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I like how are you?

✓ Yes, I did. How about you?

The student responded to a past-tense question about childhood with a present-tense verb and an incorrect embedded question 'how are you'. The original mixes a statement with a question structure, causing sentence structure error (Grammar Problem Type ID 26) and tense mismatch (ID 5). Correction: use 'Yes, I did' to match the past tense of the examiner's question 'Did you like...', and separate the follow-up question as 'How about you?' if the student wants to ask back. Suggestion: answer the question directly using the appropriate past tense form and, if asking a question, use a correct question structure starting with an auxiliary verb ('How about you?' is a concise alternative).

Present tense issue and sentence structure errors

× Yes, when I was five years old. I like to go into parks now and like to go in many places.

✓ Yes, when I was five years old I liked going to parks. Now I like going to parks and visiting many places.

This response has multiple issues: a sentence fragment 'Yes, when I was five years old.' (Grammar Problem Type ID 23), tense inconsistency between past and present (IDs 5 and 6), and awkward verb forms ('go into parks' and 'like to go in many places'). Use past simple 'liked' to refer to childhood, and present simple 'like' for current preferences. Use the gerund 'going' after 'like' for natural expression (related to Verb + -ing, ID 8). Also use 'visiting many places' instead of 'go in many places'. Suggestion: combine clauses into full sentences, keep tenses consistent for each time frame, and use 'going to parks' and 'visiting' for natural collocations.

Modal verb usage

× Yes, I'd like.

✓ Yes, I would.

The examiner asked 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' 'I'd like' is a contraction of 'I would like' and is commonly followed by an object or infinitive (e.g., 'I'd like that' or 'I'd like to see more parks'). As a short answer, 'Yes, I would' is clearer and directly answers the question. This is a modal verb usage issue (Grammar Problem Type ID 4). Suggestion: use the full or complete short response: 'Yes, I would' or 'Yes, I would like that' or 'Yes, I would like to see more parks'.

Sentence structure errors

× No.

✓ No, not really.

The examiner asked 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' A one-word 'No' is grammatically acceptable but sounds abrupt; adding 'not really' or a brief explanation makes the response more natural. This is a sentence structure/pragmatic response issue (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Suggestion: give a short, complete answer such as 'No, not really' or 'No, there aren't any specific parks I want to visit'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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