Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid fillers (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct vague or awkward phrases like "gave me a lot of experience" and "up to date."

Ví dụ: Yes. I enjoyed going to parks with my brothers and sisters when I was a child. For example, we fed ducks and played on the swings, which I loved because they made me feel free and happy. Those memories still make me enjoy parks today.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and organize reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition ("to have work, to do some working"). Be specific about activities and provide a brief reason or example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy parks. I go there to exercise, such as jogging or doing yoga, and sometimes I work outside because the fresh air helps me focus. For instance, I often bring my laptop and sit by a bench to read or write.

Gợi ý: Respond directly and give clear, specific reasons using linking words. Fix repetition and pronunciation mistakes ("packs" → "parks"). Say what kinds of different parks you want and why.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because variety would make them more interesting. For example, I would like some parks with themed gardens and others with dedicated sports areas, so people can try new activities and enjoy different environments.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific, well-formed descriptions. Use linking words to compare or explain why you want to visit those parks. Correct phrasing like "terrains with rails" and "water ponds."

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit parks with varied terrain and hiking trails, as well as parks that have ponds or small lakes. For example, a park with winding trails and a pond would be perfect for hiking and birdwatching, which I enjoy.

× When I was young, I used to go to the parks with my brothers and sisters.

✓ When I was young, I used to go to the park with my brothers and sisters.

Use singular 'the park' when referring to going to a park as a general habitual place; 'parks' implies multiple different parks but context suggests a single common place. Use of singular is more natural here.

× In the park there were, uh, ducks, uh, swings, which I liked so much.

✓ In the park there were ducks and swings, which I liked very much.

Sentence is mostly correct but wording 'which I liked so much' is slightly informal; 'very much' is clearer. Also remove filler 'uh' and use conjunction 'and' to list items for better grammar and flow.

× It gave me a lot of experience as a child and up to date.

✓ It gave me a lot of experience as a child and continues to do so to this day.

Original phrase 'up to date' is incorrect here. Use present perfect simple or present progressive idea: 'continues to do so to this day' correctly links past experience with present relevance.

× I really love going to parks.

✓ I really love going to the park.

To match prior reference to a general habit, use singular 'the park' or if meaning parks in general, 'going to parks' is acceptable. Choose 'the park' for consistency and natural phrasing when talking about visiting parks habitually.

× Yes, I like going to parks now to go do exercise, to have work, to do some working and explore.

✓ Yes, I like going to the park now to exercise, to work, and to explore.

Use base verb forms after 'to' (to exercise, to work, to explore). Remove redundant 'go' and 'do some working'; 'work' suffices. Use singular 'the park' for consistency or 'parks' if plural intended. Also use commas and 'and' to join listed activities.

× Yes, I would like to see more packs different from what uh, from what I've been to to experience new new thing.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks different from the ones I've been to, to experience new things.

Correct 'packs' to 'parks'. Use 'the ones I've been to' for plural reference and 'new things' plural. Remove filler 'uh' and duplicate 'new'. This fixes pluralization and clarity.

× Yes, I would like to see more packs different from what uh, from what I've been to to experience new new thing.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks different from the ones I've been to, to experience new things.

Replace awkward 'different from what...from what I've been to' with 'different from the ones I've been to'. Preposition 'to' after 'been' is correct but structure needed improvement. Also correct typos and repetition.

× Yes, I would like to visit parks with terrains with rails and parks with maybe water ponds in it.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit parks with varied terrain and trails, and parks that have ponds or water features.

'Terrains' is uncountable here; use 'varied terrain' or 'different terrains'. 'Rails' likely meant 'trails'; use 'trails'. 'Water ponds in it' is awkward; use 'ponds' or 'water features'. Reword for natural adjective use and clearer meaning.