Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like.

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like going to park snow.

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Yes.

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Yes.

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答太简短且有语法错误。应先用完整的句子直接回应,然后用一到两句具体细节支撑(如什么时候去、和谁去、做什么活动)。避免只用简单现在时说过去的情况。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my family on weekends to play on the swings and have picnics, which made those days very memorable.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 句子不自然且含糊不清(语法和词汇错误)。应用现在时的完整句子,说明频率或原因,并用连词衔接细节。若想表达在雪地里去公园,要用正确短语并解释为什么。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially in the winter when they are covered in snow. I like walking there once or twice a week because the snowy scenery is very peaceful and refreshing.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答太简短且缺乏支撑细节。应先给出完整立场句,然后解释理由或举例(例如健康、环保、社区活动等),使用连接词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation. For example, having more small neighborhood parks would make it easier for families to spend time outdoors.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答不具体。应该说出具体想去的公园或类型(如大型国家公园或主题公园),并说明原因和计划时间,使用一两句支持细节以使答案更完善。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit a national park in the future, such as Yellowstone, because I want to see the natural landscapes and wildlife. I hope to go there on a holiday next year and spend several days hiking and taking photos.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I like.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题类型(现在时态错误):学生回答的问题是关于过去的经历“Did you like... as a child?”,应使用过去时。学生使用现在时“I like”与提问时态不一致,语义错误。建议:针对过去发生的事情使用过去时(如 did/liked),回答可简短为“Yes, I did.”或“Yes, I liked going to parks.”

Present tense issue

× Yes, I like going to park snow.

✓ Yes, I like going to parks now.

问题类型(现在时态错误)及介词/拼写错误:原句想表达“现在喜欢去公园”,但写成了“park snow”(拼写/词误)。应使用现在时“like”并将名词复数或加冠词,正确为“going to parks now”或“going to the park now”。建议:检查拼写并根据语境使用复数或加定冠词,例如“Yes, I like going to parks now.”或“Yes, I like going to the park now.”

Sentence structure errors

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I would.

问题类型(句子结构错误/省略):问题“Would you like to see more parks in your city?”期望的回答结构为“Would you...?”的回应,简短回答通常为“Yes, I would.”或“Yes, I would like that.”单独回答“Yes.”语法上可理解但不符合礼貌/完整性建议给出完整回答。建议:使用与情态动词呼应的简短答句,如“Yes, I would.”或“Yes, I would like to.”

Sentence structure errors

× Yes.

✓ Yes, there are.

问题类型(句子结构错误):问题“Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?”期待的回答应说明存在与否或具体公园。简短“Yes.”语法上含糊,建议用“There are”或“Yes, there are some parks I want to visit.”以更清楚地回应。建议:根据问题直接说明存在与否,例如“Yes, there are.”或“Yes, I want to visit the central park in the future.”

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