Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Thí sinh
No, because I'm very lazy.
Giám khảo
Do you still like going to parks now?
Thí sinh
No, I did not because I'm very busy on my work.
Giám khảo
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Thí sinh
Yes, because they are very beautiful.
Giám khảo
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Thí sinh
Yeah, maybe not because I'm. I didn't know in my future I do what?
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短且不自然。需要直接回应并给出具体原因或例子,使用更合适的时态和连接词。例如说明当时的习惯、活动或心态,避免只用“lazy”一词。可回答两到三句,清晰有逻辑。
Ví dụ: Not really. When I was a child I rarely went to parks because I preferred staying at home and reading books. Besides, my family didn’t live near any big green spaces, so I usually played indoors.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 时态错误且表达不明确。应使用现在时态或现在完成时来描述现在的情况,并具体说明工作忙的原因和频率,使用连接词提高连贯性。尽量用两到三句来展开。
Ví dụ: Not really. I don’t visit parks often now because my job keeps me at the office late most weekdays. However, I try to go for a walk in the nearby park at weekends when I have time.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简单,需要给出更具体的理由或者影响,例如更多公园带来的好处(休闲、环境、健康),并用连接词衔接观点和细节。保持一到三句,语言自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would improve the city’s air quality and provide safe places for families to relax. In addition, they would encourage people to exercise outdoors and build a stronger community.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 答案混乱且不连贯。考生应直接回答是否有特定公园想去,并给出具体理由或计划。使用完整句子并用连接词(e.g. because, so)组织信息,避免含糊其辞。
Ví dụ: I’m not sure at the moment, but I would like to visit the city botanical garden someday because I’ve heard it has rare plants and a peaceful atmosphere. If I have time next year, I’ll definitely plan a visit.
× No, because I'm very lazy.
✓ No, because I was very lazy.
此处问的是“作为孩子时”(past),学生回答应使用过去时态。原句使用现在时“I'm”与时间点不一致。建议将动词和系动词改为过去时“was”。
× No, I did not because I'm very busy on my work.
✓ No, I did not because I was very busy with my work.
句子中时间背景为过去("Do you still like going to parks now?" 学生用了"did not",但随后又用现在时"I'm"),应保持时态一致使用过去时“was”。此外介词搭配应为“busy with”而不是“on”。建议统一使用过去时并改正介词。
× Yeah, maybe not because I'm. I didn't know in my future I do what?
✓ Maybe not, because I don't know what I will do in the future.
原句断裂且时态混乱。应根据问句“Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?”使用将来时或现在时表达对未来的不确定性。建议重构为完整句子:主语+谓语+宾语,并使用“don't know”表示现在的不确定性,和“will do”表示将来动作。解释:原句缺少谓语和疑问词位置不当,语序需要调整。