Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using linking words. Correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, when I was eight there was a small park near my house where I often played games with my friends and spent weekends with my parents.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer then explain briefly with a clear reason and one specific detail. Use correct tense and natural expressions. Avoid awkward phrases like 'get a wake up' or repetition.

Ví dụ: I still like parks, but I rarely have time to visit them because of my busy work schedule. However, if I get a free weekend, I would definitely go to enjoy the fresh air and the views of lush green trees.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give one or two specific, clearly worded reasons. Use correct noun forms and avoid vague or repetitive phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide green spaces for relaxation. For example, extra parks would give people places to exercise and reduce pollution in crowded areas.

Gợi ý: Be specific and natural: if you don't have a particular park in mind, say so briefly and then add a realistic plan or preference. Avoid awkward phrasing and long conditional clauses.

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific park in mind at the moment, but if I discover a scenic or well-maintained park nearby, I would like to visit it for a relaxing day out. I especially prefer parks with walking paths and ponds.

× Definitely, there are many things which is related from my childhood.

✓ Definitely, there are many things which are related to my childhood.

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural noun 'things' (subject-verb agreement / sentence structure). Also the preposition 'from' is incorrect; use 'to' with 'related'. Suggestion: use 'are related to' for plural subject and correct preposition usage.

× When I was about 8 years old, there was a park near my home and I went there with my friends and my parents and I also enjoyed and played there for about two or.

✓ When I was about eight years old, there was a park near my home, and I went there with my friends and my parents; I also played and enjoyed myself there for about two hours.

The original sentence has an incomplete time expression ('two or') and awkward verb order ('enjoyed and played' better as 'played and enjoyed myself'). Use of 'hours' is needed to complete the duration. Also add punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: complete time expressions and use natural verb order and reflexive pronoun 'myself' with 'enjoyed'.

× Well to be honest I do not have time to go to the park because of my hectic schedules and my work.

✓ Well, to be honest, I do not have time to go to the park because of my hectic schedule and my work.

'Schedules' is plural and awkward here; 'schedule' (singular) is typical when referring to one's overall timetable. Add commas after introductory phrase for clarity. Suggestion: use 'hectic schedule' and punctuate introductory phrases.

× So whenever if I get a chance in my future and I get a wake up, I will definitely go and enjoy the park, views of lush green trees and all.

✓ So whenever I get a chance in the future and wake up early, I will definitely go and enjoy the park and the views of lush green trees.

'Whenever if' is redundant (use 'whenever' or 'if'); 'in my future' should be 'in the future'; 'get a wake up' is incorrect — use 'wake up early' or simply 'wake up'. Also streamline list by adding 'and' appropriately. Suggestion: remove redundancy and use natural phrases like 'in the future' and 'wake up early'.

× There are numerous benefits of having park in a city and I would like to have a lot of park in my city because with the help of park, the environment looks very perfect and it contains all of the things which we do not have a good quality of breath and a high amount of good amount of air.

✓ There are numerous benefits of having parks in a city, and I would like to have many parks in my city because parks improve the environment and provide better air quality.

Use plural 'parks' when referring generally. 'A lot of park' is incorrect; use 'many parks'. 'Quality of breath' is wrong; correct phrase is 'air quality'. The original is wordy and repetitive ('a high amount of good amount of air'). Suggestion: use plural nouns for general references, replace awkward phrases with 'improve the environment' and 'air quality'.

× Well to be honest currently I do not know about any park which I want to go in my future but in future I will be going a park if I get a chance and if I got to know about any park which is suits on my personality.

✓ Well, to be honest, I do not currently know of any park I want to visit in the future, but I will go to a park if I get a chance and if I learn about one that suits my interests.

Use 'know of' not 'know about' for awareness; 'want to go in my future' should be 'want to visit in the future'; 'I will be going a park' is incorrect — use 'I will go to a park'; 'if I got to know' should be 'if I learn about' or 'if I get to know'; 'suits on my personality' is incorrect — use 'suits my interests' or 'suits my personality' without 'on'. Suggestion: correct verb forms, prepositions, and use natural collocations like 'visit', 'learn about', and 'suits my interests'.