Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and precise words (e.g., "parks", not "pubs" if you mean parks). Avoid redundant phrases. Link ideas with simple connectors like "and" or "because."

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I used to go with my friends every weekend because we liked playing football and having picnics. These outings made me feel relaxed and happy.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use correct tense and clearer phrasing. Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting detail. Replace vague phrases ("see everything adhere") with specific actions or feelings, and use linking words like "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: Yes, I still like going to parks now. During holidays I often walk there with friends because strolling among trees helps us relax and improves our mood.

Gợi ý: Be specific about why more parks would help. Use accurate collocations (e.g., "raise the standard of living"), and give one or two concrete benefits. Keep sentences concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation. More parks would improve air quality and raise the standard of living for local residents.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming the park, then add one or two specific reasons for visiting. Use correct names and simple grammar ("I want to go" not "I would like want to go"). Avoid repeating words like "parks" unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Thong Dong Park in Hanoi in the future. I have heard it is very beautiful with lakes and gardens, and I want to explore its walking trails and take photos of the scenery.

× Oh actually, when I was a kid I often went to pubs with my friends. We often spend time going to the parks and holiday which boasts our remote and make ours feel happier.

✓ Oh actually, when I was a kid I often went to parks with my friends. We often spent time visiting parks and going on holidays, which made us feel happier.

Problems: incorrect use of 'pubs' instead of 'parks' (word choice), wrong tense 'spend' should be past 'spent' to match 'went', awkward phrase 'going to the parks and holiday which boasts our remote' is unclear and ungrammatical, and 'make ours feel happier' has wrong pronoun and tense. Correction: use 'parks' consistently, change present to past tense for past habit, rewrite the clause to 'visiting parks and going on holidays' and use 'which made us feel happier' to match past reference and correct pronoun. Suggestions: choose correct nouns, keep consistent past tense, use 'us' not 'ours', and simplify clauses for clarity.

× Yes, to be honest in the holiday I often went to the park with my friends and we often walk around the park and see everything adhere which was our mood and make our feel happier.

✓ Yes, to be honest during the holidays I often went to the park with my friends, and we often walked around the park and saw everything that lifted our mood and made us feel happier.

Problems: mixed tenses ('went' with present 'walk' and 'see'), incorrect preposition 'in the holiday' should be 'during the holidays', 'see everything adhere which was our mood' is ungrammatical and unclear, 'make our feel happier' uses wrong pronoun and tense. Correction: make past tense consistent ('went', 'walked', 'saw'), use 'during the holidays', replace unclear phrase with 'saw everything that lifted our mood', and use 'made us feel happier'. Suggestions: maintain consistent tense within the sentence, use correct prepositions for time, use 'us' not 'our', and replace vague verbs with clearer expressions.

× Oh yes, actually I like to see more parks in my city, which is convenient and modern. It makes people feel more comfortable and precious, raising the life standard.

✓ Oh yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they would make the city more convenient and modern. They would make people feel more comfortable and improve the standard of living.

Problems: tense and mood ('I like to see' is unnatural for a preference about future addition; use 'I would like to see'), vague relative clause 'which is convenient and modern' incorrectly refers to 'city' or 'parks', word choice 'precious' and 'raising the life standard' are incorrect. Correction: express desire with conditional 'would like', clarify that parks would make the city more convenient/modern, replace 'precious' with 'comfortable', and use 'improve the standard of living'. Suggestions: choose appropriate modal/conditional forms for wishes, ensure relative clauses refer to the correct noun, use collocations like 'standard of living'.

× Yes, in Hanoi city, which is the capital of Vietnam, we have Tindong about some parks, which is famous and beautiful parks. I would like want to go in the future to explore and know more about this place.

✓ Yes, in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, there are many famous and beautiful parks such as Tindong. I would like to visit them in the future to explore and learn more about this place.

Problems: redundant or incorrect phrases 'Hanoi city' (use 'Hanoi'), awkward clause 'we have Tindong about some parks', 'which is famous and beautiful parks' has agreement and article issues, 'I would like want to go' combines two modals incorrectly, and 'know more' should be 'learn more'. Correction: simplify to 'in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam', use 'there are many famous and beautiful parks such as Tindong', and use a single correct modal 'I would like to visit' and verb 'learn'. Suggestions: avoid redundant words, use 'there is/are' for existence, don't combine 'would like' with 'want', use correct verb collocations like 'visit' and 'learn'.