Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên, giảm tiếng ngập ngừng và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'close friend' -> 'close friends', 'relike' -> 'relax'). Dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp ngắn gọn, rồi thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động hay người cùng đi). Hạn chế lặp từ và tránh kéo dài quá 5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes. I used to visit the small park near my house regularly. I went there with my family and close friends to play games and relax after school. The park had a pond and many shady trees, which made it a peaceful place to unwind.

Gợi ý: Sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I'm rarely visit' -> 'I rarely visit'), tránh cụm từ không cần thiết như 'to be announced'. Nêu rõ một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích lý do với linking words như 'because' hoặc 'so'. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely visit parks now because I am busy preparing for my university and school exams. As a result, I usually spend my free time studying at home or revising with classmates. However, I hope to visit parks more after my exams are over.

Gợi ý: Sửa ngữ pháp và mạch câu (ví dụ: 'it's creates a special screen' không chính xác). Nêu rõ lợi ích với các ví dụ cụ thể và dùng từ liên kết như 'because' và 'for example'. Tránh câu bị ngắt quãng và hoàn thiện ý cuối cùng.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would improve the city's appearance and provide recreational spaces for residents. For example, new parks could include football fields and playgrounds for children, which would encourage outdoor exercise and community activities.

Gợi ý: Sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I really interested' -> 'I'm really interested in', 'I also can take photograph' -> 'I could take photographs'). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về địa điểm và hoạt động mong muốn. Dùng linking words như 'because' hoặc 'so' để liên kết ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I'm really interested in visiting the national park in [Province name] because it is home to thousands of plant and animal species. I would like to go there to take photographs and learn about different species, and maybe join a guided tour to understand the ecosystem better.

× I used to go to parks near my house for relaxation and uh, uh, exercise with my family members and close friend.

✓ I used to go to parks near my house for relaxation and, uh, exercise with my family members and close friends.

The noun 'friend' refers to more than one person when paired with 'family members', so it needs to be plural 'friends'. Use of plural aligns the pronoun reference and maintains parallel structure. Suggestion: Check whether you mean one friend or multiple; if one, write 'a close friend', if more than one, write 'close friends'.

× It's also a great place to uh, relike and unwind.

✓ It's also a great place to relax and unwind.

The word 'relike' is not a correct verb; the intended verb is 'relax'. Use of correct verb form is needed. Suggestion: Use common verbs like 'relax' when referring to resting and unwinding.

× Well, to be announced, umm, I'm rarely visit a park nowadays because I'm umm, I have to prepare for iris exam and school exam.

✓ Well, um, I rarely visit a park nowadays because I have to prepare for the IELTS exam and school exams.

The verb phrase 'I'm rarely visit' is incorrect: the adverb 'rarely' should modify the verb, which must be in the simple present 'visit' with subject 'I' (I rarely visit). Also 'to be announced' is inappropriate here and should be removed. 'Iris exam' seems to be a mispronunciation of 'IELTS' or similar; make exam names clear and pluralize 'school exams' if more than one. Suggestion: Place adverbs like 'rarely' before the main verb and use correct exam names.

× So I think, uh, I know have more time than before.

✓ So I think, uh, I now have more time than before.

The phrase 'I know have' is incorrect; likely intended 'I now have'. This is an adverb placement/word choice issue. Suggestion: Use 'now' to indicate current time and place it before the main verb: 'I now have'.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city because it's creates a special screen and many and it can develop a football fields and playgrounds for children and.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they create a special scene and can include football fields and playgrounds for children.

Multiple issues: 'I like to see' sounds better as 'I would like to see' for a desire; 'it's creates' mixes pronouns and verb forms—use 'they create' to match plural 'parks'; 'screen' is likely 'scene'; 'it can develop a football fields' has wrong pronoun and pluralization—use 'can include football fields'. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number (parks -> they create) and use correct nouns ('scene') and consistent plurality ('football fields').

× Yeah, I really interested in National Park in Vietnam province, uh, which is home to thousands of species and famous plants.

✓ Yeah, I'm really interested in the national park in [Province Name], Vietnam, which is home to thousands of species and many famous plants.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' for present simple passive feeling: 'I really interested' should be 'I'm really interested'. Also 'National Park in Vietnam province' needs an article and clearer place name; use 'the national park in [Province Name], Vietnam'. Suggestion: Use 'I'm interested in' and include 'the' before a specific park; specify the province name.

× I also can, uh, take photograph and, uh, learn more about many species.

✓ I can also take photographs and learn more about many species.

'Take photograph' is incorrect singular noun use; use plural 'photographs' or the gerund 'take photographs'. Also 'I also can' is less natural than 'I can also'. Suggestion: Use natural word order and pluralize countable nouns when appropriate.