Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct tense and articles, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were social places where I could play with friends and relax with my family. For example, we often had picnics under a large oak tree and played football, which I remember fondly.

Gợi ý: Use consistent tense and avoid repeating the same phrase. Begin with a direct answer, follow with a reason and a specific detail, and use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks in my free time because they offer a peaceful place to relax and catch up with friends. For instance, last weekend I walked around the lake and chatted with a friend while enjoying the scenery.

Gợi ý: Make your reasons clearer and more specific. Avoid filler words like “uh” and finish your sentences. Provide one concrete benefit and a brief example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide green space for residents. For example, a new park could reduce pollution in a busy neighborhood and give children a safe place to play.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Name the park clearly, explain why with specific details, and avoid incorrect words (e.g., 'planets' → 'plants'). Keep it to a few concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Jinda Park because I have heard it is very beautiful and has many rare trees and plants. I am interested in seeing the botanical variety and taking photographs of the landscapes.

× Yes, I I love to go to park as a child 'cause people go there and playing with their friends and family. I love it.

✓ Yes, I loved going to the park as a child because people went there and played with their friends and family. I loved it.

Multiple issues: incorrect preposition 'to park' should be 'to the park' (ID 11). Tense and form: original refers to past habit so use past tense 'loved' and 'going' as noun; 'go there and playing' mixes forms — change to 'went there and played' (IDs 5 and 8). Also remove duplicate 'I'. Suggestion: use 'the park' and keep consistent past tense for childhood habits.

× Yeah, when I get free time, I'm going to park with my friends and family, spending time with them and the view of the park attracts me a lot. So when I get free time, I'm going there.

✓ Yeah, when I get free time, I go to the park with my friends and family, spend time with them, and the view of the park attracts me a lot. So when I get free time, I go there.

Incorrect verb forms: 'I'm going to park' uses present continuous incorrectly for habitual action; use simple present 'I go' (ID 6). Preposition: 'to park' should be 'to the park' (ID 11). 'Spending' should match parallel structure with other verbs: use 'spend' (ID 8). Keep tense consistent for habitual actions.

× Yes, I like to see more park in my city because of that. Uh, parks make our nature beautiful and uh, we can feel the nature in the park cause cities are fully polluted but can.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks make nature more beautiful, and we can feel close to nature in parks, because cities are very polluted.

Several corrections: 'see more park' should be 'see more parks' (pluralization ID 1) and 'I like' is better as 'I would like' for preference (modal/context ID 4 optional). 'Make our nature beautiful' is awkward; use 'make nature more beautiful' (ID 13). 'We can feel the nature in the park' → 'we can feel close to nature in parks' (preposition and article issues ID 11 and 17). Final clause 'but can' is ungrammatical; replace with 'because cities are very polluted' (sentence structure ID 26).

× Yes, I want to go Jinda park in future because of that. I heard that it is a beautiful park. Here is a lot of unknown trees and planets. I and I also feel interested on it.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Jinda Park in the future because I heard that it is a beautiful park. There are a lot of unfamiliar trees and plants. I am also interested in it.

Multiple errors: missing preposition 'to' before place names (ID 11) and missing article 'the' before 'future' ('in the future') (ID 17). Capitalization of proper noun 'Jinda Park' not addressed here but implied. 'Here is a lot of unknown trees and planets' has singular/plural and wrong words: 'There are a lot of unfamiliar trees and plants' fixes plural agreement (ID 1) and wrong word 'planets' to 'plants' (vocabulary). 'I and I also feel interested on it' wrong pronoun order and preposition: use 'I am also interested in it' (pronoun and preposition IDs 12 and 11). Also tense consistency: 'I heard' is past (fine) and 'want to go...in the future' uses present for future plan (ID 7).