Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp (thời quá khứ: "didn't go"), loại bỏ tiếng ờ/ừ không cần thiết, và trả lời trực tiếp hơn bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tần suất, hoạt động bạn làm ở siêu thị) và sử dụng từ liên kết nếu bạn mở rộng ý.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't often go to parks when I was a child. Instead, I usually visited supermarkets and the city center about once a week, because my family liked shopping and there were more activities there for kids.

Gợi ý: Cần dùng thì hiện tại đơn phù hợp và sửa cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn (ví dụ: "I don't often go to parks now"). Giải thích rõ hơn về lý do và thêm liên từ để mạch lạc. Tránh lặp từ "go to parks" nhiều lần.

Ví dụ: I don't often go to parks nowadays because my school schedule and project deadlines keep me very busy. However, I sometimes visit a nearby park on weekends when I need a short break from studying.

Gợi ý: Cần dùng cấu trúc đúng (ví dụ: "I'm not really concerned"), rõ ràng về ý kiến (đồng thời đưa lý do cụ thể vì sao công viên lại quan trọng). Tránh mơ hồ như "if it happens"; sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý: "however", "because". Nên nêu ví dụ cụ thể về lợi ích văn hóa.

Ví dụ: I'm not particularly concerned about the number of parks, but I would welcome more public green spaces. For example, well-designed parks with cultural events or exhibitions can help promote the city's traditions and attract tourists.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: "Yecheng city" not "cities", "fascinating" not "fascinated"). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể (cảnh đẹp, hoạt động) và kế hoạch (khi nào, với ai). Giữ dưới 4-5 câu.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to visit the Cultural Park in Yecheng City because it looks beautiful and fascinating. I especially want to see its traditional performances and bring my family there during the next long holiday.

× Umm, uh, so when I was a kid I didn't often went to parks or other uh. Around enter 10 place because in that time I preferred to go to supermarkets or big city centers and went to school.

✓ Umm, uh, so when I was a kid I didn't often go to parks or other places around my neighborhood because at that time I preferred to go to supermarkets or big city centers and go to school.

The sentence uses 'didn't' plus the past form 'went', which is incorrect. After 'didn't' we use the base form of the verb (do-support for past negative). Also 'around enter 10 place' is unclear and likely means 'places around my neighborhood'; 'in that time' should be 'at that time'. Suggestions: use 'didn't often go', replace unclear phrase with 'places around my neighborhood', and use 'at that time' for correct time expression. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Umm, so I don't really want to go to park now due to the busy schedule that I have to experience in school and even in important projects, so I don't have so much time to go to parks.

✓ Umm, so I don't really want to go to the park now due to the busy schedule I have at school and with important projects, so I don't have much time to go to parks.

Use of article 'the' is required before singular countable noun 'park' when referring to parks in general context; this is also an article error but primarily affects present tense statement. 'Have to experience' is awkward; use 'I have at school' or 'with' projects. 'Don't have so much time' is more natural as 'don't have much time'. Suggestions: add 'the' before 'park', replace 'have to experience' with 'have', and use 'much time'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× MMM, So I don't really concerned about this problem, but if it happens, I want to see more parks which can be developed in my country because it can help increase the popularity of the city's culture.

✓ MMM, so I'm not really concerned about this issue, but if it happens, I would like to see more parks developed in my country because they can help increase the visibility of the city's culture.

'Don't really concerned' is ungrammatical: after 'do' we need the base verb, or use the correct 'I'm not concerned'. 'Problem' can be 'issue'. 'Which can be developed' is wordy; 'parks developed' is more natural. 'It can help increase the popularity of the city's culture' has subject-verb agreement and word choice issues; use 'they can help increase the visibility of the city's culture'. Suggestions: use 'I'm not really concerned', use 'would like' for polite desire, and correct agreement and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Uh, so in the future, I want to go to Cultural Park which is located in Yecheng cities because I find this place so beautiful and fascinated that I want to come there with my family.

✓ Uh, so in the future I want to go to Cultural Park, which is located in Yecheng City, because I find this place so beautiful and fascinating and I want to visit it with my family.

'Yecheng cities' is incorrect; likely 'Yecheng City' (singular). 'Fascinated' is the past participle describing a person, but to describe the place use the adjective 'fascinating'. 'Come there with my family' is awkward; use 'visit it with my family'. Suggestions: use correct place name form, 'fascinating' to describe the place, and 'visit it' for natural collocation. Grammar problem type ID:11