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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Do you like going to parks as a child?

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Do you still like going to parks now?

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答重复了考官的话,未能直接回答问题,也没有提供任何细节。要在回答中先给出明确的观点(是/否或程度),然后用一两句具体细节支持,比如描述一次具体记忆或原因。回答不应超过5句,保持自然与连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my parents and played on the swings and slides, which made me feel very happy. Those visits also helped me make friends in the neighborhood.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 你只是重复了问题,未作回答或展开说明。现在的回答应该直接表明是否仍然喜欢,然后用具体原因支持,例如为了锻炼、放松或带孩子,同时使用连词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and great for exercise. For example, I usually go jogging there twice a week and sometimes read a book on a bench to relax.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答再次只是原话重复,缺乏任何观点或细节。应直接表达态度并给出理由,比如城市缺少绿色空间、对空气和生活品质的影响,最好举例说明你期待哪类公园或设施。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green spaces to improve air quality and offer places for families. For instance, small community parks with playgrounds and seating areas would be very helpful.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你没有回答问题。应明确说出想去的公园或类型,并说明原因和计划,比如想去有特殊景观或活动的公园,或计划与谁一同前往。保持句子简洁并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit the national botanical garden next year because it has rare plants and beautiful walking paths. I plan to go there with my family during the spring when the flowers are in bloom.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Do you like going to parks as a child?

Did you like going to parks as a child?

原句使用了一般现在时“Do you like...”,但问题是询问过去(作为孩子时)的喜好,应该使用一般过去时“Did you like...”。建议:当谈论过去发生的习惯或状态时,用过去时(Did + 主语 + 动词原形)。

Present tense issue

× Do you still like going to parks now?

Do you still like going to parks now?

该句本身语法正确,时态与语境一致(现在仍然喜欢)。无需修改。

Future tense issue

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

该句为礼貌表达的虚拟式/将来意愿(Would you like...),语法正确,与语境相符。无需修改。

Future tense issue

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

该句询问将来的计划,使用现在时(want)搭配时间短语“in the future”是可以接受的,语法无误。无需修改。

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