Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan soruyu yanıtlıyor ancak dilbilgisi hataları, gereksiz tekrarlar ve duygusal ifadenin düzensiz yerleşimi var. Cümleleri daha doğru gramerle ve bağlantı sözcükleriyle düzenleyin; örneğin zaman ifadesi ve neden hoşlandığınızı kısa bir destekleyici detayla ekleyin. Ayrıca gereksiz doldurma seslerini (uh, mm) kaldırın ve maksimum 3-4 kısa cümlede kalın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to the park near my house. I often went there with my childhood friends, where we played football and rode bikes. I don't keep in touch with them now, but I still remember those times fondly.

Gợi ý: Cevap kısa ve karışık; dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlik var. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın, sonra gerekçenizi belirtin. Aile ve kuzenler hakkında konuşurken karşılaştırma yapacaksanız doğru karşılaştırma yapısını kullanın ve bağlantı sözcüğü ekleyin.

Ví dụ: Not really, I only go there occasionally for a short walk. I usually visit parks with my cousins rather than my immediate family because we share similar interests in outdoor activities.

Gợi ý: Cevap anlaşılmaz ve çok kısa; ayrıca telaffuz hatalarına benzeyen yazımlar var ('tea' muhtemelen 'city'). Net ve mantıklı bir görüş ifade edin, gerekçesini belirtin ve mümkünse bir öneri ekleyin. Gereksiz ses çıkarışları ve belirsiz ifadelerden kaçının.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think the city needs many more parks because there are already enough green spaces. However, I would support improving existing parks with better facilities and maintenance.

Gợi ý: Cevap istek ve nedenini belirtiyor ancak tekrar ve abartılı sıfat kullanımı var ('too big, very huge'). Cümle yapısını düzeltin, bağlaç kullanın ve geleceğe yönelik planı netleştirin. Ayrıca 'go Central Park' yerine doğru edat kullanın.

Ví dụ: I would like to visit Central Park in New York because it is very large and offers great running paths. I hope to go there with friends and try different routes for jogging and sightseeing.

× Yes, I liked my favorite park was in near to my house.

✓ Yes, my favorite park was near my house.

The phrase 'in near to' is incorrect. Use the preposition 'near' without 'in' or 'to' to indicate proximity. Also remove the unnecessary 'I liked' before 'my favorite park was' to make the sentence natural. Suggestion: say 'My favorite park was near my house.'

× I went there, uh, with my friends, with my childhood friends.

✓ I went there with my childhood friends.

Repeating 'with my friends, with my childhood friends' is redundant. Use one clear pronoun phrase. 'My childhood friends' is more specific and natural.

× I'm not talking them anymore, but I miss them.

✓ I'm not speaking to them anymore, but I miss them.

'Talking them' is incorrect; the correct verb phrase is 'speak to' or 'talk to'. Also present continuous 'I'm not speaking to them anymore' correctly expresses the ongoing state. Keep 'I miss them' in present simple to state a general feeling.

× Not really. Just for a walk, maybe.

✓ Not really. Maybe only for a walk.

This fragment lacks a clear structure. Reordering to 'Maybe only for a walk' makes it a proper response in present context. It keeps the present simple meaning.

× What's with my family and with my cousins?

✓ What about my family and my cousins?

'What's with' is informal and awkward here. The correct phrase to introduce topics is 'What about'. Also avoid repeating 'with'.

× I prefer my cousins than my family.

✓ I prefer my cousins to my family.

After 'prefer' use 'prefer A to B', not 'prefer A than B'. Change 'than' to 'to' to form the correct comparative structure.

× No, I think my tea don't need more parks.

✓ No, I don't think my town needs more parks.

Several issues: 'tea' appears to be a misspelling of 'town'. 'Don't' should agree with 'I' as 'I don't think' (this part is okay), but the embedded clause requires subject-verb agreement: 'town needs' (singular subject 'town' takes 'needs'). Also 'more parks' is fine. Suggestion: 'No, I don't think my town needs more parks.'

× That's enough for my city.

✓ That's enough for my city.

This sentence is grammatically correct but can be clarified by linking with previous sentence: 'No, I don't think my town needs more parks; that's enough for my city.' No grammatical change needed.

× I like my MMM MMM. I don't know.

✓ I like it, but I'm not sure why.

'MMM MMM' is unclear filler. Replace filler with a clear expression: 'I like it' and 'I don't know' can be combined into 'I'm not sure why' for natural speech. This fixes sentence clarity.

× I want to go Central Park in New York because it's too big, very huge, and I really want to visit there for running.

✓ I want to go to Central Park in New York because it's very big and I really want to run there.

Use 'go to' + place and include the definite article only if needed ('Central Park' needs no article when named). 'Too big, very huge' is redundant and 'too big' implies negative connotation; use 'very big' or 'huge'. 'Visit there for running' is unnatural; say 'run there' or 'go there for running'.

× I also go there with my friends.

✓ I would also go there with my friends.

Context asks about the future ('in the future'); the student should use a future or conditional form. 'I would also go there with my friends' or 'I will also go there with my friends' fits better. Also 'go' alone is present; change to future intent.