Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap doğal fakat dağınık ve tekrarlı. Konu cümlesi açık, ancak dilbilgisi hataları, tekrarlar ve belirsiz ifadeler puan kırdırıyor. Cümleleri sadeleştirip gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın, zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ve bir-iki ayrıntı ekleyin (ör. hangi aktivitelerden hoşlandığınız). Bağlaçlar (for example, because, so) ile destekleyerek daha akıcı olun.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they made me feel joyful and free. For example, I often played on the swings and ran around with my friends, which always made us laugh. I usually persuaded my friends to go with me every weekend.

Gợi ý: Cevap olumlu ve örnek veriyor ancak telaffuz duraklamaları, tekrarlar ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları akıcılığı düşürüyor. Zaman ifadelerini düzgün kullanın (e.g. "a couple of weeks ago"), gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının ve cümleleri 2-3 kısa cümleyle net ifade edin. Bağlaçlarla mantıksal akışı güçlendirin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For example, a couple of weeks ago I went to a park with my friends and neighbours, and I felt very happy and relaxed. I usually play football or walk there to clear my mind.

Gợi ý: Cevap anlaşılır ama dilbilgisi ciddi sorunlu: çoğul/sayı uyumsuzluğu, anlamsal belirsizlik ve tekrarlayan ifadeler var. Neden daha fazla parka ihtiyaç olduğunu açıkça belirtin (ör. sağlık, boş zaman, çocuklar için). Kısa, doğru yapılı cümleler kurun ve bağlaçlarla fikrinizi destekleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because currently there is only one. More parks would give people space to exercise, relax, and for children to play, which would improve everyone's quality of life.

Gợi ý: Cevap belirsiz ve düzensiz; düşünceyi düzgün organize etmeyi öğrenmelisiniz. Soruyu doğrudan cevaplayın (Yes/No + why), ardından bir veya iki spesifik örnek verin. Gereksiz tekrarlar ve takılmalardan kaçının. Spesifik park isimleri veya özellikleri (e.g. lake, playground) ekleyin.

Ví dụ: I haven't thought much about it, but yes, I would like to visit some parks in the future. For example, I'd love to visit Green Park because it has a large lake and beautiful walking paths, and I hope to go there with friends next summer.

× Yeah, I like the going to parks as a child because when I'm going there, when I I'm going to parks, I feel the child and I feel joy.

✓ Yeah, I liked going to parks as a child because when I went there I felt like a child and I felt joy.

The student mixes present and past tenses. The question asks about childhood, so past tense should be used. Use 'liked' (past of 'like') and 'went' (past of 'go'). 'I felt like a child' is the correct idiomatic expression. Suggestion: consistently use past tense when talking about past experiences and avoid mixing with present continuous.

× And always I say to my I say, my friends, we must go, we must go the parks and so.

✓ And I always told my friends, 'We must go to the parks' and so on.

The sentence has article and word order problems. Use 'told my friends' (correct verb and object order) and 'go to the parks' or simply 'go to parks'. 'The parks' is acceptable if referring to specific parks; otherwise omit 'the'. Also use 'and so on' to finish the phrase. Suggestion: practice correct verb-object order and use 'to' after 'go'.

× Yeah, yeah, I, I like going parks now be, for example, one or two weeks ago, uh, I went to park with my friends and my neighbors.

✓ Yeah, I like going to parks now. For example, one or two weeks ago I went to a park with my friends and my neighbors.

Mixes present and past without clear separation. 'Like going to parks now' is present simple; use 'going to parks' with preposition 'to'. For the past event use 'went to a park' (need article 'a'). Suggestion: separate current habits (present tense) from specific past events (past tense) and use appropriate articles and prepositions.

× It's very interesting for me and I felt very happy and, uh, free there.

✓ It was very interesting for me and I felt very happy and free there.

When referring to a past specific visit, use past tense 'was' not 'it's'. 'Interesting for me' is acceptable but 'interesting to me' is more natural. Maintain consistent past tense: 'It was very interesting to me and I felt very happy and free there.' Suggestion: match tense of introductory clause to the event described.

× I use, uh, to play.

✓ I used to play.

The student intends to describe a habitual past action. The correct form is 'used to' plus base verb, not 'use to'. Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habits (e.g., 'I used to play there').

× Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my city, but we have only one parks in my city.

✓ Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my city, but we have only one park in my city.

'One' requires a singular noun: use 'park' not 'parks'. Also repeating 'in my city' is redundant. Suggestion: say 'we have only one park' or 'there is only one park in my city.'

× That's why I want to see more parks and because I think it's very increase our parks in my city and people or.

✓ That's why I want to see more parks, because I think it would greatly increase green spaces in my city and benefit people.

The original is fragmented and unclear. 'It's very increase our parks' is ungrammatical. Use 'would greatly increase green spaces' or 'would increase the number of parks' and complete the idea 'benefit people.' Suggestion: restructure sentences to express cause and effect clearly and use appropriate nouns ('increase' requires an object: 'increase the number of parks' or 'increase green spaces').

× Actually, never I I've thought this situation, but I think I want to go any parks I want to go in the future, for example, the Green Park or another.

✓ Actually, I have never thought about this, but I think I want to go to any parks in the future, for example, Green Park or another one.

Word order and auxiliary use are incorrect. Use 'I have never thought about this' for present perfect negative. 'Go to any parks' requires 'to' and 'another one' for unspecified park. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary position and prepositions: 'I have never thought about this' and 'go to any parks' -> better: 'go to any park' if singular or 'go to parks' for general.

× And actually I think about all I always think about the my.

✓ And actually I always think about all of them.

Pronoun use and word order are incorrect. 'Think about the my' is ungrammatical. Use 'all of them' to refer to multiple parks or ideas. Suggestion: use appropriate object pronouns and correct word order: subject + adverb + verb + object.